As Promised Shenhao, You Have Become a Living Artist?

It's okay, but the protagonist is a bit human. I feel like the protagonist is just for experimentation and observation, but the heroine complements each other very well. I hope it is a single heroine (it should be Liu Liao, but Shen is a bit depressing). It's a good urban novel.

Let me talk about my feeling. My education level is not high. This novel seems a bit too dignified. It seems to be an art piece covered with the work of Shenhao. I want to read it, but I also have the feeling that I can break away at any time. If I wrote it by myself, I think this is a very touching novel, and the author is really educated and elegant. It is really powerful. It is the same as the title of the novel. Don't call it Shenhao. Call it a life writer. What I want to say is that if you have enough food and clothing, you should be a unique life writer. It's okay.

It is not the kind of revengeful consumption of the nouveau riche, nor is it task-based consumption, but the true cultivation and demand based on improving self-feeling. Unexpectedly, it catches my attention better than a large number of stereotyped articles. However, the author's knowledge reserve needs to be improved. "The Wealth of Nations" is mentioned in the economic history of high school history textbooks. The "invisible hand", that is, market regulation, is clearly explained in the economics and politics of junior high schools. It seems relatively immature when it is used as a question to "students" in college. And when it comes to exploring the female protagonist, the protagonist is too unclear, has slow perception, and is obviously abrupt compared to usual. The daily narration is relatively bland (excusable). After all, life is repetitive in the ordinary. However, the protagonist's personality and emotions have changed greatly before and after acquiring the system, and the protagonist's emotions in the follow-up are too bland.

It can be said to be a breath of fresh air in Tomato. The look and feel and writing style are also good, which can be regarded as high-quality writing. But I feel that there are too many places where the sense of professionalism is too strong! Overall, it is worth reading (currently updated with 65 chapters, please do not refer to this comment for the rest) I would like to add a little extra to get a feel for the male protagonist's life and feelings. They are all a bit too high-end and lack the inner emotions of the protagonist. Just like some people commented that the protagonist felt that he was taken away by the system later, which is somewhat reasonable. The inner activities of the protagonist can be increased. And I feel that raising my interest to professional level lacks flavor. This is just my personal suggestion

I personally enjoyed the reading process. This book is only suitable for a small number of people. I hope the author can continue to update it. I have read a book for such a long time, and this is the first time I leave a comment before the book is finished. This book gives me a different feeling, and I am looking forward to the author's reply.

It can be regarded as a rare breath of fresh air among great writers. The angle of entry is very reasonable, and the tasks set by the system are also relatively rational. There is no simple stacking of numbers and blind display of wealth. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future and don't be disappointed. I also hope that the supporting characters can be more brilliant!

It's very beautiful. I don't know how to describe the style of the protagonist of this magnificent novel. If I have to say it, he is like water, and the best is like water.

Kind of interesting hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

It's really good, including some daily stuff. The main character is a bit of a robot. And the heroine, I quite like Liu, who is lively and thoughtful. And the men and women in the male and female dormitories each have their own personalities. Why aren't they fatter? I regret reading it earlier. I hope the author will update more. The following pictures should be Shen and the protagonist communicating. The most important thing, author, please don't be ridiculous. I beg you, author. Look, I really do.

Filled with a light attire

If you live an orderly life, it doesn't matter if you have a heroine or not.

It doesn't look like it's a single heroine anymore, but it's still pretty good [laughs]

It's so good. Why is the rating so low? It's not like the upstart novels I read before, where you spend money to start a harem (not a harem). Other books are too high-profile, but this one I really like the low-key way of pretending to be [cool].

Single girl or harem?

Listen to the thunder in the silent place Now it is no longer a silent thunder, but a large amount of artificiality and third-party perspective.

It's really a lifestyle

It's okay, relatively relaxed modern literature

Alas, there is no pretense to slap in the face, no nouveau riche temperament, even if it is pretentious, it is very fresh and refined. The only thing is that it is too short and it is discovered too early.

Literature that is plain yet true will create ripples in your heart.

The alternative is good, it makes people feel a little brighter, and it has a more descriptive method of seeing.

I really like this type. The main character has a stable core and doesn't have to think about flirting with girls or pretending to be cool every day.

It is highly consistent with the exploration and development of the order in my imagination. I would like to thank the author for the crystallization of his thoughts.

It is different from the previous heroic novels, but a novel that can be savored carefully. But I think the author still needs to improve the protagonist's emotional journey.

Seriously, this is so pretty.

Very good, moisturizes things quietly

Shenzhen City, Guangdong Province.

It's very comfortable to watch, awesome👍🏻

It's quite interesting. Don't be a eunuch.

This book is very stylish

I like. Worth the wait.