30K, No One Told Me This Is Warhammer

The plot arrangement and rhythm are very good, it is a good work. The only fly in the ointment is that with Cloud Hammer, many basic settings are misunderstood, and the Warhammer flavor is not enough. It's more like a story about another world view. [Sinister smile]

This is an ideal book. You have to read it carefully and slowly. Maybe the first few chapters are not so kind and righteous, but what will you say after reading it? Anyway, just read it slowly. Some people may say that the protagonist in the author's works is too simple and too idealistic, but sometimes isn't that ideal also our original ideal?

There are also complex comics with complex compositions, and there is also a club. I think it is a good life, but it is suspected of being a harem, and I retreat at the speed of light.

The writing is very good, but I'm not very fond of the system. After reading the previous paragraph, I understood that this is the story of the protagonist using a king bomb to blow through the war hammer. Shuang Wen is a person, and the status of the system is higher than that of the four gods.

Wow, for every ten comments I clicked on, nine of them were blocked or deleted by the system [face covering]. It seems that the author has been focused on by the system.

Very good very good really good. It's good-looking, but there's too much nonsense and it's a bit watery.

After looking at it, it was okay. The actual sensory level should be about 80 or 9 points. The rating has been lowered, probably because there are a lot of Warhammer brats who are fooling around. After all, the author has written a lot of IPs that can defeat Warhammer, which makes them unhappy.

As for game units, I feel it would be better to have as few mod units as possible and as many original units as possible. Mod units can be designed as new weapons created by scientists summoned in the later stage. Although the original units are relatively weak compared to the mod, with Command and Conquer alone you can at least use the two major systems of Tiberium and Red Alert, as well as the relatively less powerful system of generals. The RTS system also has the well-known StarCraft, Supreme Commander, etc. The first-person design technology also includes Star Wars, Halo, etc., And there are also stars and other options to control civilization. You can even pull Warhammer units in Warhammer [laughs crookedly]. Warhammer also has RTS and FPS [laughter]. Pulling titanium, pulling necrons, pulling 40k space marines, no matter which one, there is a certain amount of fun.

Keep up the good work, don't worry about other people's negative comments, it's really good looking, I look forward to updating it soon.

Yes, this clone is quite well written. If it were really controlled by the Emperor and had a weak emotional cosplay, I think it would be able to mess with the protagonist.

Rising Star, well written! After chapter 350, it becomes a watery interstellar novel.

Faced with no female protagonist to engage in CP @04 Ring Band suggested that my choice can improve the distance, that is, it is still the superhuman power of Chengdu. The previous description is too Chengdu, you are simply the Chengdu Superman himself, come on, Chengdu

Yes, but the story is too fast and the steps are too big. I am afraid that my thoughts will not be able to keep up, and a group of people will appear to ignore the protagonist and become a kind of ideological myth.

Actually, I'd rather see the Alliance fight the Empire. The further you look at it, the more boring and boring it becomes. I originally wanted to wait for the protagonist's army to push to Terra... But forget it.

If you want a revolution, just don't engage in CP [face covering]

Let's look at it this way. The author [smiles] 24 hours a day, 22 hours to update, one hour to formulate an outline, 30 minutes to rest, 20 minutes to eat, and 10 minutes to sleep. I believe the author can do it [smile]

I don't know if the author can read my comment. I think I can write another 40K book based on this system and story style. First, because the galaxy is in chaos and the empire is inefficient, the protagonist's development can be independent of the empire; second, the ultimate goal of 40K is to allow the emperor to stand up as a human being; third, compared to the main storyline of the 30K Emperor's Expedition, there are many stories that can be written in 40K. With the protagonist and the system, plus Aurora and the clones of the four gods who were forced to purify, as well as the people summoned, a good story will be presented. I actually found this book by chance yesterday afternoon, and then I read Chapter 40 directly. I am actually a Yunzui, and I mainly read novels. Many people who write about Warhammer, those who write about the 30K period are too long and have millions of words; those who write about 40 just stop updating after writing.

It's hard to say what's next, but the first one is the best, affirmed by readers who have read it for 10,000 hours What's going on in the back? How do you feel about it? Basically, there's that kind of ambiguous feeling towards the protagonist. It's not a friendship, it's an ambiguity. I want to see passion, not love between children. I, I, I don't want to see a love line, and I don't want to see a meal that needs to be written in three pieces. Sit back and you can learn more about what the emperor is like. The emperor is the future human being. Even if he sacrifices himself, in short, to the emperor, he is a tool, and the people around him are also tools. As long as humans can stand up, they can be sacrificed, but what happens next? I feel that the emperor's little clone has feelings for you. What's wrong with you? (Look at the back, some people are already with the protagonist. The relationship has been established. Angela and the protagonist kissed and the emperor's clone said he liked the protagonist. My brain immediately shut down. To be honest, as long as I write these, there will definitely be emotional scenes. I think you will definitely write them. Depending on the situation, there will definitely be one or two emotional scenes followed by one or two. This is so grand. Don't write emotional scenes and don't use a heroine in front of someone because it feels very awkward. Also, those ideals you mentioned feel weird and torn when paired with these.) These are what I wrote after reading (Okay, what should I say later? After reading the unreasonable ones in the front, I have to read the next few pictures. Don't make any mistakes in advance.

Not bad. I hope there is no heroine. I want to focus on my career! ! !

Only the name is Warhammer, nothing else has anything to do with it. The protagonist's ideal is to lead his men to butterfly swim in the subspace without knowing it.

Author, will there be a group of star scientists in the future [eating melon]

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To get rid of the sense of AI, the word "unconscious" must be banned from the groove's AI. These three broken characters are too many. Also Tap on the desktop The pupils suddenly shrank If there is more to add later,

The writing is very good, but there are too few updates. The author is great, please use the technology of the Ultraman multiverse or something, or make a copy of everything in the Ultraman multiverse and package it for the protagonist [laughing][laughing][laughing] The mysterious four

I discovered that this book has a huge problem, a huge flaw! It's so big that I must report it for criticism immediately! There are too few chapter updates!

I'm not listening very enthusiastically. Old author, tell me you only have a few pictures? More than 40 pictures are not enough. If you don't update me, I will just give you the more necessary ones.

In my opinion, the contents of this book are of a gourmet level.

I saw Transformers in the author's profile, so there's also the Source of Fire, right? Wouldn't it be possible not to fight with the ribs?

Haven't left Xinshou Village for half a day

It's okay, not too poisonous, and pretty good-looking.