We Promised to Be Brothers, but You Want to Be My Taoist Companion?

It looks good, and the writing is good. The early story line is a bit messy, and the male and female protagonists are too widely separated. I felt a little anxious when I read it, but there are no poisonous points. I can see the author's intentions. I give it a high score to support it [blowing kiss]

The author gives himself a pat on the back. The author has seen the opinions given by readers and has already made reference and changes. As for the content of driving a car, the author has learned the lesson and already has the content of driving. He is working hard on both the cultivation of immortality and the description of emotions [smile]. All the character settings in this work are derived from the author's own life portrayal. The author met many gods and men in high school, so some behaviors in the plot that may be incomprehensible to adults are all projected [face covering]. As long as the reader is not satisfied, the author can change the settings [face covering] As for the inner conflicts, struggles and changes of the heroine, to be honest, the heroine is actually written by the author based on his own character, and the author puts himself into the heroine's perspective. If there is a big problem with the character, it is the author's own flaw. Let me tell you another secret: about 80% of the heroine's settings come from the author himself [laughing] The author has been busy for some time, so some places lack some human touch, and it looks a bit old-fashioned. However, the author is an author who knows how to upgrade, so he is currently revising the content on a large scale, just to allow readers to see a satisfactory plot. If there are still people who are dissatisfied with the content, please directly urge the author and the author will listen, unless it is a little far away from the author's original intention [OK]

It's really good-looking. Some people say the plot is a bit confusing, but I think it's very clear. The two lines unfold and come together in more than sixty chapters. The logic is quite clear and the plot is sweet. It is a rare book with great potential. When I read it, I clearly felt that the author wrote it carefully. But as a side note, the author should pay attention to his health. We are both happy and worried about staying up late to write a novel, but there is nothing we can do about it, life is already very busy. I can only say that you should pay attention to your health. You can write less and sleep more to maintain sufficient energy. Only when you have enough energy can you be more efficient [blowing kiss] Come and watch, it's fun! Wonderful sight! You can see me laughing [laughing]

I know that the author wants to write a very long work. I like this kind of work very much and I read it very seriously. I sincerely hope that the author will continue to write it. Come on, author! As long as the author can write for a day, I will cheer for the author. I wish the author to be happy every day. I like your works very much. Come on!

It looks good, and the dual-tracking is not as boring as expected. I originally just planned to try it and see how it goes, but it turned out to be very good. Reading a marriage-changing novel should generally be about the sweet interaction between the male and female protagonists and the psychological process of the female protagonist's sexual intercourse. In the previous book, there was little interaction because they were separated, but it was unexpectedly good. Even though they were temporarily separated, there were some jokes and some driving [laughing] and the author's self-entertainment [laughing]. It's not boring at all. As for the psychological process of female infatuation, it doesn't focus on describing it. It's probably because he was led away by his best friend and he slowly started to face himself as a woman. Instead, there are more psychological descriptions of the male protagonist, who always emphasizes that he is a brother. To be honest, the role of Dongfang Xuelian seems to have too many roles. Although it is a group portrait, it is also divided into priorities. This character is talking about the system if not other things. In the first chapter, it is said that the system does not send things without brains and does not have tasks. Her system has tasks. (Is it just for the male protagonist? [Smile]). Later, she can directly use points (where are there so many) to exchange for 500 years of training time in the "Static Space Copy"? To reach heaven and become a god in one step is really a bit unbelievable. When I first read it and remembered what the author said in the first chapter, I felt like my left and right brains were fighting each other. Then I thought about the pain of missing each other for 500 years and facing the difficulties on the road of cultivation alone. It was considered a lot of effort, and it was justified. It just didn't focus on describing how difficult it was. I couldn't understand how difficult it was. In terms of senses, it was just light and unparalleled [face covering] Of course, cats are also quite cute [laughing evilly] The only thing that I think has a loophole is when the male protagonist saves the female protagonist. It's old-fashioned and forced. There's nothing wrong with the old-fashioned style. After all, it's popular [laughing] As for the forced part, Shui Qianchou said that he asked Maomao to keep an eye on the killer. But in the end, he waited until the male protagonist tried his best to kill the killer. He used the excuse of getting lost to tell the truth... Although the male protagonist was quite miserable and almost did it several times, he was transforming in all aspects and slowly getting stronger. As for the heroine's line, honestly the writing is really good [I learned it], especially the one who drew it. Although most of the male protagonists are depicted in the previous chapters, the female protagonist's line is also very, very good [I learned it] While reading, I can tell that the author really put his heart into writing this book, constantly revising and improving his book, and the logic is clear and non-toxic, and he also occasionally mixes in some great truths? [Laughing evilly] The author's own understanding and so on, it's very novel and interesting. Of course, the most important thing is that the author's driving skills are very good [laughing evilly] and his driving skills are first-rate [laughing evilly]. Personally, I think my evaluation is quite fair. It's very interesting and I recommend watching it [Learned]

Yes, although it is a bit messy, it is quite interesting to pay tribute to the legendary anti-stress Wang Laoye. After all, the pressure is all on his side. Do you think it can be the same with the big sister who draws Shi Hua? Don't worry about the pressure.

It's so good-looking, but the title of the book is a bit [laughing][laughing]

Come on, the book is good, the subject matter is good, and the lighter version is good. I will continue to follow it.

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it.

I find it quite interesting. When will the male and female protagonists recognize each other?

It's a very interesting book, everyone should read it

The author's writing is really good. I will go and see the development and mental changes of the male and female protagonists. I have decided that I will give you Xiao Ran's beloved concubine.

Personally, I think it's okay, and I can use it at a moderately high speed later [I learned]

A bit confusing, but not conflicting.

The unlocking part is very exciting[lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

In fact, if you look carefully, you will find that it is very good

The artistic conception of life and death is very high-definition, and I enjoyed watching it.

The setting is more exciting than other works of the same type, so go for the author!

This novel has some potential. It would be better if the plot of the heroine was described in more detail and more scenes were given. Come on, keep writing [Blow Kiss]

The plot at the beginning does seem confusing, but the more you look at the back, the more you feel that the author has entered the state. The description of the two people's hearts is also very delicate and comfortable, without much of the taste of industrial saccharin [Like]

The writing is okay, but I have read too many novels, and I always feel that this kind of subject matter has no characteristics and there is nothing pornographic about it.

Raising books is finished [crying]

Very good, very beautiful

Come on, author, come on

I am a mechanical major, and I just like to learn how to open locks [full]

It's beautiful👀👀👀, thank you so much to the author

Very good, the baby loves to eat it

To be honest, it is not recommended for newbies to write novels from multiple perspectives, especially those with weird settings. Just keep it simple and clear.