Inuyashabeing Haunted by a Dank Half-Demon

Very well written! ! The writing style is very mature, and there is no OOC at all. The setting of the heroine is also very clever. It is really necessary to leave an impression during the Ghost Spider period to conquer a dastardly villain like Naraku. What everyone here likes to see is not a healthy relationship. The pulling feeling between the heroine and Naraku is really invincible and delicious. This is the feeling that I know he is hopeless, cruel, sinister and damned, but I still love him! ! It perfectly restores the original Naraku, and also enriches some of his inner thoughts. This sense of insidiousness, cruelty and treachery, a sense of inferiority, stubbornness and control, cruelty, coldness and inhumanity are really special and delicious! The teacher is good at writing! ! I particularly like it, and the emotional entanglement between Quan Juwei and the three of them has also been resolved, turning it into a very comfortable situation. Teacher, you did a good job! In fact, when I was watching it, I always felt that Platycodon and the heroine were actually just lightly scented with lily, and my heart was full of fragrance. Can anyone understand? I really couldn't bear to take a bite () It was so delicious, but it was also a bit regretful that the heroine knew about the future development but did not tell her about it. At that time, it was also It's a bit frustrating, but as an outsider who suddenly traveled through time, it's understandable that the heroine doesn't want to confess her biggest secret. The fear of being treated as an alien is understandable, but it's a pity that even though she knew it, she still couldn't stop their fate. I hope the heroine can tame this Naraku! Dream about a logical he ah ah ah (pairing fingers)

He little sweet article. The heroine Yaoguang is kind, perseverant and soft-hearted. Even though she was later seduced by Naraku, she never betrayed her true heart. Her love and heart-wrenching love are true (she feels like the original owner of Amos' Bow). The image of Naraku is very well portrayed by the author. He is 90% dank and fits the original character without being OOC at all. True Confrontation Road Couple, Oscar-winning Wild Best Actor and Best Actress The King of Jealousy and His Tangled Moon A theoretical and technical graduate and her growth-oriented husband

A brief review Let's talk about our protagonist first. The heroine and Naraku are both complicated people, especially Naraku! In my opinion, the love between two people is complicated and intoxicating. The characters have no OOC. Naraku is "purely bad" from beginning to end (bad here means that his character is not an upright and good person). He is like that The deep sea is charming but absolutely sinister. The heroine is like a shining candle, warm but not fragile and incompetent. The two are a perfect match for each other. Both are scheming and calculating, but in this entanglement of love and hate, they fall in love with each other. In a way, they are the same kind, but people from other worlds know the ending plot, while heretics are hated and despised, and even the source of their birth is negativity. Two people, one knows his own specialness, but cannot be fully accepted and accepted by others because of this specialness, and the other is evil and cruel and cannot be loved by others and does not understand love. Both people are special, so they are a perfect match. As a reader, when did I feel that their souls fit together? It was not the entanglement of truth and falsehood and love and hate in Wuxiang City, but the moment when the heroine was revealed by Naraku to see through the soul of another world. I suddenly understood that there is no escape. Fate is both a good fortune and a bad fate. As Kagome and a bitch, to be honest, I don't hate Kikyo, but I have no feelings for it, so what the author wrote made me feel, huh? This ending is also very good, but the main reason is that Gouzi remembers everything and Platycodon is resurrected, which is not quite the same as the original work hahaha. But this is also the charm of time travel and fandom. There can be countless world lines, and each one has its own reasons and consequences. Of course, in the original novel, Baby Kagome is still my favorite hahaha. Like her very much. As for dogs, I also love naughty puppies, so to speak, hahaha. I think the character of Naraku is complicated, contradictory and harmonious, making people feel distressed and hateful. I even think that he may never understand what love is, so this fanfic perfectly writes Naraku's alternative ending, which is not surprising and even feels reasonable and deserved. I watched it in InuYasha's elementary school, and it's still a favorite, and it's still good to watch. Forget about the second part. Personally I don't think it looks good. The length of the comment is less than 30 minutes because offline reading does not record the length. I watched it all night last night and cried to death 😭.

Look, it looks good, the writing is good, and the plot is fast. I thought it would break down, but the more I watched it, the more I enjoyed it. It's so refreshing, so refreshing. Come and watch it together. I'm a little afraid that because there are too few people, the author won't let us go. Wuwuwuwu

The writing is superb and the characters are well-matched. As a 10-year-old bookworm, this is one of the best books I have ever read. I just need more updates. I saw this in one go and finished reading it. I just found this novel today. It's the chapter where Yaoguang and Naraku died together.

The character image is close to the original work, Naraku is original, he slices himself into pieces, and imagines to be a love rival. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are like a confrontational couple. The female protagonist: I know you are cunning, despicable, shameless, nasty, and dark, but I still fall in love with you without hesitation, but this does not hinder my determination to kill you. Male protagonist: Does she love me? Does she love me who is disguised as a sick, sinister human being? Ghost spider me? Or am I real and ugly, with a dirty soul? It doesn't matter! In order to prevent her from escaping from my grasp, I have to get rid of all these useless emotions. She can only look at me. The male protagonist who is jealous every day VS the female protagonist who quietly watches the male protagonist's performance and cooperates with his performance. The food cooked by the author is really delicious. Although she calls herself the heroine's stepmother, it still ends happily in the end. It's so good. She's older and can't see her. Karma reincarnation, everything is just right. The heroine's initial time travel was guided step by step by Naraku who later came to her world. The psychology of the characters is really well written and restored. I look forward to other works. The writing is also very good.

The reason why the rating is not high is because the number of chapters has not exceeded 100, there are few reviewers, and the book has not been open for a long time. But there are very few novels that I like anymore. I originally just saw the Inuyasha fanfic, so I jumped into it when I was curious. As a result, I had more than ten bookmarks in just a few dozen chapters (which means I like it very much). I like the character of the heroine (Yao Guang). She has a persevering, methodical, bright and sacred feeling (which is also suitable for the heroine's identity). She is not sloppy when facing off with Naraku (the male protagonist), and knows how to act according to the situation and attract attention. What I like the most is that in many novels, if the heroine is caught running away by the hero, she will freeze or be unable to move, but the girl will just run away without saying anything. My breasts became unblocked when I saw it. He also knows what he should do most at the moment, and he can tell the difference even if he falls in love with the male protagonist. Instead of starting to fall in love in the second half. Then I read it chapter by chapter, and I liked it even more. It's really good. I rarely review it. I've only reviewed two Tomato novels so far, and this is the third one. I hope you will continue to write well in the future! Just don't end it hastily! ! !

The writing is not awkward, the plot is well-polished, the characters are three-dimensional, the original characters are not OOC, and the emotional descriptions are delicate. It does not blindly follow the original series, it has its own narrative rhythm, and the "cause and effect" in the whole story is really mysterious. Different conditions will lead to destiny. Things and the development of the plot are inevitable, not coincidental, the rhythm is well grasped, and the inner portrayal of the characters is also very exciting. I don't feel like a novice author anymore. This writing is really wonderful [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] A book of thin chaff, don't come and spray the mountain pig [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The writing is impeccable~ I didn't write Naraku in an overly OOC way. The characters are written very delicately. The conflict between the male and female protagonists is very exciting. It's very immersive to read. It's so beautiful~ I love it~ [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The early stage was simply a micro-group portrait. Well done to everyone! ! The storyline between Yao Guang and Naraku was so tear-jerking. The two little bitter gourds went from falling in love to each other to really opening up their hearts. The awkward and possessive Naraku must be paired with the proactive Yao Guang ㅠㅠ. There is really nothing to say about Naraku's analysis. It's a tear-jerking book. Looking forward to the sequel [almost crying]

It's great. It's the most consistent fanfic I've ever read that is in line with the character of the original Naraku. Personally, I don't think it's OOC at all. After reading this, I can't stand the others at all. Even the famous Spider's Silk, I personally think it's not as good as this. This Naraku's greedy, sinister, paranoid, and controlling inhumanity is more original. In Spider's Silk, I feel that the villain's image has been weakened a bit, and it's a bit OOC. The heroine is also great. The plot design has twists and turns, which is very exciting. All kinds of foreshadowing are also well handled. Just a little short

Personally, I think the writing is very good, and it vividly displays Naraku's dank male ghost flavor and incomparable scheming and calculation. In "Inuyasha", everyone has a seemingly perfect ending. In this book, there is finally someone who transcends time and space, loves Naraku without reservation, and understands him, which is very suitable! Highly recommended!

The writing style is very good, the characters are not broken at all, the author's writing skills are very good, I highly recommend [like] [like] The author's writing style is mature, the writing style is smooth, and the plot processing is reasonable. It can be seen that the author has certain experience and relatively mature thoughts. It can be understood in many points [smirking] that the heroine likes Naraku but is entangled with Naraku's birth. It is understandable. After all, he is the big villain in the original work. His shape is uncontrollable, and I am not sure whether he can make changes for himself. Naraku was born in desire and greed, and this is the background. The impact and pressure are definitely different when watching through the screen and in reality. She is punching hard online, but submissive offline [laughing evilly], so the heroine's reaction is also reasonable. After all, she grew up in a modern and peaceful society, and she cannot be so cruel and indifferent to life. If the author writes another heroine with a happy little sun style, maybe everyone will be able to get it [laughing], after all, love and redemption can touch people's hearts more [cool]

I really like this book. Just like the author who commented before, he portrayed Naraku very well with his character. Mainly, he did not forcefully cater to the current Inuyasha fan novels. He added words like Sesshomaru sama with Japanese pronunciation. The author keeps up the good work [Like][Like][Like]

It's super, super good-looking, and the extreme tug-and-pull between the heroine and Naraku is so addictive. The blood of those who watch it is boiling. Make me horny! Also update soon ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! !

Suddenly I realized that I didn't give it a rating. It must be 10 out of 10. It's delicious. It's very delicious. Adults are also very nice. I can satisfy any requirements. It's a very good book. It's very good to read. It's delicious.

It is definitely top-notch among foreign persimmons. The emotional line between the heroine and Naraku was well controlled and did not make me feel too abrupt. The writing is also excellent. It has been a long time since I felt the feeling of a knife in my throat.

The writing is quite good, but it tortures the body and mind, making it very tiring to watch. I just want to know if Naraku and the heroine have a sweet cookie that treats each other sincerely in the end? Or do you talk about love and end up killing the other person?

It is very good. There is not much main plot, but the emotional scenes are very delicate and there is no OOC at all. Naraku is really Naraku and Yaoguang is very good. She has her own bottom line and ideas and her own persistence. She is not a silly and sweet heroine, she is very smart. Among the Naraku fanfics I have read on various platforms, this one is truly among the best, unique, and stunning.

The setting of the Möbius strip is reasonable and warm, and I am indeed a true fan. The characters have not been changed. The plot is logical and not cumbersome. The fact that the story between the two people is not fully promoted from the perspective of the main plot shows that the author is really attentive and there is no watery plot. Audiences who like the character of Naraku, it is worth reading this book, it is really nice!

It's very interesting. Come on, the author. I'm waiting for you.

Super super pretty! I feel that Naraku is not OOC, which is really rare. The author, a big dank man, wrote it skillfully [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Very good-looking and very satisfying. There are very few genres that I like. This is one of the few that I like. It makes me excited all over. But there are too few of them and I can't get enough of them.

The author's writing style is so emotional, I kept crying, the conflicting feeling seemed to be balanced😭

Haha, I really like Naraku's dank male ghost smell. In the anime, Naraku died alone. In the novel, I hope there are other people with Naraku. This book is really great. It's a rare Naraku fan who keeps money for himself.

It's very beautiful. The emotional line between the heroine and Naraku is very delicate. The feeling of pulling back and forth and Naraku's wetness are all delicious. Just read this article and you won't say a word after reading it. It's sweet and then it's cruel. After it's cruel, it's very sweet [Sending Hearts]

Overall, it was okay. The first half was a bit of a no-brainer, but the second half was okay, especially the part where the heroine died. It was very touching. The ending and extras were also pretty good. The only regret was that Sesshomaru was not taken by the heroine. Pity

A lot of comments are what I want to say. The emotional development, plot adaptation, characters, and writing descriptions are all great! The confession about the moonlight is the climax of the plot and full of emotions! Very impressed! [Cry]

It's really good-looking, and I feel like it captures the recognizable villain vibe, especially the one where they are entangled and pulling each other. The key is that it will still be he in the future! Most fanfics will appear OOC later in the writing, but this article has relatively few OOC, although it is not impossible to say that it doesn't have it, but the villainous flavor is really good. It feels completely unreadable. Most of the authors write similar articles like this. It's really hard to find meal replacements! ! !

The writing really impressed me. This kind of wet and paranoid feeling. Although it is not a strong woman, the plot development of this setting makes me happy to watch.