The Beginning of Mortal Cultivation and Han Li's Marriage Contract

The writing is very good and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet. However, all of this is like a castle in the air. It is based on the moral feelings of the male protagonist Han Li. The female protagonist has no restrictions on the male protagonist. Once the male protagonist changes her heart, the female protagonist will end up extremely sad. Even if the author cannot give the female protagonist a countermeasure due to the character design of the male protagonist Han Li, he can still add a setting in the contract between the male and female protagonists that over time both parties will regard each other as the most important existence in their lives. This can provide the most powerful guarantee for the emotions of the male and female protagonists.

It looks good, I hope it doesn't end later. The male and female protagonists get along very well, but why do they have no children despite being in love every day? Another infertility protagonist? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying] You can write that you deliberately don't want children, but don't blame the male and female protagonists for not being able to have children. The author's writing is very good. I hope that if the ratings keep up, many people will see it, and then the author will be more motivated to write. Don't stop updating.

The writing is very good. Old Demon Han is indeed very vigilant, but the contract can solve the problem very well. After all, who can refuse the person who can share life and death with him?

The rating just came out and it's a bit low. Don't miss this book because of this reason. [Pause your face] I have read both the original novel and the anime. Both the writing and the plot setting of this book are very good. It is the top 2 mortal fanfic I have read so far. You can read it with confidence. Han Li here is more "human": he has a lover whom he can trust with all his heart. Although he is cautious as always, he is also tender. Apart from the key plot points, it is very enjoyable along the way. The author does not blindly follow the plot and adds a lot of his own settings. The side story is also very nice, but it's a pity that the author didn't intend to write a chapter on the spiritual world.

Super perfect score! The novel about the original heroine and Han Li's quest to achieve immortality is really good to read~ In addition to this book, the author also has another novel about infrastructure construction with the heroine Han Li, which is also very good to read! 🙏🏻Make a wish: Please open another book by Han Li on cultivating immortals. The writing really touched my heart. The gentle, smart and cautious Han Li is full of humanness. I love him so much [shy]

The author has not read the original work, and indeed some of the plots are not rigorous, just like a wild man who did not come from a professional background. But maybe that is why it lacks some traditional routines and has a little more aura. The author's own thinking and opinions are integrated into the book, and he has found his own path. A blessing in disguise is a blessing in disguise. Compared with the plot of the original work, the story written by the author is indeed a bit greener, but the shortcomings are not hidden, and it has its own style. For me, who likes mortals very much, thank the author for bringing me a different experience. [Love]

The entire outline is also very well written, our old devil Han is blessed... To be honest, it is really well written, especially the heroine's appearance when she transforms, it is super beautiful and super cute [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] and the content is also very well written, please give the author a big boost! We support you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Good-looking, the heroine is not awkward. Other fanfics are either pitiful or arrogant, or there are various theories of cause and effect, and they look down on the protagonists who want to know each other. They feel that they know what will happen to others in the future, and they feel a bit conflicted when doing things, which makes them feel very confused. This one is really a good one among fics! I hope the author writes some fanfics like Xian Ni and has a female protagonist like this. As long as there is no problem with the logic, the same type of female protagonist is also very good.

Ok, I have successfully read all three books by the author. The first book is very novel. The only shortcoming is thanks to the male protagonist's soft rice. The others are very good. The second book feels quite complete in every aspect and makes up for all the regrets, but it still feels a little too calm and safe. One particularly good thing in it is the way the heroine and hero dote on each other, and the possessiveness feels very sweet. The third book is being looked forward to and updated every day. Come on, wife of the author [blowing kiss] [shy] In fact, after reading these three books, I feel that the author's writing ability is indeed getting better and better. I am looking forward to the plot mentioned above and hope to follow the anime plot.

Don't tell me, I just like this kind of heroine, hehehehe, she looks good.

This one, and then the feeling of dyeing colors from a piece of white paper, is very good for the male protagonist, and the female protagonist is also super good ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ, but it has a bit of a bordered feeling, overall it is good

This is the sweetest mortal fanfic I have ever seen.

This is the author's second book. I've always liked reading the first one. It's so well written. You deserve to be the author. I really stayed up late reading it and couldn't stop [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [like]

Oops, the author's writing is super beautiful. The relationship between Han Li and A Yao is also very good. A Yao is a sweet and soft little cute. It's so beautiful. Come on, author. Come on, author.

The writing is very good. I feel that the author should have read the analysis of Leviathan, the master of Station B, but later on it became a bit like writing an outline. I felt a little anxious about the ending, but it is understandable. After all, it is just a fan, and it cannot be as detailed as the original work. PS: To catch a bug, it's Cheng Tiankun in Luoyun Sect, not Chen Tiankun

Highly recommended, I think it looks good. I think this rating is low. It can definitely be more than eight points. The heroine is really cute, not silly at all and very useful. There were very few twists and turns. It was really sweet and the two of them were so sweet. Old Demon Han is also extremely happy. And the adaptation based on the original work is also very reasonable. I think it's very beautiful.

The plot is very good, [like] [like] Come on

It's pretty, but Lin Yu is very annoying.

I hope it won't be removed from the shelves. After all, one copy has been removed from the shelves, and that one is quite good. It seems to be because it was reported for infringement.

I strongly request you to publish a new book!

I like it, the writing is super nice, very sweet, and there is no shocking plot.

Well written, I hope to write another mortal fanfic [Love]

Not bad, good, very good-looking

Very well written, support I like it very much. The author is great. I support it.

Beautiful, I found a treasure😄

I just like to read sweet articles

The domineering Taozu falls in love with me

The author writes so well.

Wow, so pretty He is the most cautious old devil Han in the books I have read.

Okay, I've finished reading it