Naruto: Crossing Hinata, but Cultivating the Immortal System

I feel great after reading it. I can see that the author is trying hard to make the protagonist closer to a traditional immortal cultivator. However, the currency for purchasing immortal cultivation resources needs to interact with various characters. This makes the protagonist very stiff. He clearly doesn't want to interact but can only lick his face for money. I look forward to the author's writing being more perfect.

This fanfic is relatively comfortable to read at the moment. Most of the protagonists in Naruto fanfics are Uchiha and follow the same path. The protagonist of Hinata feels quite fresh. I wrote poems for the Chunin exam paper and the clone's training routine. Flying Thunder God blocks. It's interesting to leave a comment every time the plot system is changed. It will be interesting to see how the major events will change the plot. I read the introduction and heard that Lily is looking forward to it. Hehehehe

The plot is long, and there isn't much content updated every day. I haven't watched enough every time, so I can only keep it [eating melon] (no criticism or anything like that) It's getting boring. I only read it when it was updated. Now I have no interest in reading it even if I have a few chapters. Even from single to hundreds, okay?

Changes to a hundred, the writing style is excellent, the literary style is partial, and the description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration is zero. Hinata, who was born in the womb, is cultivating immortality in Naruto. Well, this familiar setting made me shiver. Although it is a bit cliche, the perfect system of cultivating immortality is also a highlight. The plot of magic changes, and the desire to save is difficult to calm down, which is okay. The writing is indeed good, the emotional line progresses slowly, the heroine is invincible, and she is fishing for fish throughout the whole process, and there will be more sugar in the follow-up. However, the combination of Hinata and Tenten always feels like something is missing. After all, Hinata in this book is a strong female character, and her character is collapsed, tsk tsk. The writing is worth collecting.

What I wrote above seems pretty good. The second volume of the latest chapter started to move in the direction of the chat group of all worlds + the travel of all worlds. I felt a little bit in my heart. The title of the book determines the focus of the readers. The original intention of adding new elements is to extend the life of the book. However, I feel that the weight of the new elements is enough to open a new book. Adding them to the original book may overwhelm the original book. I hope the author has the ability to suppress it.

It's very interesting. I've been reading it. I joined the Wanjie chat group on 363. I thought it was going to collapse, but it turned out to be very good.

I felt good about the first part. I stayed up two nights to read the first part. The plot design was actually pretty good, and the various jokes interspersed in it were understandable. But when it comes to the Ten Thousand Realms chat group at the back, I can't stand it anymore. Someone said it well before, the title determines the audience. But I'm not that aggressive and praise every creator. I'll put this book aside for now. I'll read it again when I'm short of books. Maybe I'll be able to read the rest of it then.

Not bad, not bad, especially when the system complains it's the most interesting. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It feels flat, which is okay. I feel like I just ate a piece of very soft bread. Anyway, I can read it from the early chapters to the latest chapter. The latest chapter is a bit more realistic and exciting, and the post-post scenes are a bit lacking. I want to watch post-post posts!

[Shocked] Four stars are encouragement. It was okay in the past, but now I have quit after seeing more than 300 chapters. The pig's feet are too powerful. If I write a behind-the-scenes + parallel world, I can still use the remaining heat. Who knows that the author has a headache and started a chat group of all worlds. In the end, it is neither fish nor fowl. Goodbye.

Aloof, not too smart, very good

It was too little, and it was gone after watching it for one night. I hope the author will update 5 times a day And when can the love line be pushed? It's too slow. I need education and training [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

The writing is actually quite good, and it is a difficult book to read, but the author please be nice to Neji! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The life of the book has come to an end, but the author obviously refuses to give up. Instead of forcing a continuation, it is better to let the novel end when it should end.

It's quite interesting. It feels a bit like cultivating immortals, which is incompatible with the ninja world. The perspective of immortals brings different feelings. Come on!

Can I write a blog post?

It's very nice. Doesn't the author update it?

I can give this novel a very good review. The ratings are great. I give this novel a few perfect scores.

The author's world view is very grand. I hope he can keep writing. It's so interesting!

Good book, cheers for the author [Like] Tomato likes white articles, many people only read short and quick things

So far, so good

Good looking, good luck to the author

Good, good, good

Come on, come on, come on, you can do it

Can Lin post stickers? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

You, the front is pretty good, but the back is too outrageous, right?

Update update update

It's ok. There's nothing bad about it at the moment. It's just too short.

It looks good, and the characters are friendly and well received. I really don't like the kind of people who travel through time and boss around the original characters. There may be some joking descriptions about the Uchiha genocide and Sasuke at that time, so please read with caution if you can't accept it.

[Cool] I've been through the ninja world, and the heroine is very strong and gentle.