In the magic theory class of the first year of high school, Mo Fan was kicked out of the classroom for questioning the teacher's teaching methods. Shen Yan happened to be leaving late because he was organizing the experimental equipment. In the corridor, he bumped into Mo Fan squatting in the corner and eating bread. The bottle of warm milk handed over by Shen Yan became the starting point for the two of them to interact (Mo Fan said harshly, "Who wants to drink such sweet stuff", but secretly put the milk into his schoolbag).
Reader comments
The writing style still needs to be improved. After reading a few chapters, I feel that there are many repeated points that have been mentioned. When the protagonist is shy, it seems that he only describes the redness of the tip of the ear. The shyness of the protagonist can be expressed through different angles or different body language. I hope the author can do better! The overall story line is pretty good.
The writing style still needs to be improved. After reading a few chapters, I feel that there are many repeated points that have been mentioned. When the protagonist is shy, it seems that he only describes the redness of the tip of the ear. The shyness of the protagonist can be expressed through different angles or different body language. I hope the author can do better! The overall story line is pretty good.
Looks good, ehhhhhh [shy]