No Misery************

I have read a lot of Demon Slayer fanfics, and this one is the best! There is growth, invincibility, and details. The plot is not muddled, and the strength of the Nine Pillars is maximized and reasonably improved. Very beautiful!

It's very good-looking and makes up for the regrets of Mugen Train. Tanjiro also became a pillar (actually he should be the God of Fire) as the original wanted! Although I haven't seen the ending yet, it must be a happy ending!

Juan Wang Tan, you deserve it! Super pretty! It fits the original work very well. Even the original character Ryuunosuke is very charming. He is an ordinary ordinary person, not some random Long Aotian who was added casually. He pursues the protagonist group with the body of an ordinary person and is very spiritually charming.

The changes are more in line with the original work, and the plot flows more smoothly. In fact, the CP is more normal than the original work, with one more pair of righteous ninjas. I don't know what everyone is criticizing, but Yuanyi is a bit OOC, so it might be better if this paragraph is not added. The summary is really good overall, you can take a look

Tantan saw his ancestors and Yuanyi in a dream, learned the breath of the sun in advance, kicked off all the lunch boxes, and the plot is smooth, the characters are reasonable, and the book is good to read [Like][Like][Like]

The writing is really amazing, the plot is delicate and tense, each description is very graphic, and the emotions are progressive. When reading, I was completely immersed in the story, laughing and heart-wrenching along with the characters. The rhythm of the plot is particularly well controlled, without delay or watering down, and the twists are natural and unexpected. The more you read, the more you read, and you can feel the author's full intention and sincerity. It is so worth following!

I've read Chapter 11 so far, let's review it first. So far, there is one original character with a name, but not much plot. There are more psychological descriptions than verbal descriptions, and surprisingly little verbal descriptions. It feels like reading a chapter novel, with a clear sense of God's perspective and third-person narration (no typos are missed). It's like listening to a storyteller tell a story, but it's not as intense as a storyteller. Tan's strength has made a qualitative leap. He has been using Rihu, and he almost killed Shimogenji in the Asakusa part. There is not much emphasis on other characters, and it is basically the plot of the original work. This is probably the reason why the author took more than 200 chapters to finish the long content of the original work. Looking forward to the next chapter Sorry, I read it wrong. It's more than a hundred chapters, shorter. Finished reading Chapter 16 The plot of the original characters has increased compared to the previous ones, but there is no main plot and not a single ghost was killed. I don't know if it's because there are more people, but there are more language descriptions in the Oni's Mansion chapter (this Zenitsu is noisy) The teacher really created it for the IF that Tan will be able to hurl at the beginning - Tan Tan is currently uninjured (a few ribs were broken in the original work), and there is not much other room for free play (but Tan Tan is very strong and enjoyable) I have read Chapter 22 so far (this is the first time I write book reviews so frequently) In Chapters 19 and 20, the original character replaces Murata and encounters Spider Sister, and recalls the bond and defeats her (Lei can skip this section) Saw Chapter 40 The story during this period is as bland as the game. Chapters 38 and 40 add a little plot of the original characters, and the same goes for chapter 41. I'm trying to understand the role of the character Chapter 45 Nightmare's death monologue is well written.

Very good-looking. I think it's a good-looking Demon Slayer.

Very good, very beautiful, highly recommended

Personally, I think this is one of the good books I've read with Tanjiro as the main character trying to make up for his regrets, and the writing is refreshing. Good luck to the author! [Praise]

The character doesn't have an OOC personality and it fits the personality perfectly, but I'm a little curious if Ryuunosuke is a teacher OOC.

Personally, I think this is very good. There is no problem with the character creation. Come on, author❤️

Really well written

Good-looking, Tanjiro gradually becomes acquainted with each other

I was scared to tears by this book. I haven't seen such a beautiful book in a long time [crying][crying][crying]

This book is very nice, and it seems to have characters created by the author himself [Thoughts]

It's great to watch, and there aren't any big problems with the plot or characters.

Very beautiful, very restored

The story is very comfortable and passionate, and the ending can make everyone survive. It has the fast and equally meticulous rhythm of the original work. [Learned]

Five stars! So pretty!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very interesting, good plot

Still very interesting

Nice! Five stars go to you

How proud ah ah ah ah

It's pretty good, worth a look

It's a good book

My wife wrote very rigorously

Looks good, okay?

From the beginning to now, the author writes really well