Failed to Raise a Younger Sister, Raising a Brother Who Controls the Younger Sister

This is my first time to write a review. The author writes very well, the writing is fluent, there are many details of life, and the plot is relatively close to reality (of course, I personally don't like the scene where the heroine is kidnapped). The portrayal of the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also excellent. The two children who were injured by the disintegration of their families can depend on each other and understand each other to find their own future. It is a touching thing in itself. I'm halfway through reading it, and I can see that there are no parts that make people hypertensive, and the daily interactions are very natural, not like industrial saccharine, which is particularly commendable. Overall, I personally think it is at the upper end of the Tomato genre of works. The writing is really good, and there are no uncomfortable moments until now. On the day when Zhao Lin hit rock bottom, Xu Xi was willing to lend a helping hand to her, hold up an umbrella for her, heal her wounds, and give her a destination, even though she once wanted to hurt herself. Just as Xu Nian was willing to take Xu Xi out of the gloomy prison at her most broken and helpless moment, shining like an angel and leading her through the darkness, and protecting her tenderly in his arms, what a kind child he was. In fact, after working, I feel more and more that life is not perfect. It is difficult to maintain relationships between people and understand each other. All we can do is help each other to gain more goodwill.

These people are really strict. They are really good-looking. The writing and descriptions are very clear and logical. They are cruel, but the ending is in a positive direction. I am very lucky to see such a good work. Where is your home, the author? I want to give you some souvenirs.

I gave it four stars because the five-star rating on the platform will not count towards the score. In my mind, it is absolutely a five-star masterpiece. I have a premonition that it will definitely become a masterpiece in the yandere circle in the future. It is so delicate and the writing is very good, especially the smell of fireworks. I even suspected that it was the author's personal experience (I am not criticizing the author's family [I'm about to cry]). The writing is too delicate. Tsk, tsk, tsk, I got a little angry after reading this. The summary is that if you hate looking at group portraits, you don't need to read this book. There are a lot of things about this in it, and it's so disconnected that you can't read it. If you can resist the fact that the male protagonist is a transparent person, I can say that the plot at the beginning is a god within a god. It makes me want to read it. I came to another masterpiece "Let the Broken Cousin Find Happiness, Xia Lian" (but the original author of this one also said that the plot has reached the climax and can only be written about the other two people, so it ended, giving me a feeling of completion), and this one I don't understand why there is a group portrait? ? ? What is the significance of their appearance? I think Xiaoxi no longer has the possibility of becoming a yandere. She is too healthy. She has everything and lacks nothing. Also, I don't understand why these people are paired together? ? ? And it took up a lot of space to write the story of these people showing affection. The most disgusting thing is that as the protagonist, as a male channel novel, I am not even familiar with the male protagonist's thoughts! ! ! Do you dare to think that a lot of space is devoted to Xiaoxi and her friends, and the male protagonist is actually a marginalized person in more than a dozen chapters? Oh my God, it's just Tiangang. I have written nearly 200 chapters and the yandere is nowhere to be seen? ? ? The ring is already ridiculously slow! In fact, I don't even understand why I have to write a zero score for the college entrance examination essay. I don't think Xiaoxi would not write well for her own loyalty. She would not be like this for her brother. I really think it would be enough to delete several other characters or just mention them when Xiaoxi goes to college. I really don't think it is necessary to keep them in this way. The main character has not been written much, so why should I write about them? It's superfluous to even advance the plot. It's better to rely on ordinary things to advance it on your own. I really don't understand how blindly using the mandarin ducks as puppets results in a small drama being turned into a big drama.

There are fireworks and happiness in the world between the lines. After reading it, I still feel that the aftertaste is long. The words have warmth and the plot has bones. A few words are worth a thousand words to move the face. After reading it for so long, I will comment again. This novel does not have cheats, slaps in the face, etc. The focus is on the mutual redemption of the two protagonists. The emotions are delicate and real. The male protagonist is also gentle and kind, while the female protagonist is more sensitive and paranoid. They are all written in a very layered manner. The slight shortcoming is that the pace is slow and the plot is flat [Blow kiss] To put it simply, it is a slow-paced, emotionally-heavy daily reading of the market. It is suitable for readers who like two-way redemption and healing and can accept the slow pace [Blow Kiss] If you like fast pace, I don't think it is recommended [laughs]

In fact, I just came here to look for interesting articles that are unique to Tomato when I am bored. It's a very unexpected book. It was indeed a bit painful to write at the beginning, and it was quite heart-wrenching to read. Chapter eighty-nine so far, except that the kidnapping is a bit weird. The other plots are very smooth, the details of daily interactions are very good, the atmosphere of life is very strong, and the description is very good, which will make people fascinated. Especially after the heroine entered school, I felt that the author had found a comfort zone and the writing got better and better. Finally, I'm looking forward to the author's plans for the male protagonist's future development. It's too routine now, and based on years of experience in following series, it always feels like something's not quite right [take a closer look]

Meeting each other is already a sign, so there is no need to miss lovesickness for a fleeting year. This book stood out to me. The content of the story is not just a cool novel. The protagonist walks up step by step on his own and meets the person who wants him to protect him for life. The two lonely people who are not favored by fate redeem each other. It is really touching. The writing is delicate and the character creation is perfect in my opinion. There are no points for complaining in the content for the time being. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop because of ridicule. He should not be complacent with boasting. "Xu Nian": I miss you with my heart. "Xu Xi": Nostalgic thoughts are like Xu Xi, and the spirit is like a stream. Hope they have a good ending. [Understood][Understood][Understood][Like]

The character creation is really good, and it's clear that it's a good ending, so I feel relieved and continue to pursue it! But... The writing is too immersive (although this is not a shortcoming). Several chapters where Xu Xi was critically ill and Xu Nian was imprisoned made my heart ache. So much so that I only feel distressed when reading the current yandere plot. But to be objective and fair, I can say that this novel is really beautiful and tear-jerking.

Hahaha, a very sweet little article, um, this is so sweet, especially after chapter 200, you must go and read it [laughs], oh, by the way, please give me the author's address [laughs]

The early stage is very healing, Xu Nian is the backbone of the family, and Xu Xi also grows up through repeated hardships. In the middle stage, 183 to 240 is the knife part, which is mainly about how Xu Nian raises money to save Xu Xi. If you are not used to it, you can skip this part. The subsequent plot will be healing again. It is the process of Xu Nian step by step to save the insecure Xu Xi from the psychological trauma. The whole later stage is sweet.

The characters are vivid and this is a good group portrait novel. Whether it is the reformed character or other characters, they are all very coherent and natural. In this book, my favorite character is the people's police uncle. In the novels I read before, I had a bad impression when I saw the police. But this novel gives people the feeling that once the police comes, everything will be stable and peaceful. People can leave the matter to him with peace of mind, and he will handle the results for you fairly. No inhibitions. There is also no disgusting and frustrating plot. It's an excellent, excellent book. The knife is a small knife, but the storm will eventually pass. Thousands of times of hard work casts iron into the heart, and a sword is forged with great effort. With one heart and one mind, God wishes success, and the minister should be listed with 9 points. Good fortune descends from the sky, and everyone in the world can share in it. All the fantasies in the world will come true, and there will be no disease, no disaster, and many blessings. The Chinese people welcome the prosperous times and wish the motherland to become more prosperous and stronger.

It's a pretty good yandere novel. It can be read as a redemption novel. Two lonely souls find a harbor where they can return home. Later, the author continued to use the knife, almost as soon as his life improved a little, the author would start to use the knife. Personally, when I saw the brother and sister running a restaurant and having unlimited imagination about life, I was still thinking, isn't this a yandere novel? Then there were a few jumps, and the brother and sister were directly saddled with sky-high debts (I was a little confused when I saw this). What follows is the same cliche of a classic yandere novel. The brother goes to jail in order to save his sister. Before going to jail, he says some vicious words (inexplicable, maybe the author wants to show his brother's selflessness). The sister also successfully awakens the second personality. After 10 years, she starts to train the male protagonist crazily and successfully trains the male protagonist to become angry [laughing]

I can only say that the school style of the daily sweet novels at the beginning is very good, and the author's descriptions are indeed quite good. I also like to read them. However, the yandere urban novels described by the author later have a plot collapse, which makes readers who are looking forward to sweet pet articles disappointed with the author's expression. Therefore, those who like the early style can regard it as finished after reading more than 200 pieces, and have a sweet ending. After the male protagonist entered, the dark forces were overthrown and the female protagonist recovered. After that, she got the male protagonist out of the prison. The two of them ended up happily. Everyone who loved each other lived as they imagined, and Officer Zhang did not sacrifice for this matter. I used to like yandere novels, and I follow a lot of yandere novels. I can only say that the new chapters I saw were not very rich in performance, and I can only say that they are unsatisfactory, because the previous sweet pet novels are really fascinating and I like them. I also hope that the author can write better and better and fill in these pitfalls. After more than 200 chapters, the transformation in the end is too bland and too empty.

Damn, as a colleague, I actually forgot to review the book [face covering]. Generally speaking, it's pretty much what you think. It's very sweet in the early stage, but it gets tough in the middle and late stages. The natural narrative style of the writing is also very good. It is a great book worth reading. The only flaw in this book is that the yandere character is a bit frustrating. Because I read it not from the perspective of a reader but from the perspective of a colleague. In short, I can understand the intention of the soul in shaping the yandere in the book, but the specific presentation may not be satisfactory. Because heartwarming urban daily stories are not suitable for overly sensationalized knife and torture passages. In a sense, Xu Xi, who presents a yandere and talkative character with a dual personality... Will actually dissuade a group of readers in some plots. But I cannot deny this book, at least according to my feeling, this book is still very good. Everyone has different feelings. If you can keep watching, that would be great. Come on, colleagues [eat melon]

In the early stage, people were almost stunned by the knife, and their hearts were constantly being grasped. The previous plot was a bit too cruel, and their eyes were always in a state of almost curling up [crying] o(╥╥)o The plot behind it is indeed very sweet Overall, I like it very much and I hope the author will work hard! Keep updating until the end

The writing is very beautiful, and the emotions of the characters are also very rich. For me, I have read most of these articles. This article gave me the feeling that it is smooth and smooth without any abruptness. It is very well-written, and the emotions of the characters are also very rich and real. At first, I wanted to read some, yandere, or some knives, etc., But after reading it, I really hope that they will survive. Well, I feel that they are really having a hard time and it is very real, but I personally think that after seeing Xu Nian go to jail, there is no need to read it. Such an ending is already very good, although I also feel that I have not seen enough. All in all, this novel is one of the best in this genre that I have read, and the emotions involved are really rich. If I have the chance, I think I will read it again.

It's okay. Some of the clips are quite touching and realistic. The writing is okay. It's not illogical or has no basis. It gives me the feeling that it's more solid and not empty.

At present, Chapter 89 is about my thoughts. This book is different from some of the redemption stories I have read before. The characters are delicately drawn without being pretentious, and the plot is also progressive. Currently, I feel that there is a trend of writing group portraits (there are many descriptions of Wen Wan, Xu Bowen CP and Zhao Lin) (Are Wen Wan and Xu Bowen a couple? I really like the interaction between them). In short, the writing is very good so far. I hope it will not be unfinished!

I originally thought it was a new book by Uncle Yu, but I saw that the author was not the same. Out of curiosity about the introduction, I read 20 chapters. I personally think it is good (maybe because I am a local dog). It is not one of those cool plots. The male and female protagonists have different backgrounds. It's very miserable. They redeem each other. There is no big problem with the author's writing style. I can accept some minor venom. In the end, this is just my own opinion. I don't like it (it's my first time to write such a long book review). Come on, author (super quiet)

This kind of opening should be relatively rare in Tomato, and the author's writing is very realistic. Well, it can be regarded as realistic, and the writing style is also quite comfortable. And I have rarely seen so many replies from authors in other books. The author will revise them one by one when he sees any corrections. The author is a nice person hahh In terms of plot, I think every character has a relationship. There is basically no cut-scene. The world is very three-dimensional. The author does not focus on describing the protagonist and neglecting other characters. It looks much better than some mindless and cool novels. The plot is very full, so that's it (personal evaluation [laughs]) The summary is still highly recommended. It's very interesting. There are candies and knives. I haven't seen a big knife yet, but I can accept it if there is a big knife. After all, if the author handles it well, the knife will also be a good plot, just like the dragon family.

I really like this story, but not many people seem to read it. Please support it. Similar novels are either systematic or all about money, etc. Emotionally, they give people a very castle-in-the-air feeling. In this novel, in the midst of hardships and difficulties, people are forced by life to cling to each other, and the emotions that arise from this make people feel very pure and not impetuous.

In this book, the similar growth experiences of the male protagonist and the female protagonist highlight their miserable lives and prove that they are destined to redeem each other. The plot of the two of them working hard to redeem each other deeply touched me.

It's not bad. It has clear advantages and disadvantages. Some places may be a bit toxic, but for me, it's okay. In the early stage, the male and female protagonists are basically described, but in the later stage, the male protagonist's role is a bit less. In the later part, the male protagonist felt quite unsociable to me. I hope that the male protagonist can be described more.

The writing is very good and the pace of the story is also good. As for knives, it depends on your personal tolerance. If it is not good, it is okay if it is good for knives. This is a good book that I have read for more than half a year and can finally be added to my group. Keep up the good work, author🌷

It's very pretty. It's super sweet at the back, not industrial sweetness. Don't thank me after reading it.

Although the plot is a bit typical, I felt that the male protagonist was a bit too pitiful after watching it, and I didn't like the double personality of the female protagonist, but overall it was good. There are still about 200,000 words left to finish. I feel that it will be basically finished after Xu Xi recovers. I have watched it Most of these novels end with a short paragraph of sweetness after the male and female protagonists are tortured. I feel that it is not enough. For me, the sweetness after the torture is the most interesting part of this type of book. I hope the author will write more about daily sweetness in the future. If it is not possible, there may be more extra chapters.

Good-looking, a must-read for light novel lovers. Is he really a new-age Fujimoto tree? Although this is a bit exaggerated, the knife literature in this book is really good. In the first ten chapters, there is no year report necessary for urban novels. The characters are introduced based on the main plot. The sense of substitution is quite high and the setting can be used with your brain. Wow, what is the most important point of the knife? You still want to keep reading after stuffing the knife. This book is undoubtedly a success, but I am very curious about how abstract the writing is to get this score. Let me taste it carefully and give it a second rating.

I watched it for a long time in the early morning and couldn't help but fall asleep. I got up at 8 o'clock in the morning and watched it for a while. By 11 o'clock, I had watched 362 minutes. I started from scratch and read all the chapters up to now. I couldn't stand the first part, I didn't have much patience, I felt it was just made up and pitiful, but I changed my mind about the book after seeing my life gradually getting better later. The Two-Way Redemption is indeed true, and I gradually became fascinated by the second part. However, this kind of book does not have a lot of words, so I hope I will write more. The author is really slow to update. If it were faster, it would be five stars.

There's not much to say. It made me uncomfortable in the early stage. It was destined to have a tragic emotional line, but it filled in the characterization a little, and it felt pretty good? The author is a little late to remedy the situation, but the candy under the knife can barely be eaten... Right? The Knife is a bit over the top. It's a novel originally, so it's okay if the author just writes it like this. It's still quite engaging, because I skipped through it and the impact of the Knife wasn't too big, so I personally think it's okay. That's it, come on, author, I don't have much desire to watch it anymore haha, but when the ending comes, I will come and watch the wedding of the hero and heroine, it's a real "I do" [blowing kiss]

Finally we can see a normal brother-sister relationship! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's so comfortable to read, the writing is also very good, and the emotions are delicate. As long as the author keeps maintaining this level in the future, it will definitely become popular. The kidnapping part is too poisonous. The reality is that when such a beautiful girl is kidnapped, even if she is not completely fucked, she will be touched and touched in other places. The novel's heroine being kidnapped is a major poisonous point. Moreover, the comments say that the heroine's legs were touched in the original text, which made me afraid to read it. Can the author explain it? After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to post it. I have been reading this book for a long time. I read it when I was reading about 10,000 yuan. I almost quit because of the kidnapping plot, but because the story of the male and female protagonists relying on each other was so well written, I forced myself to continue reading. After reading more than 300 chapters, I was really disappointed. I didn't expect that the subsequent plot would be so poisonous. The part about the male and female protagonist's wedding deception in the ward, I seemed to have seen those ancient female videos in the past, and then the heroine's dual personality was revealed. , This second personality really can't accept this kind of setting, it feels like it has become a double heroine, is this still pure love? I can only say that if the plot behind it is written in a more relaxed way and does not have so many extravagances, this book will definitely be rated 9.0. Now I really can't follow it. It made me have high blood pressure. When I watched the kidnapping scene, I still gave it a five-star rating. I really can't stand the plot now. Author, I have no choice but to change it to a seven-star rating.