Death is always accompanied by wind and sand or horse hooves.
The scout Ten Thousand Household Chief Yesugei stood outside Batu Khan's golden tent, like a stone sculpture that had been eroded by the wind for hundreds of years. The scar on his face from his brow bone to his chin glowed dark red in the sunset. He came from the east, carrying dust and blood along the way. What he carried in his arms was not a trophy, but a piece of news that could make the ground beneath his feet tremble.
He could imagine the scene inside the tent without going in: warm butter candles, soft Persian carpets, and the aroma of kumiss and barbecued meat filling the air. And all of this will be completely shattered by the news he brings.
He took a deep breath of the cold, dry air and stepped in.
Reader comments
I don't know if the theme is anti-war. Your title seems to be about conquest. A few very distorted points. The woman who can always bypass the siege of Mongolian soldiers to deliver supplies without any loss. The pass of more than 40 people who can hinder tens of thousands of troops. You are obsessed with exploring the glory of humanity behind the war. Are you too artistic?
Broadcast? The writing is good, the characters are vivid, and it has an objective sense of drama.
I don't know if the theme is anti-war. Your title seems to be about conquest. A few very distorted points. The woman who can always bypass the siege of Mongolian soldiers to deliver supplies without any loss. The pass of more than 40 people who can hinder tens of thousands of troops. You are obsessed with exploring the glory of humanity behind the war. Are you too artistic?
Broadcast? The writing is good, the characters are vivid, and it has an objective sense of drama.