I Walked into the Novel I Wrote and Was Stunned by the Heroine's Kiss.

I really love this setting where the author's "mother" penetrates into his book and the heroine falls in love. It has a spiritual mother-daughter and twin flavor, which is particularly delicious. The heroine Wen Chi said, "You control my destiny from above, which makes me very unhappy, so I want to pull you down." Searching the Internet for "Will the author love her characters?" Especially hit me. The author Su Yun, the heroine, wrote that Wen Chi gradually climbed to the top of the heroine's counterattack in life, and achieved the most perfect ending. No one loves her heroine more than her. These two babies are so cute, everyone must see them! 🫶🏻

It's the most cooking book I've ever seen on Tomato. [Learned] Chapters 1-3 of a dish. It's so delicious. [Laughs] I read it all night, and I'm still not satisfied. The author was severely "revenged" by the heroine through the book. The writing is very innovative. The plot, writing, and rhythm are also good. [Like] They also give out cookies. They are so sweet. They must be praised with five stars! It would be great to have more [full]

Wearing books is very basic, but the author himself is not basic. The author and the heroine really have a good rapport with each other. I think this theme is quite new. It progressed very quickly, and the whole process was sweet. And at first I just thought it was a love novel, with a novel subject matter at best, but later on I found out that Su and Wen were not just seeking revenge on the Xiao family for themselves, but for many people. It's the kind of white that cuts into black, and then cuts one layer down, and finds that their "blackness" is just an illusion. They are all very good people. I cried and became good at writing [almost crying] [almost crying]

The characters are really cool and sweet throughout. The author travels through the book, this setting is quite novel. The author loves the character, and the character loves the author. The two of them are destined to be together. The main line is very positive. In fact, if you look carefully, you will find that the things it expresses are very profound and are the sublimation of the entire article. I think this is one of the best-written Tomato books. And what I didn't expect was the ending. I really didn't expect that there would be such a wonderful closed loop. I will always follow you, author

This is the first time I have left a final comment on so many novels on Tomato, and the first time I have given a gift. What makes me feel good is not only the only love between them that I want to have, the love that only one person has for the rest of my life. I also want to save everything that happened in reality in the world of the novel no matter what, and make up for the regrets. There are also the subsequent twists and the main plot, which made me feel very new. Although I am not very good at talking, this novel is really good. I hope the author will keep up the good work☺️

If it wasn't time travel, then it would be crazy. In fact, when I was kidnapped, I felt that I could only admit defeat and hate myself for trusting others. Only when someone helped her did she have the hunger of a moth for light. But when the person who helped her also paid the price, then she was not far from collapse. If it is true that time travel is not just a dream of Zhuang Zhou, then please let her continue to sink, abandon sorrow and grief, use the past as a step, step on it step by step, and lead yourself to the glory of a new life.

This book is really good. The plot is ups and downs and fascinating. The protagonists and supporting friends are all very well portrayed. The characters are full and the emotional lines are always stable. The author's writing is really good. It is one of the few I have read in Tomato. The writing is very comfortable. I read it from beginning to end. I also particularly like the characters of Su and Wen. They are calm and have online IQ. In short, it is worth pursuing! ! ! Big cheers for the author

I'll go, it's so good, but I just opened the book. It would be great if I could update a hundred chapters a day [Adoration] [Adoration]

Very nice! Very sweet! This is the first time I saw such a theme setting. It attracted me. There were some parts that were very funny when I watched it [laughing and crying]. The concept is also very good, I like it very much! ! Recommendation [Learned]

A very nice novel! First of all, the character setting is very interesting. The beautiful young couple who are crazy about it, and the heroine written by the author x, IQ Online, it is very enjoyable to watch. Coming to the plot, it seems that everything is going on big and special, but in fact, the main plot is constantly advancing, accumulating bit by bit, and then finally making a big twist in one pot. The design is so good, and it is full of details from the beginning. It is very worthy of scrutiny and has strong logic. In terms of relationships, the inner shell of a crazy person is sensitive, fragile and dedicated, and the paranoid tenderness is the most addictive. Although Su Yun is 0.2, He is a real leader. I like this feeling of evenness, and because he created the character himself, there is even more of a fateful romance. It's so delicious! Overall, I really like the author's female-oriented way of thinking and narrative style. In some plots, there will be positive value guidance and more worthy of discussion issues, which sublimates the entire plot.

This setting is so delicious😋Su's character design is so cool, I can enjoy the dual-power setting for the rest of my life😋

Okay, okay, although the subject matter is not novel, the overall idea is clear and the characters have distinctive personalities. Until now, I haven't seen a few books that write stories before time travel. Not bad! (The above is just my personal opinion)

Delicious and fascinating

This score was probably saved by the last pair of female protagonists. Otherwise, looking at the entire plot, the number of female protagonists, etc., There should be a four-star rating.

The writing is not bad anyway. It also exploded. I read 20 chapters. Alas, they are usually buckled. Against the sky [shy][shy]

Good-looking He is really good-looking, how can I describe it? The author's writing style is really good, I also like to read this type of writing.

The fried chicken looks great. The writing is very delicate. I recommend it.

Highly recommended, the writing is good, I also like the characters, and the plot is very smooth so far. Great potential [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The setting really impressed me. The plot and emotional lines are not abrupt. It's good-looking. The mutual criticism is 1 point. I feel that the rating of the book is low. You can consider ignoring this rating and watching the content directly will be more amazing.

Looks good, looks good, looks good!

There's a plot and there's speed

It's well written and the setting is very interesting.

Come on, author, come on, come on

This is the first time I read a book of this type. It feels very novel and interesting.

! ! It's so good, and the emotional pull is perfect! !

It's good-looking, really. The plot is good, the emotions are good, and the main character is really good.

After reading it, I don't know what to say. Anyway, I feel that the authors who can write novels are very good, and they received five-star reviews. In fact, the plot direction of the novel can still be guessed a little bit. I really like the part where Su Yun confesses her own experience. Su Yun never gave up on herself and finally achieved her goal. Fortunately, she passed through the book and was with Wen Chi, and both of them were saved. As expected, I still like to read He's novels, the perfect ones are the best.

This book is completely written from scratch. The whole text is smooth and logical, and the characters are very well-developed. I love reading it.

The best alternative Narcissus super delicious article! ! ! ! ! Very easy to knock! ! ! !

Is it Shuangjie? This is very important to me.