Hunter: COS Bumps into Each Other and Falls in Love After Time Travel

It's good to watch, but I have a small suggestion. I don't know why I felt a little weird when I saw the protagonist's intense reaction when he said that Killua was only three years old. I have experienced it many times and know that this family is like this, but the reaction is still so intense. Of course, it's just a small problem, it's a bit fussy. Please don't scold me, the author. Everything else is very good and beautiful, but I feel that I can think more about the characters. The character performance is a bit too one-sided. Everything else is fine. This is a very good article [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Of course, these problems can be ignored. The author works hard to update! Five stars are given [laughing][laughing]

It's okay. Basically, there is no one of the same type. The writing style generally needs to be improved. Another annoying thing is that there are too many emoticons in each chapter. There are more than two in each chapter. This affects the viewing experience a bit. There are no other major problems. Small problems can be ignored. Some people's introductions are also marked, which is a good comment. Yes, there is a high probability that there will be no emojis after chapter 45.

The details are rough High degree of repetition in words The author must have used AI. Some sentences have a strong AI flavor, but not too much. I really like the early plot Let's continue reading first, and will review later. It's more than just rough details Eating books is quite serious.

The protagonist is a little frustrated in the early stage but it is inevitable. The emotional line is very sweet, but the author's grasp of the protagonist's mentality is not accurate enough. Some daily plots overlap and make people tired to watch (PS: The mentality is not allowed to be particularly obvious in the hunter exam section. The overlap is obvious in the section of wearing the pregnancy stone. The plot of one chapter and one day is similar but also different. It is very sweet, but it is still boring after watching too much. It is recommended to speed up the time.) In the early stage, the protagonist's love for Yi Mi was coaxed by a piece of candy and he wanted to be "captive" by his powerful and awkward fiancé. It was not bad. There were too many descriptions, but it was changed later. Readers who had just read it really wanted to see Ren Ren. The protagonist himself is very attractive to me, and I especially like his gentleness when facing his family. Even though he is so soft-tempered, I really hate that iron cannot be transformed into steel. No matter how soft-hearted and gentle a person is, after living as a Hakka for so long, performing so many missions and killing so many people, they will always be worn away. The only thing I remember about the protagonist being particularly strong is because of the wedding dress. If the character is like this, I can accept it. This subject matter is really interesting. Apart from the above problems, the author's writing style is pretty good. At least I think the fighting scenes have visuals and the atmosphere is well grasped when writing interactions. Overall it looks good, just don't take it too seriously Double strong competition high ^ ^

It's very interesting, but I haven't finished it yet. Here are some minor questions I have: Starting from Killua's birth, most of the plot is repetitive. The protagonist gets close to Killua (such as hugging, touching his little face, etc.) And then Ilmi becomes jealous. The plot appears too many times and is a bit tiring; Il fans are strict with Killua's training or control what he eats (controlling sugar...). The protagonist will say that Killua is too strict when he is only three years old, which is a bit unreasonable, because the protagonist has been beating the enemy Hakka for 10 years. It stands to reason that he has already known that this is how the enemy Hakka is trained; When Killua shows that he doesn't like or doesn't want to do something, he expresses it many times that Ilmi implements a reward system (beat a stick and a date) and then the protagonist will secretly take honey/chocolate sauce, etc., And is discovered by Ilmi every time, and then takes him to the laboratory to show the protagonist the sugar substitute he made and the chocolate sauce that meets Killua's needs. The protagonist will os Ilmi in his heart and still care about Killua/use his own way, etc. The above three melodramas have appeared too many times in my current progress, and I am a bit tired from watching them, but overall they are still very interesting to watch 😋 Big boost, author! ! ! O(≧v≦)o

The author's writing is really beautiful. I really like it. I really like this book. It's really sweet when we are together. I'm really jealous of Yi Mi's secret jealousy and possessiveness. Cp is really sweet, and the protagonist and Ilmi complement each other. As the protagonist said, one of them is a red face, and the other is a bad face. I really like it. This book is really good-looking, and the plot is very smooth. The characters are really good. The protagonist's inner tangle is really well written. I really like the author's writing. Yes, this book is really good-looking. There are not many male protagonists who are hunters, and there are even fewer fairy goods. I would like to call this book a fairy tale. It is really good-looking. Really, when we were not together in the early stage, I really hated Yi Mi's possessiveness, and when Yi Mi pampered the protagonist, I really hated it!

The writing is very nice, hehehe, the most anticipated plot of giving birth to a child is coming soon, I am so excited, the two children are so sweet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But maybe it's my own problem. I feel like this novel has a faint D flavor.

The author's setting theme is novel and very fresh, and the writing style needs to be improved, but there are no major problems. The emotional portrayal of the young couple is progressing very quickly, but it is not too detailed. I hope the author can describe it more and improve his writing style. I hope this novel will get better and better, and the author will surprise you even more, Izzy 99 [sending my heart]

Very nice! The details are well described, and it feels like it can be inserted into every day of life! I see many people saying that Wiz can make you happy with just a piece of candy... Actually, I think in that world and in that kind of family, this kind of candy (the kind that rewards you after seeing your efforts. Looking back, you will find that there is no reward system according to the original rules. This is because this rule only appeared after Wiz came). I hope someone breaks the rules and gives it to you. Isn't it sweet? ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡ (Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it...)

Wow, this novel is like "electronic ibuprofen" - it directly healed the mental infighting of my soul! I'm afraid he's not a "talented player", right? This writing style is simply "absolute", every paragraph is like trying to kill my brain. While reading, I was "hissing" all the time, and the corners of my mouth and temples were rising crazily, and I couldn't control it at all! It must be said that the narrative rhythm is very well controlled and belongs to the "You Can Always Believe" series. Some sentences I directly "Ctrl+C" or "Ctrl+V" into the memo, ready to be my Internet mouthpiece. This quality is simply the "Hexagonal Warrior" in the online literature world. I declared that this was my "natural treasure" and went straight into the pit and lay flat. Quick update, the child is really starving to death! (Take out my virtual galaxy coins and hiccup like crazy)

Really enjoyed this book! I've been looking for a hunter book on Tomato but haven't been able to find it. The non-OOC books are too long and can't be read for a long time, so I feel a little sorry for the big brother, but this one really touched my heart. Whether it is the character creation of the protagonist or the interaction with Yi Mi, the things in the family are written in a completely non-OOC way, which makes people immersed in it. I finished it in one morning. Keep up the good work, boss!

Not bad, 🤔 Because I personally may not be suitable for watching this kind of emotion, eh, I always wanted to see Yi Er fan chasing his wife's crematorium, but the teacher's writing is really good and very interesting, but it is not suitable for me personally. In short, it is worth recommending to watch (ﾟ∀ﾟ) ﾉ♡

Sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet couple99999999999999999696969969999999 Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Hee hee~ I haven't read the original work and only watched fragments of the plot, but it's really well written and can be understood even by those who haven't read the original work. The main reason for the rating is that the book review is a bit low, hehehe [shy]

I saw the book on the homepage. I was attracted by the cover. I have read a quarter of the book so far. I think it's okay. It's quite sweet? It is highly recommended to read. Some chapters have been revised by the author and should be much better than the original chapters. However, some similar plots and words appear frequently and make me want to quit and slow down. Especially the candy. I forgot about the previous plot and I can know what he wants to say when there is candy, and nothing is bad. Similar words, to use the common comments in the chapter, it gives me a kind of self-hypnosis assimilation. Feeling, and the ending with emojis... There are a lot of people who have talked about it, so I won't say more. The repetition of the above comments affects the perception. Although it is also the "sugar" between the two of them, I still can't help complaining... There is also the letting go of the child. I am not cold-blooded, but the protagonist has been living here for so long. Isn't it used to it? Even in our country, we rarely have the habit of letting the child go and leaving trouble later, right? Even though the two children in the plot should not threaten the protagonist in the future, this behavior... I still hope that there will be less [eating melon] and some complaints in the future. Looking at other people's comments, it seems that the author has changed it? I'll come back and add more after I've finished reading it. I forgot to follow up the review. The plot after about 50 chapters will be much better than before, and the two will be more at odds with each other. Although there are some minor problems, they are nothing compared to the previous ones. I look forward to the author's big updates and previous revisions [already planted] [thoughts]

It's good to read, there's no weird OOC. As you continue reading, the emotional scenes are quite sweet. I'm going to say [like] [like] [like]. I hope to finish this book. Many fanfics in my bookshelf are gone. [Crying] [crying] [crying]

The overall plot is very natural and unobtrusive, you can follow it [Blow Kiss]

It's a bittersweet, but also like a hard candy. I've only read the first 10 chapters, and I've never read Hunter, but somehow it feels very relevant and not OOC. The emotional pull is like a weirdo stuck in the quagmire. The only expression of love is possession. It's amazing. I'll watch Hunter after reading it. Come on, the author, the writing is very good.

It's very beautiful, great, you won't get tired of watching it [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

A pretty good one! The plot about the psychology of the characters and some exercises and tasks is very good. I sincerely praise the author for the great changes in the first few chapters, which made me particularly interested in the life of the family. The small interaction between the two xql made me very excited to read, and the writing was very smooth! It's just that I later discovered that the plot that has not been changed has some minor bugs, and some repeated terms. There are many protagonists who complain internally, which feels a bit too much. It is a bit different compared to the previous ones, but it is also quite cute, the emotions shown are also good, and the story goes well. Getting married is really sweet! It's funny and hilarious, it really feels very warm, and the bond between the two has reached its peak! Looking forward to the author's follow-up exciting plots

Good-looking, good-looking. When I read the original plot, I had not discovered fan fiction. When I turned to the front page, I really felt that there were very few such fan fictions. I was able to find such a good-looking book by the author. Thank you for your hard work~

Love to read. This book has exciting content and is highly readable. It makes people love to read it. The quality of the paper is excellent and the printing is clear and consistent with the description. Fast logistics, good service, and high cost performance. It is a masterpiece worth collecting.

It's really beautiful, I hope to get the plot soon

The front part is rather wordy, but the overall content is pretty good and makes people feel comfortable reading it. However, there are many kinds of expressions, only one of which is the same as a set of templates. The latter part personally feels a little strange. The protagonist has been there for more than ten years. If nothing else, he is actually not very insecure himself. He also worries about other people. Maybe this is the unique courage of being favored. I hope the author can continue to strengthen it. So far, I feel that it is a bit unacceptable. I hope there will be more in the future.

Yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy yummy Author, teacher, do you dare to update 100 chapters in one day? It scares me to death [smile] It's not enough.

[Love] ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎◞ ̑̑ is the most beautiful book I have come across in all the full-time series. It's a pity that I have to wait for it to be updated slowly. I wanted to save it and read it, but I couldn't help but read it as soon as it was updated. ꒰⌗´ ᵕ `⌗꒱৩ . ⋆ ☆ ⋆ ★ ⋆ . · . ☆

❤️ ( ⚫︎ー⚫︎ ) Balalala~ ＼ /○\ / / / ヽ \ |// \Վ/ ―イ /\ / Super pretty

I haven't come across the Hunter anime yet. This 📖 is my first impression of Hunter. At the same time, the characters and CP settings in it are also my first time to watch them. It's quite strange. Hahahaha. It's very interesting. It's not a loss to invest in it. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

The characters are very detailed. I think this one is not one that you suddenly fall in love with, but a long-lasting love. It is particularly worth recommending. This is a double male protagonist, and some straight men like the introduction! ! ! ! Otherwise, you will become a desperate straight man when you come in [laughs][laughs]

OK, it looks good\(//∇//)\, I have a suggestion for you. Isn't it a prophecy? You can make it come true. Then, let's give up Hertz's body to Yi Er's fascination, and then use your own body with Lin Yan to participate in a wave of main plots. Then, it will definitely be exciting when we recognize each other.