[Daily + Multi-heroine development + Easy and funny + No system + Japanese light novel + contrasting cuteness + complaints]
In this world where values are collapsing and time-travelers are everywhere, Patqiu is an anomaly. He has no system, can't see the health bar, and only knows one mediocre [nullification] move.
But it is this man without any magic power who has become the safe haven for all "monster girls".
Looking at the arrogant loli with silver hair and red eyes, who nags all day long and wants to hug, Pat Qiu fell into deep thought: Is this really the evil dragon that made the continent tremble?
I thought it was just a daily routine of raising a baby, but the team became more and more uncomfortable:
The aloof elf ranger: On the surface, he is aloof from the world, but he is actually a love-head who blushes at the slightest touch?
The female knight of the iceberg: Known as the "Sword of the Morning", she hugged him and called him brother even though she was drunk?
The True Ancestor of the Perverted Vampire: In order to wipe out the blood from his mouth, he not only had to work as a maid, but also carried out night raids in the middle of the night?
Social Horror Ghost Maid: The first thing you do when you have a physical body is to have closer contact?
Faced with the demon king's army coming to the door and the time-travel villain who wants to carry out the industrial revolution.
Pat Qiu sighed and stretched out his right hand with [Magic Immunity]. "You guys, can you please stop disturbing me while I cook for my family?"
Their journey is a warm story about companionship, growth, and recoloring each other's dark world.
[No data flow] [Not brainless fun] [Drama direction] [High sweetness warning]
Reader comments
Many readers are right, I admit. The early plot was indeed handled too harshly, which was the result of my lack of experience and my impetuous mentality.
I really knew I was wrong. Woohoo.
So, instead of escaping, I chose the stupidest way - rewriting.
I corrected the poisonous points pointed out by everyone, word by word. I sorted out those irrational logics again. The current version may not be perfect, but it is definitely much better than before, and it is closer to the warm and interesting story in my heart.
I am not making this announcement to defend myself, I am just asking for a chance in a humble way.
Can everyone treat me now as a brand new author? Can you treat this book as a new book?
I'm still growing and learning. I will read every chapter review and paragraph review you write carefully. If there is anything I wrote wrong, please point it out gently and I will definitely change it! Real!
Please don't deny everything I say right from the start. A sapling needs water to grow into a big tree. Please don't trample it to death when it just sprouts... QAQ.
It's been really hard these days. If you in front of the screen can say "Come on" to me, it would be a great salvation for me.
Thank you all for listening to my rants. I will wipe away my tears and continue coding. Because I love this story, and I hope you can fall in love with it.
Sincerely, humble new author
I have finished reading the first volume so far. Overall, I feel it is good. The plot is quite interesting but it does have flaws:
1. The author's vocabulary is a bit short, and the descriptions are repeated in many places. For example: It seems... Not bad? In fact, for a plot person like me, I don't really care ((
2. There are minor conflicts in the logic of the plot. For example, the dagger of the protagonist was broken when he went to the casino. The subsequent plot was not excessive, but he could still take out the sword and continue to use it in the subsequent plot. I can only say it's harmless
3. In Elf's personal plot, the protagonist has been fighting with her for so long before the festival, but he still has to wait until the festival to save her. I can understand it as an emotional foreshadowing, but to be honest, it feels very crude ((
4. In the first volume, I clearly felt that the author deliberately skipped the personal past story about Naira. Did he want to leave it until later to expand on it in detail, or did she really sleep in the cave playing with gold and silver treasures for 2000 years? There is also the fact that you can talk to souls. Except for the sense of presence in the beginning, the subsequent plot feels a bit like a decoration. . (I still like the character of Naira, especially because the two souls are connected, so I sincerely (and selfishly) hope that Naira can be the main palace rather than the embarrassing position of a daughter or sister. Naira has lived for 2000 years. Even if Naira first entered human society and has immature thoughts, she will not always be in that "unenlightened" child-like mental state. Moreover, there is also the setting of "the possessiveness unique to the dragon family")
Finally, I wish the author a happy day and work hard to make more updates❤️
Very obvious light novel style. It is a setting for male protagonists who are emotionally insensitive between men and women, and whose normal fighting ability is average, but can explode under certain circumstances. The whole story is very cheerful, and the plot is not bloody. I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time. This is a great article for those who like this style.
What should I say? The story is well written, and the main plot line is very smooth without any poisonous points. Well, a little bit, around the 1980s, the very traditional Western fantasy flavor of Dragon Quest. Readers who like this are in luck.
I don't know why, but it feels like the transition between events is a bit abrupt, but that doesn't stop it from being a good book. It's quite interesting to calm down and read it slowly. Come on, author [Like] I hope there will be more updates [laughs]
So far, everything is going well, at least on the Tomato platform, it is quite rare for me to find a book that is slightly to my taste. Compared with what I found before, the reading (listening) experience is much better (could it be that all I ate before was *** no no no no no no no)
Very good, basically all are loli, and the update speed is also fast. I feel that in addition to the introduction of the heroine, there should also be the theoretical king and princess who appear later?
It's a daily light novel type, and the plot is quite normal and relatively... Bland? There are also battles and stuff, that is, except for Xiaolong, the other female protagonists I have seen so far, including goddesses, elves, succubi, little ghosts and female knights, seem to have no feeling. In fact, maybe I have read too many books about this kind of female protagonist (I have been in elementary school for more than ten years now and I am already in my twenties). But I haven't seen much yet, so I'll continue reading.
I don't know what it looked like before the revision [thinking] [thinking], but I think the current story is very good. Seeing that the author has worked so hard to revise it, support me, author, come on [like] [like] [eat melon]
I think it's quite good, but why no one has read it? Although there are many novels of this type, this novel is better than those that are relatively "old-fashioned", right?
Not bad, a pretty classic plot, lacking in explosive points, but it's pretty good even if it's bland.
The novel is quite good. Although the progress is a little slow, the plot is reasonable and not brainless, and the characters are full of characters.
Why is traffic so low?
Personally, I think this book is quite interesting, but I'm just curious and don't understand why not many people read it.
From the current point of view, it is possible (maybe it has been said too much, and the author has emphasized the female knight too many times) that the protagonist reincarnates and seals his memory.
A good novel that can be written smoothly, with delicate writing style, clear and natural~
I read the latest chapter in one go. I found it very interesting. The emotions of each heroine are handled very well. Every interaction is very comfortable to watch. It is also very interesting and funny. I hope the author can continue to write, come on!
Hostess, you are a fragrant, soft and glutinous little cake [blowing kiss]
Suddenly I feel so pitiful for the author. In the 12 hours since the new chapter was released, I have only requested 7 updates. Obviously the quality is comparable to Tomato, so I would like to give you a five-star support first.
It's okay. If you're not interested in reading, you can read it. If you don't like Soul Travel, forget it. The plot is still a classic Western magic adventure.
It's good but not bad, I stayed up late watching it all night
It's very good and beautiful, more daily oriented and not so twisty. Come on, the author.
It's beautiful, come on
Hao Kan [Like] Come on, author [Blow a kiss]
Author, you must persevere. Kouya [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Support me, I hope to give the protagonist more hooks, it's a niche treasure.
It looks good at the beginning, I will taste it later.
I think it's very good-looking and the emotional handling is okay.
But why don't we update it now? [Crying][Crying][Crying]
ohnooooooo, I am undoubtedly sad
The plot is well written and very engaging. Come on😊
The book is indeed good, but it's just not to my liking. Please do your best.
The rating is not that low [face covering]
Many readers are right, I admit. The early plot was indeed handled too harshly, which was the result of my lack of experience and my impetuous mentality. I really knew I was wrong. Woohoo. So, instead of escaping, I chose the stupidest way - rewriting. I corrected the poisonous points pointed out by everyone, word by word. I sorted out those irrational logics again. The current version may not be perfect, but it is definitely much better than before, and it is closer to the warm and interesting story in my heart. I am not making this announcement to defend myself, I am just asking for a chance in a humble way. Can everyone treat me now as a brand new author? Can you treat this book as a new book? I'm still growing and learning. I will read every chapter review and paragraph review you write carefully. If there is anything I wrote wrong, please point it out gently and I will definitely change it! Real! Please don't deny everything I say right from the start. A sapling needs water to grow into a big tree. Please don't trample it to death when it just sprouts... QAQ. It's been really hard these days. If you in front of the screen can say "Come on" to me, it would be a great salvation for me. Thank you all for listening to my rants. I will wipe away my tears and continue coding. Because I love this story, and I hope you can fall in love with it. Sincerely, humble new author
I have finished reading the first volume so far. Overall, I feel it is good. The plot is quite interesting but it does have flaws: 1. The author's vocabulary is a bit short, and the descriptions are repeated in many places. For example: It seems... Not bad? In fact, for a plot person like me, I don't really care (( 2. There are minor conflicts in the logic of the plot. For example, the dagger of the protagonist was broken when he went to the casino. The subsequent plot was not excessive, but he could still take out the sword and continue to use it in the subsequent plot. I can only say it's harmless 3. In Elf's personal plot, the protagonist has been fighting with her for so long before the festival, but he still has to wait until the festival to save her. I can understand it as an emotional foreshadowing, but to be honest, it feels very crude (( 4. In the first volume, I clearly felt that the author deliberately skipped the personal past story about Naira. Did he want to leave it until later to expand on it in detail, or did she really sleep in the cave playing with gold and silver treasures for 2000 years? There is also the fact that you can talk to souls. Except for the sense of presence in the beginning, the subsequent plot feels a bit like a decoration. . (I still like the character of Naira, especially because the two souls are connected, so I sincerely (and selfishly) hope that Naira can be the main palace rather than the embarrassing position of a daughter or sister. Naira has lived for 2000 years. Even if Naira first entered human society and has immature thoughts, she will not always be in that "unenlightened" child-like mental state. Moreover, there is also the setting of "the possessiveness unique to the dragon family") Finally, I wish the author a happy day and work hard to make more updates❤️
Very obvious light novel style. It is a setting for male protagonists who are emotionally insensitive between men and women, and whose normal fighting ability is average, but can explode under certain circumstances. The whole story is very cheerful, and the plot is not bloody. I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time. This is a great article for those who like this style.
What should I say? The story is well written, and the main plot line is very smooth without any poisonous points. Well, a little bit, around the 1980s, the very traditional Western fantasy flavor of Dragon Quest. Readers who like this are in luck.
I don't know why, but it feels like the transition between events is a bit abrupt, but that doesn't stop it from being a good book. It's quite interesting to calm down and read it slowly. Come on, author [Like] I hope there will be more updates [laughs]
So far, everything is going well, at least on the Tomato platform, it is quite rare for me to find a book that is slightly to my taste. Compared with what I found before, the reading (listening) experience is much better (could it be that all I ate before was *** no no no no no no no)
Very good, basically all are loli, and the update speed is also fast. I feel that in addition to the introduction of the heroine, there should also be the theoretical king and princess who appear later?
It's a daily light novel type, and the plot is quite normal and relatively... Bland? There are also battles and stuff, that is, except for Xiaolong, the other female protagonists I have seen so far, including goddesses, elves, succubi, little ghosts and female knights, seem to have no feeling. In fact, maybe I have read too many books about this kind of female protagonist (I have been in elementary school for more than ten years now and I am already in my twenties). But I haven't seen much yet, so I'll continue reading.
I don't know what it looked like before the revision [thinking] [thinking], but I think the current story is very good. Seeing that the author has worked so hard to revise it, support me, author, come on [like] [like] [eat melon]
I think it's quite good, but why no one has read it? Although there are many novels of this type, this novel is better than those that are relatively "old-fashioned", right?
Not bad, a pretty classic plot, lacking in explosive points, but it's pretty good even if it's bland.
The novel is quite good. Although the progress is a little slow, the plot is reasonable and not brainless, and the characters are full of characters.
Why is traffic so low?
Personally, I think this book is quite interesting, but I'm just curious and don't understand why not many people read it.
From the current point of view, it is possible (maybe it has been said too much, and the author has emphasized the female knight too many times) that the protagonist reincarnates and seals his memory.
A good novel that can be written smoothly, with delicate writing style, clear and natural~
I read the latest chapter in one go. I found it very interesting. The emotions of each heroine are handled very well. Every interaction is very comfortable to watch. It is also very interesting and funny. I hope the author can continue to write, come on!
Hostess, you are a fragrant, soft and glutinous little cake [blowing kiss]
Suddenly I feel so pitiful for the author. In the 12 hours since the new chapter was released, I have only requested 7 updates. Obviously the quality is comparable to Tomato, so I would like to give you a five-star support first.
It's okay. If you're not interested in reading, you can read it. If you don't like Soul Travel, forget it. The plot is still a classic Western magic adventure.
It's good but not bad, I stayed up late watching it all night
It's very good and beautiful, more daily oriented and not so twisty. Come on, the author.
It's beautiful, come on
Hao Kan [Like] Come on, author [Blow a kiss]
Author, you must persevere. Kouya [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Support me, I hope to give the protagonist more hooks, it's a niche treasure.
It looks good at the beginning, I will taste it later.
I think it's very good-looking and the emotional handling is okay. But why don't we update it now? [Crying][Crying][Crying] ohnooooooo, I am undoubtedly sad
The plot is well written and very engaging. Come on😊
The book is indeed good, but it's just not to my liking. Please do your best. The rating is not that low [face covering]