Do You Know: Xiao Qin Passed Through Time When Bai Gave Birth to Gu Tingye?

I think it's pretty good-looking! The author's writing is good, and it seems to be very smooth so far, and it fits the characters well. [Sending Hearts] There are so few names for the female characters. They are all named XX, XX eldest lady, and XX second girl. Those who have names are also the aliases of the maids. However, the male characters, whether they are in the show or newly created, basically all have names and surnames. Since they are all female protagonists, and there are so many female characters with many roles and three-dimensional images, I feel that it will look smoother if the important female characters can be called by their own names when described in the third person. Just a personal opinion! Big cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

I really enjoy reading "villain" spin-offs! When I was reading Zhifu, I had very complicated feelings towards Xiao Qin. On the one hand, I thought she was hateful and on the other hand, I felt pity for her. I also felt that with her talents, if she was not blinded by hatred, she would definitely manage her life in order. It was super uncomfortable when I saw Xiao Qin dying in the sea of ​​fire in Gu's ancestral hall. I didn't want to see such an ending. The author of this book is really sleepy and gives me a pillow [crying] [crying] and the writing is so good. There is no OOC at all and the description is too delicate. I can feel the same [crying][crying][crying] Author, please write quickly and update soon. I'm really looking forward to it [crying][crying][crying] It's really beautiful [crying]

I cautiously gave it five stars. It's still good-looking, but what does it mean to chase your wife in the crematorium? You don't want to have sex with the Marquis, right? His inaction was the root cause of the misfortune of the Qin family and the Bai family in their previous lives. No [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Five stars for the author's great writing. There is no nonsense in the whole text, and it reads smoothly. The characters are full and vivid. Looking forward to the author's next article, hoping to see more thoughtful ideas and plots.

Ahhh, it's so beautiful. I like this setting very much. Why did I stop updating? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I beg the author to come back.

Great writing, not like a newbie author at all. What surprises me the most is that the author does not charm men

I really like this article. This is my favorite one among Zhiruo's fanfics. I had read it before on Xiaohongshu. I finished reading it at that time. Do you have any ideas to continue updating it? Then I saw this article on Tomato today and found that the author had started to update it again. I was so excited! ! ! I rarely comment on books. I really like this one. It feels so good. Please don't stop updating.

The author's writing is fluent. This is quite good-looking among Zhifou's fanfics. The characters don't have any cheating and their actions are more logical. I hope there will be a second volume.

Not bad, good writing.

The writing is very good and well written.

Very good. Come on.

Author, where are you? Come back and write a book quickly! ! ! ! !

The writing is very good and very beautiful. It is not easy to find such a novel on Tomato.

The writing is good, the characters are vivid, and the writing is logical.

The author's writing is good and I hope he can continue to write more [laughing][laughing][laughing] I like [blowing kiss] and the storyline is very exciting [admiration][blowing kiss]

The writing is very good, and the author's writing style is also good. It doesn't look like a newbie. It is much better than some chronicle novels. The first stage is very satisfactory. It is very enjoyable to read. I support it.

The author's writing is very good and has a strong sense of immersion. When will it be updated?

The teacher wrote it so well, I really like it. Xiao Qin can finally live her own life and have her own world.