I Have a Spirit Beast Mountain!

Overall, it seems quite comfortable. Let me remind you that it will not be updated on May Day, and it has not been updated yet. There is a certain risk of being unfinished, and the number of people urging updates is about 140, but I hope this book will get better and better.

It's okay. In terms of logic, I don't often use my brain when reading books and don't make comments. For the rest, I think it's okay so far. It shouldn't be too bad. However, there are also shortcomings. For example, some descriptions of female supporting characters, the use of words such as "pretty body" are a bit difficult to comment on, and it suddenly choked me up. There is also a very classic story of a fat boy and a girl with two friends. However, this book handles this aspect well, and the friendship aspect is reasonable. It's a bit similar. Anyway, the label was changed and I didn't explain the reason in advance, so no wonder I ran away. In addition, there are supplementary shortcomings. There are many classic plots. For example, when the companion is out to eat and is attracted by a rich playboy, for example, the female supporting role is prepared to give her a life-saving prop because the protagonist asks her to wait and think that she is the one she wants.

The pace is good, the writing is passable, and it's worth watching

I can watch it, and I can read it occasionally as a fun read, but that's it. The writing style is immature and needs to be improved. The plot is a bit old-fashioned, but the world view is quite remarkable. I look forward to witnessing the author's transformation. If he adds real thinking when writing, instead of imitating after reading other novels, he should be able to improve several levels.

It's not a very new subject matter, but the meticulousness is good

The writing is relaxed and logical, worth reading

Still good, keep up the good work

Can be interesting and interesting

Very pretty

It's pretty good, keep writing.

It looks okay so far

Very nice, recommended

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

Good writing, keep it up

The book is very good. Can the author finally continue to update it? [Thinking]

So far, it's okay, but there are a lot of classic plots. Although it's been patched, it's really uncomfortable to watch. I hope there will be fewer plots like this in the future [Sending my heart]

Very good. I like this theme very much. I also like it very much. Keep up the good work

It's very interesting to watch, and the description is very good. It's about realms. The strongest person in the world has only six realms.

Check it out if it looks good, please give it a try, the author, keep working hard [Cool]

At present, it seems that there are no poisonous points. The content is reasonable and the logic is clear. You can read it.

It's good-looking and worth watching [Like][Chigua]

Can! The writing style is quite delicate and the writing is quite beautiful.

Very beautiful, the concept is wonderful

Very beautiful and very immersive.

It's okay, the writing is okay, no CP A trio of brothers, Yi Xiuni [Like]

Personally, I think it's quite interesting, a novel novel about beast control.

The plot is detailed and the characters are well drawn. Anyway, I think it's very interesting.