The Legend of Luo Xiaohei: Master Tail, Please Save Me!

It looks good, the logic is okay, and the writing is good. Except for the sense of separation in some places, the relationship between Xiao Hei and the heroine is a bit subtle. In Chapter 35, Xiao Hei called Wu Mu instead of Huo Huo. When the heroine was unconscious, no one paid attention to her, which is not bad, but the heroine did a lot for Xiao Hei in the past. The heroine has been by Xiao Hei's side from the beginning to now. I think their relationship should be better than Wu Mu. I am the kind of person who will be obsessed with details if I see a good article. Anyway, overall it is okay. I hope the teacher's writing will get better and better. Come on (*^▽^*)

It's okay, the character isn't too bad But there is a problem with the logic For example - Lin Huohuo knows what kind of person Wu Mu is. It is normal to have fear and social anxiety, but Lin Huohuo knows that he will not hurt Xiao Hei, so his reaction may be a bit too much at first (personal feeling [thinking]) Also, are there some plots that you can't remember? Xiao Hei and Wan Mu asked for directions when they met Chun and the others from Big Fish and Begonia. Mr. Jiu didn't just come with Ruoruo... Of course they are all minor problems. If you have time, you can still watch the movie again [Explore] Overall, it's a good book and very heartwarming.

This book is very nice~ I am looking forward to this book. It will grow up quickly like the few books I have read in the past~ Personally, I think the good part of this book is here - right here, the characters of Huo Huo and Uncle Tai are relatively successful, and Xiao Hei's agility and other characters are also created~ What I can still improve is that Huo Huo dared to quarrel with Uncle Tai in the plot (), so in the future Huo Huo should be able to let down his guard when confronting Uncle Tai (?) And be more courageous~ It would be better if the author could reply to others ~ (｡ò ∀ ó｡) (subcutaneous

The author's writing is very good, but I feel that the plot develops too fast and lacks details. It would be better if the pace was slowed down. There are some details and small settings that are inconsistent with the original work, but it is not harmful. I hope the author can write more about the interaction between the two little animals! (Xiao Hei and Huo Huo are so cute, can they do CP?) I hope the author will not stop updating. I look forward to reading such heartwarming stories every day. Come on, author! ! ! [Shy]

[Please be careful when mentioning the storyline] The writing is okay. When I reached chapter 68, it turned out that it was a social horror man dressed as a Huo Huo. In the early stage, he had a real Huo Huo feeling. Later, he started to let go. He and Tai Tai often quarreled with each other. We got along quite well and cared about each other. It felt like the way my dad and I get along [laughing and crying]. The characters of Luo Xiaohei are quite consistent. He has no expression but loves his apprentice infinitely. He looks cold but is still very careful and gentle. The senior sister is a bit original. I still follow the development of the plot. The protagonist is possessed by Uncle Tai. He is very powerful. He can fight with Feng Xi in the field to take advantage. He knows the plot and has psychological activities, but it has little impact. Xiao Hei's field is still gone. Feng Xi is saved. The goblins in Flow Stone Guild are also dead. It's a pity.

I like this theme very much, and the image of Uncle Tails is also very accurate. The author may be a player who has watched Luo Xiaohei and created it passionately. Some of the images may not be accurate. The plot is a bit fast and some small details are not included. For example, the cameo of Big Fish and Begonia and the little flower demon delivering flowers are not included. The image of Infinite is also barely grasped. Infinite accepts Xiao Hei as his disciple because he can teach Xiao Hei, but it is actually unlikely that she will accept Huo Huo as a disciple. Although she and Xiao Hei are together, if she is worried about Uncle Tails causing trouble, she may only keep people around instead of accepting apprentices. Moreover, it is too irresponsible to only give Huo Huo a few books to teach herself without teaching. OOC, regarding the matter of accepting apprentices, goblins pay more attention to it and must be responsible for others. There are unlimited books to accept. It is absolutely impossible for Huo Huo to just take care of Xiao Hei. Since Wu Wu was rejected as his disciple in Lanxi Town, Wu Wu should have realized the importance of accepting disciples. He would not have just left Huo Huo to learn on his own. There was also the part where Xiao Hei had been jumping into the sea to find Feng Xi. He felt that Huo Huo would stop him from going back to find Feng Xi. The emotion here felt that Feng Xi was more important to Xiao Hei, but at the beginning he encountered It was Huo Huo who came to Xiao Hei, and he was also accompanied by Huo Huo. It can be seen that the author really wants to follow the plot. The emotions here are not very accurate, maybe because the pace is too fast. The image of Uncle Tai is written very well. It can be seen that the author is a very loyal Iron Beng player. Uncle Tai has mastered this aspect. I really like the teacher's book. I hope I can write better and better [Sentiment]

It feels pretty good. I'm looking forward to the rest of it. I just have a small request. Don't make Huo Huo too weak. After all, there is still Uncle Tai.

Haokang, the character design is not OOC, the interaction between Xiao Hei and Huo Huo made me feel warm_(: D)∠)_, I suggest removing the protagonist's surname, it's a bit weird

It's not Gomen, I just wrote a fanfic about Tibao's time traveling through Luo Xiaohei, and I found that someone actually wrote about Huo Huo [face covering], but the author's writing is quite good, and I look forward to updates [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

I like this character very much, as well as Uncle Tai. The author describes the character very emotionally and has a strong sense of immersion! I'm really looking forward to the meeting and interaction between the protagonist and the original characters, and I'm also really looking forward to the direction and development of the storyline. I can't get enough, I really can't get enough! However, the plot description in the article is slightly different from that of the original work. Anyway, it is not detailed enough. There are some interactions between the characters that are not written, which makes me feel a pity. However, overall it is still very good-looking! Looking forward to more exciting stories written by the author! (To be honest, I didn't say it in such detail during the Chinese language test. Well, it's not good for me, but I still like the author ❛˓◞˂̵✧)