Pure and Pure? There's Something Wrong with This Empress of Acacia

This is a super nice single-female novel. The author will update it soon [ang][ang]

I'm an old fan. I've been waiting for Su Ci's new book since I finished it. It's finally released. I must support it. I hope the author will stick to it and maintain the quality of the previous book. It would be better to make progress. The writing in the first few chapters is obviously better than the previous one. Come on.

The characters of the male and female protagonists are well written, full of emotional value, and there are many jokes used, which shows the author's intentions. Let's talk about some things that can be improved. Everyone wants to see the male and female protagonists staying together all day long, but they can also be away from each other for a while. A break is better than a newlywed. Most of the daily aspects are about rescuing lovers. The author is really a life-saving mandarin duck. Family and friendship can also be touched upon, otherwise writing too much will lead to a lack of vitality. Then, real daily life can also be touched upon, and it is not monotonous to save people outside all day long. In terms of character creation, other characters in the sect can also be written in more depth, not too much but profound. The biggest problem is why other books limit the heroine's strength to the aspect of Nascent Soul Transformation. It is because they hope that the strength of the hero and heroine cannot increase too quickly, otherwise he will not be able to have the ultimate feeling of turning from sadness to joy. For example, the male protagonist was beaten to death but was saved by the female protagonist. The heroine gets injured trying to save her apprentice, etc. Although the author has moved the battlefield to the fairy world, the original characters are still erratic, and the supporting characters will be even less profound if the battlefield is suddenly transferred. Overall, 9.5 Points is no problem The heroine Jiang Huaixu likes her disciple, she is a little crazy and likes to tease her disciple, but she also has the shyness of a virgin. She attaches great importance to her disciple and has the best weapons, skills and resources, similar to the personality of a domineering president. The male protagonist has the character of a saint, he is not lewd but does not mess around with his wife, he is a straight man with steel The plot feels like a private visit incognito. . .

The second masterpiece of the Jiang family's yandere, it continues the emotional line of the yandere master in the previous book. However, the characters of the male and female protagonists are interchanged. This time, Jiang Huaixu is more proactive [laughing] What is a little difficult is why she is called the Empress of Hehuan. She makes it look like a watery Yanghua. It is probably for the sake of contrast and drainage. Both the male and female protagonists truly love each other. The shortcoming is that the fairyland chapter is updated too quickly. It returns from a true immortal to an immortal emperor or above in one fell swoop. Some of the pitfalls and character settings in the back are not completed. It ends too quickly.

The writing is still very good, just the opposite of the male and female protagonists in this book. There are too few different experiences [shy] If the author is so slow to update again, I will... 4 Chapters after 2 weeks. Is it because the data is not good? [Angry]

It's still good, but the confession with the master felt too fast and a bit abrupt. It should be able to last two chapters, and it would be better to see the shy master.

I have also read the author's first novel, and I think it is very well written. I really like the author's style.

The story is quite interesting and the emotional line is well handled. I hope the author will update it soon.

Good looking brother, give me more

Interesting, I read this book

Is it Shuangjie? Author

For the sake of the last book [Thinking]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Hey hey hey hey hey hey h

It's a really good book

I like single heroine meow

This book will never fail [angry]

In the previous book, the apprentice chased the master, and in this book, the master chased the apprentice [face covering]

Okay, feel free to give me a five-star support.

It's pretty good-looking. I had it broken once before, so I kind of forgot about it.

So far it has a five-star rating

I think it's pretty good, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Old fan, I trust your single heroine, come on

It's a bit short. It's shorter than the previous one. The good thing is that the male and female protagonists are well portrayed. I also like to write pure love stories. It's good and can be followed.

Hey hey hey hey hey, it's so sweet, I got it @, Yami, hurry up and update! It's not enough to watch, my May Day depends on you! The sacred deer is big!

It's a pity that the author has discontinued the update. The book I read should have a score of about 8.6. Unfortunately, there are too few people [scrolls], which leads to the author discontinuing the update.