Want to Write Affectionately? Start with the Local Characters of Naruto!

The genre is quite novel, but there are many magical changes to the lines. It is not recommended for those who prefer the original work, as it will be more uncomfortable. The plot has basically not changed, but it is pretty much the same anyway.

"Lin used to be the only light in my eyes. After losing Lin, the world I saw turned into a dark hell. The world in my eyes has undergone tremendous changes. This world is full of ashes and has no hope. Even with this pair of Sharingan, I still can't see anything clearly." - Obito Uchiha

Overall it looks good, but the ending is already determined. Unless the ending is changed, there is no need to watch it. Come on, author [eat melon]

It's not bad, I'm just trying to support Lin's CP, so I deducted one star. Here are some of my thoughts. I don't know if the author will see this comment, but I want to express my thoughts. Fans make up for regrets. Naruto has a lot of regrets, so many Naruto fans were born, and this one is dedicated to Obito. So I hope Obito doesn't come clean in the end! ! ! Don't wash your hands! ! The unwhitewashed Obito is a fanatical savior, but the whitewashed one is the annihilation of the clan and the origin of his master and his wife, so the author please consider the ending of Obito. Of course, I don't mean it necessarily, I just hope so, and I wish the author good luck in his career and prosperity.

Writing contests about Naruto are rare. Come on, I'll take another look [Like]

The content is restored, telling the story of an innocent little boy who did not hesitate to launch a ninja war for a beloved girl.

It looks good, I hope there will be a sequel

Is the author writing creative writing? Isn't this Obitoden?

Okay, it's not as boring as other creative writings. Others are all kinds of doubts and problems from the referee.

I feel that the writing is quite interesting, although I just copied the homework and made many mistakes.

This book is quite good and has already received many tweets.

Awesome, awesome, very detailed writing

Wang Chao! Niubi Niubi! !

I'm afraid you'll be too proud to give me four stars.

I don't know if your writing is good or not, but I just cried when I read it

After I finish writing Kai, let's write another hero's story!

How to say it? I actually don't want to give this novel five stars, but since the rating is too low, I still gave it five stars. The main reason is that the plot in it is not very well written, and most of them are simply drawn Naruto plots.

It's pretty good to watch, but Naruto has too much plot. I don't know if the main character should be written or not until Shinra Tensei

It's beautiful👍but that's it. I still have a lot I want to see😭😭

The writing is very good, the writing style is also very good, I just want to say... The author is great... More more more more more more more

It's pretty good, but there are some conflicts between context and context, but overall it's pretty good.

It's so damn beautiful, it makes my blood boil.

If you like Obito, you can watch it. It is highly recommended.

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

Very common and very stable. [Laugh]

Naruto's book🧐🧐🧐 is also good😄😄😄

Super invincible and beautiful.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very beautiful, I like it very much🥰

Looks good, very satisfied