I Asked You to Write About Your Dreams, Not Madara Uchiha!

The genre is quite novel, but there are many magical changes to the lines. It is not recommended for those who prefer the original work, as it will be more uncomfortable. The plot has basically not changed, but it is pretty much the same anyway.

"Lin used to be the only light in my eyes. After losing Lin, the world I saw turned into a dark hell. The world in my eyes has undergone tremendous changes. This world is full of ashes and has no hope. Even with this pair of Sharingan, I still can't see anything clearly." - Obito Uchiha

It's not bad, I'm just trying to support Lin's CP, so I deducted one star. Here are some of my thoughts. I don't know if the author will see this comment, but I want to express my thoughts. Fans make up for regrets. Naruto has a lot of regrets, so many Naruto fans were born, and this one is dedicated to Obito. So I hope Obito doesn't come clean in the end! ! ! Don't wash your hands! ! The unwhitewashed Obito is a fanatical savior, but the whitewashed one is the annihilation of the clan and the origin of his master and his wife, so the author please consider the ending of Obito. Of course, I don't mean it necessarily, I just hope so, and I wish the author good luck in his career and prosperity.

Overall it looks good, but the ending is already determined. Unless the ending is changed, there is no need to watch it. Come on, author [eat melon]

Writing contests about Naruto are rare. Come on, I'll take another look [Like]

The content is restored, telling the story of an innocent little boy who did not hesitate to launch a ninja war for a beloved girl.

It looks good, I hope there will be a sequel

Is the author writing creative writing? Isn't this Obitoden?

Okay, it's not as boring as other creative writings. Others are all kinds of doubts and problems from the referee.

Awesome, awesome, very detailed writing