When the Other Shore Came to This Continent

Shili Taojin has become more powerful. This should be the best batch of Tomato Cry fanfics so far. The character design is restored very well and there are no poisonous points.

Fll plus Dou San's fanfics are rare. As a newcomer, the author's writing is okay. There are errors such as word repetition in some places, but it's okay. It doesn't affect the reading. It's just that the perception may be a little worse. Also, where I saw the promotion competition, Zhang and Wei Wuhun in Class 1 made a mistake. Wang and Zhang have Wuhun fusion skills. Overall, it's okay. There's nothing serious about it.

The teacher's writing is really good (I cried with my head in my arms and bit my nails 😢) I have read more than 40 chapters and came back to read it, (it turns out there is a cp) (I cried with my head in my arms and bit my nails and hit the wall 😢) I thought Luoluo was the only one beautiful, but the writing is indeed beautiful.

It's quite interesting. For me after watching Dou 3, Frollo can appropriately rewrite some tragedies by passing through it. However, the harassment by the Ghost Emperor several times is really annoying. I suggest that he be offline as soon as possible. Come on, author baby

The writing is so good. I hope the author can update it faster. I really love reading it 😢😢😢

Yes, yes, but Ah Piao is not like Ah Piao. The fragmentation in the second half is too strong. Others may be okay, but as an old Clow player, I just feel that something is not right.

After watching it for a while, the impression is still good. Are you getting married? Can I avoid the thunder? If you must tell me, I will definitely not change it to a negative review.

The character design may be a little different, but it's not a big problem, the writing is so delicious😋

If this book is blocked, why not try Qiu Yuan x Qin Shi Mingyue, these two are very compatible.

It's very beautiful. Come on, teacher.