I'm Working on My Career, but My Wife Is Always at the Crematorium

It's quite interesting, but the end of "Small World" is too hasty, and so is the extra chapter, which seems to have been written but not written. Be careful when you are clean (receiving is very unclean, both before and after)

The writing and character creation are both great. Some misunderstandings caused by the "original work" seem quite frustrating but there is no corresponding follow-up, maybe because the focus of this book is not to slap people in the face. But I felt that the first world ended too hastily, and the system did not explain the results of Fu Chushan's assessment or Shen's handling of his father's company. Ji and Shen are opposed to each other. Even if Ji doesn't want to, Shen will target him. How to deal with this is not written at all. The if line also has the same problem. The original intention was to give the young couple who were harmed by the "original work" a good ending, but it felt like it was only half written [facepalm]. Overall, it's still very nice to watch. I'm looking forward to the rest of the world.

I can't do it anymore. . . It's really beautiful. . . Why do I feel like there are so few people? . . The author's writing style and story line are very good. . . Xql really kills me, everyone should take a look.

The writing is very comfortable and the plot is very smooth and delicate. It is a mutual love story [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Looking at the first world, you can feel the slow development of the protagonists' career and emotional lines and the process of mutual healing and redemption. It is not the kind of simple and crude slap-in-the-face and emotional fast-food plot. The characters are also very three-dimensional and not suspended.

Let me comment on the first unit first. The author is indeed writing about the love of mature men. I give it a thumbs up. The characters are all very good. It's hard not to like the protagonist. I just feel like I could write a long story, the ending is unexpected, the relationship between the characters is very shallow, except for the biological father, I don't want anyone to be the villain [facepalm] I feel like anti-heartthrob would be more delicious (personal taste) Still five stars, come on, madam

It's quite good-looking and suitable for omnivorous people. The black and white ones may not be suitable for reading. The writing is realistic and the characters are very logical. The writing is a bit too bold. It was the first time I saw this type of writing and my jaw dropped in shock. It's not a cookie-cutter favorite, with always unexpected endings. It's just like the saying that if the process is mediocre, the ending will be reversed, and if the process ends wonderfully, the ending will be mediocre. The characters of the two worlds are really good, the guiding lovers, the charm of mature men is irresistible, very doting, and the confrontation is delicate and tolerant. This kind of character should be the author's favorite, so the characters are well portrayed. I really like the first world. If the details are polished, it will be perfect [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's very good-looking, there are no inexplicable crematoriums, the logic is very smooth, and it's friendly to those with brains. However, there are some small holes that are not filled in completely. He is the half-assistant Yan from the original book in the first unit. His character seems to be okay and he is taken care of by the protagonist. He is considered a friend. How could he stab the protagonist in the back because of something that happened in the previous generation? I hope the author can fill in the pit [top post][top post]

I met an author who can write the beginning but not the middle but not the end. (The evaluation of the system, Fu Chushan's career, Ji Yunchuan's handling of the Shen Group and the future direction of the group, the reasons for the assistant's betrayal, and the ending of Shen Chengjun and Jiang Shuo) all ended without explanation. [Angry][Angry][Angry] The five-star praise is because the beginning and middle are well written.

I generally can't accept too many chapters in a small world, but this book exceeded my expectations. There are 40 chapters in the first small world, but I didn't get impatient. The author's writing style is okay and the writing is very delicate. The second small world has not been completed yet, but I have started to look forward to it [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

I think the plot is actually quite good, and it suits my taste, but there is too little. There is also another fast-traveling book on my bookshelf, which I can read in the next few days [Chigua]