Dr. Xiao Bai's Guide to Raising Kids

Give yourself a rating. After all, this is your first original work. Although I failed, I still had a lot of fun writing it `(*∩_∩*)′

It's a daily book with a fast pace and each character has their own characteristics. Everyone in Baizhoutang is good. I wish you long-term happiness. It's really good-looking and warm!ヽ(=^･ω･^=)

It's so beautiful. Who knew how valuable it would be to encounter such a beautiful article today during the exam tomorrow? Hahaha. I want to go to the petting zoo and touch the snake (private Marseille). I will revise my long review after I finish the exam. My wife, I must continue to write. Wow, this character is so annoying to me.

It's very interesting. Although the main focus is on daily life, the stories are linked one after another. It is very attractive and does not feel boring. I hope you keep reading [Blow kiss]

It's really more beautiful if it's more of an everyday style. The story is well organized and there's nothing too tight to make people confused. It's good. I hope the author will continue to write more in this way [Like] [Blow kiss]

Like! ! Thousand-year-old Buddhist snake demon x loyal guard Black Panther. The gap between them has turned into tolerance and love. They must be happy. There are many sub-CPs and they are also very sweet. I like it! ! ! (Screams and runs away)

The following is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! ! The pacing is super fast and the main characters defeat the villains in just a few lines. It's very easy and fast. Although it is a story line strung together by several small incidents, each small incident is resolved easily and quickly, and it cannot sustain the tense atmosphere foreshadowed previously. The emotional description of the main CP is particularly bland and slow. On the contrary, the emotional lines of the deputy CP are more detailed. In addition, the character design of the group CP is not good enough and not very clear. Especially the character design of Boss Bai feels weird and gives me a conflicting feeling. I don't know how to put it, but I just feel weird. On the contrary, the characters of the supporting cast are better shaped and clearer. I feel that the author is better at writing about everyday things, such as seeing a doctor in a hospital. However, this thing does not account for a lot in the entire article. The emotional description and plot description still need to be strengthened ~ I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Nice! It's a very interesting daily life ~ Although there were accidents, they were resolved later. They are the best family who are not related by blood [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting. The whole article is detailed and flowing. Everyone's personality is very distinct. Everyone's interaction is also heart-warming. The micro-group portrait [Adoration] [Shyness]

It's very beautiful and very everyday but not boring [sending my heart] [sending my heart]