On Whether Cg Will Be Triggered After Defeat

It's so sweet and delicious, but there's a problem. Wouldn't the mother and her son be elbowed away by the tomatoes?

The overall evaluation is above average. The world view is a classic Western fantasy. The world view is not too big or too small. The combat power system mainly focuses on magic and physical skills. There is no clear distinction between classes (the advantages and disadvantages depend on the individual). The character description is full and the characters are flesh and blood. The basic logic is reasonable. The writing is quite satisfactory. The emotional line is well written. It is considered an outstanding advantage. Subjective shortcomings The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses a bit quickly, but it may be because the author feels that he is getting colder and lacks some daily life, but he also wrote foreshadowing (whether this is considered a shortcoming depends on the individual) Then there are not a lot of things that are exciting and not exciting enough, but it is not a big shortcoming in writing at the moment, it is just a shortcoming that can be optimized. Then, the information about the male protagonist is a bit slow. I don't know if it is written this way intentionally for the development of the subsequent plot, or it is simply written slowly. In fact, this book does not have many shortcomings. From my current point of view, I can't see any major shortcomings. The only problem is that it is not that attractive. The review simply hopes that this book can give the author more experience to write the next one. (Originally it was rated as four stars, but the author was too bleak. I felt that the book shouldn't be so bleak, so I gave it five stars)

A relatively classic love story about traveling through another world (past life, present life? Probably). I will post a book review now to support it. I hope the author can insist on finishing this story. So far, it seems to be a good Western fantasy love story. The overall plot has a relatively smooth transition, and there are no major flaws. The story logic is complete, a little bit like the Riddler, and there is too little explanation of the story background (about the witch). So far, it seems to be in line with what the introduction said, and it is more daily, but there is also a main plot, which is probably to reveal why the male and female protagonists become so naturally close to each other and to thwart the conspiracy of the people behind the scenes [thinking]. The description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is actually the highlight of this book. The author's description of the first encounter and daily interactions between the two is quite good. The sweet love and the pull between the two tsundere monsters are quite heartwarming. They have done everything but still keep saying what they mean. I hope it won't be overdone, and there won't be any ambiguous plots involving other third parties. After all, pure love for a single female protagonist is king. I hope Lin Ang and Setila will confess soon. They would rather watch the daily interactions between the two people who really confirm their relationship. It should be more interesting [smirk][smirk]. That's all I want to say. If you like to watch Chun Aiwen with a single heroine or Loli Mom (? Probably), you can watch it [I learned it]. Come on, author, make sure you let me finish reading this sweet love story [Sending Hearts]

Some scenes in the first few chapters have too long dialogues, and there are too many dialogues between the supporting characters. I feel that it is not conducive to grabbing the interest of new readers who want to see the interaction between the male and female protagonists. I insist on seeing that the writing is much better in the later part. The daily writing is very interactive and sweet. The relationship between the male and female protagonists continues to develop, focusing on daily life. The female protagonist is very cute.

Sweet, sweet, meow! More meow! What I want to see is this mouth-toothed cat! [Crazy] [Crazy] [Crazy] (I'm not a lolita fan, it's just that the person I like happens to be a loli) (The author gives me a lot of support [sending my heart] [sending my heart]) (The heroine is really cute) (PS: Does the author know that he is also very cute and gentle [blowing kiss][blowing kiss])

Beautiful and super sweet. In fact, I quite like the beginning of the original version. Now that it has been changed, although the information is conveyed more naturally, the dialogue between the two of them is a bit difficult to understand. But I got better and better as I continued to write.

I like this style of book very much. Combat and daily life are very good, warm and not boring. The character creation of Setier is super cute [laughing], Loli Mummy is great! Ps. This book is very similar to "When Jasmine Blooms" that I have read before. Jasmine is also very cute.

The book is quite interesting, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very sweet. In the early stage, the relationship between the male and female protagonists developed very quickly, which was a bit uncomfortable. Does the cover of this book feature the heroine? I personally feel that the cover could be replaced with a more attractive illustration to attract more readers.

Hey hey hey, so sweet, hey hey so cute. The author himself said that there is a knife, and there is even a be ending option, so proceed with caution The latest news, the author suddenly became honest, now he is [laughs]

Sweet, please support me

I love watching, but I also like mature women [blowing kisses]

In fact, I can't tell whether the book is good or bad. The first one I read was The Strongest Son-in-Law. Can you expect me to have any discernment? Anyone who can watch it will give it a good review [laughing evilly]

It's my type, 50 points [shy]

Okay, worth a look Very good-looking, definitely not a loss if you buy it. In addition, the author is actually a cat girl, meow₍^˶ ╸𖥦 ╸˵^₎⟆

Persistence, good-looking, love to watch

I love this novel so much that I wake up laughing in my dreams at night. I support the author [like]

I love reading it, it's sweet. Although the writing is jerky in some places, the writing is quite natural and it's quite comfortable to read.

The plot has a sense of story, does not appear stiff, and has a strong sense of imagery. The content of the article is okay, it's a slow-burning sweet article, I don't see any interesting points so far [blowing kiss] [laughs]

Don't die, it's really great

Give this point support

Beautiful, really good book

It's right to play straight, and it's right to be less emotional. It looks good.

It's pretty good, sweet. I don't know why the rating is so low?

I like it, and the height is just right. It's getting harder and harder for lolita to be tall nowadays. I'm afraid I won't be able to see a group of Astartes lolita in time [face covering]

Read it, feel good

If you like Western fantasy, you can read it. This book is not bad, but the chapters are a bit short.

It's good to read, but I feel like it's a bit short. The author must keep writing!

It's so sweet and beautiful. I just read a poisonous book and it just gave me a break.

The rhythm is well controlled, and the daily descriptions are quite heartwarming. Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

Okay, very good, at least it looks sweet to me