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The setting is interesting, and the author should have an outline. The pre-enrollment chapters do suffer from over-polishing, but that's innocuous. For me, interesting settings and story development are greater than beautiful writing. As long as it does not affect the smoothness of reading, I can accept it. However, I still recommend that the author use concise descriptions [smile]

It is recommended that after the protagonist arrives in [Utopia], he should not change the name [Utopia·Beyond Paradise] to [Utopia·Utopia]

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Not bad, but the growth rate A on the panel is more reflected in the main body, and the growth on the stand-in has not been seen yet. Looking forward to it

It looks good, I love reading it, the author is great, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Is what i expected

Suddenly I realized, wasn't this the wizard's version of the silver chariot in the early stage?

It seems that the first experience is pretty good so far, and I don't know who the heroine is, but? It would have been great without such high-quality HP fanfics [face-covering][face-covering]

Very good, pretty good-looking

This novel is very good

I am a farmer, this is genius

So pretty, so pretty😆

Okay, okay, okay, okay.

Still very beautiful

Greatness needs no words [shy]

I finally waited for a book that blended two world views that I could only see in my dreams [I almost cried] By the way, will reading "The World" trigger a pause?

The theme is very novel, substituting the avatar into the world view of Hogwarts

Very good book, made my brain spin

The author's writing is very organized and palatable

Interesting, magical, every stroke is perfect, the author's ideas are clear and perfect.