Twelve Talismans, People Play Gods in a World of Low Martial Arts

A classic online novel written more than ten years ago, the protagonist seems to have an aura of ridicule. At the beginning, the protagonist encounters a seriously ill young lady. The servants and people who eat melons mock the protagonist for no reason. The protagonist backhand cures the rich lady and slaps everyone in the face. Then a miracle doctor pops up to question and mock the protagonist. , The protagonist cured the demented child and slapped the miracle doctor in the face. Later, the city lord's wife fell ill. The city lord's cronies asked the protagonist to treat the illness. They scolded the protagonist for crooked ways and threatened to use force. Then the protagonist defeated them. The result was that the younger ones were beaten and the older ones were beaten. The city lord took 100 guards to arrest the protagonist... It is recommended to watch with horse charms.

Ah, all kinds of problems have been reflected in these 10 chapters. By the fifth chapter, we have seen many obvious problems of rigidly applying templates. Applying templates is not a problem that does not test writing skills and logical details. For experienced writers, applying templates is just a hassle-free, but for newcomers, using templates is not a problem. To be honest, setting a template is not only a simple matter of saving time and effort, but also filling the gap in ability to write a work that is passable. However, the differences between various types and experienced authors can be easily seen. It is best to polish it again, otherwise It can only be said that it is about 7.2 To 7.8 Points. I think this is a good score. If it is above 8 points, it can only be purely based on traffic. If you only maintain this level, you cannot rely on strength. I will not give a score that is too bad. I only hope that the author can improve it later. Awareness of these problems is something that every new author will experience. Don't feel too difficult. Just take your time and make changes slowly. If you have enough time and are not in a hurry, you can try to polish the book again. There are not many times now. There is still time to polish it.

Twelve charms and masks were cut into dogs,

The content is quite novel, the pace is fast, and it's very interesting to watch. What attracts me the most is the "Twelve Talismans" and the "Black Shadow Corps". These two golden fingers look very cool! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] To be honest, it was well written and very interesting. I liked to click on it when I was bored. The only shortcoming was that the protagonist's twelve talismans weakened his power, but later on, as his mental power became stronger, the power of the twelve talismans also became stronger. This setting is actually quite interesting. It's not too invincible, otherwise it would be boring [blowing kiss]

It looks good, but these 12 spells have been weakened at the epic level [smile]

Garlic bird, garlic bird, gently I leave, just as I came gently

There are sects, there are cultivators, there are traditional cultivator novels. If you want to read the kind of unique method, you can run away first.