The Sun and the Moon Make the Same Mistake: Am I Also the Great Supernatural Power of the Law of Cause and Effect?

A good fanfic, the combat performance is more in line with the original work. Looking at many Sun and Moon fandoms, this one respects the law of cause and effect quite a lot, and gives it to the protagonist at every turn. The law of cause and effect, good job, don't lose points, give these time-traveling protagonists a hard one. However, can the author write less about killing people? People don't have to die when writing about them (could it be that you are a fan of Ji Yueren?)😠😡🤬 The writing is only okay, and the plot design is relatively logical. There are so many pitfalls, have you figured out how to fill them in, author? Finally, I hope the author can update twenty or thirty chapters so that readers can enjoy reading it all at once.

There is no logic problem in this fanfic, and it is original. The "reincarnation" setting was a bit shocking when it came out. It is an innovation based on the original "The Same Fault in the Sun and the Moon". It is very good-looking. It is not as stiff as other "The Same Fault in the Sun and the Moon" fanfics. It is ranked among the best among the "The Same Flow in the Sun and the Moon" fanfics (I originally wanted to say it was number one, but it may be a bit of a rip-off). In short, it is very good-looking and the updates are guaranteed. I hope the author will not run away. It is really difficult to find a fanfic of "The Same Fault in the Sun and the Moon" of this quality.

Very good, please write more about the relationship between the lazy sister and the protagonist😋

Hello author, I have been quietly following your fan works. The sense of fate (or fate) between Shuizawa Jun and Gongsun Ling who "shared the same darkness of night, but breathed towards the two poles of dawn" deeply touched me. Their feelings (which I think are still there, including Gongsun Ling's relationship with the protagonist) are in this kind of epic (before and after the 11th Battle of Cause and Effect). They are the gaps in the hero's armor and the place where the light enters. In the grand chapter written in the war between Dharma seekers and Dharma corpses, those unfinished vows (we will still walk together on the road ahead, right?), The love that is too late, and the tenderness that must be betrayed, are like gold sinking into the epic riverbed. Totally immersing me in their world. As a reader, my heart beats for every interaction they have, and I worry about the possible separation. No matter which ending you choose, I want to thank you for creating such a touching story. If I can tell you a small wish: I secretly hope to see them find the light of each other. No matter what, I will cherish all the emotions of following this story All in all, can it be a happy ending? Please🥺[crying] I hope you can see it [almost crying]

Among Sun and Moon fans in Tomato, it is already a rare good book. The crossover between ancient and modern plots is quite good [shy][shy][shy]

There's nothing wrong with the logic, the combat power isn't overwhelming, and my senses look pretty good. The timeline is based on the protagonist's past (Gongsun Ling's era), and there are other timelines interspersed with it, so it doesn't look confusing.

It's a very good book among the fanfics about Sun and Moon.

Yes, it's just that the literary talent and emotional depiction are a bit lacking, but I respect the original work and the setting doesn't make the drama out of place. I'm a little afraid to read it. After waiting for so long, Yishui is not sure whether reincarnation is really useful or whether the people who come back are real. So can the author give an accurate answer? Is the ending going to be he? [Almost crying]

It's a relatively good-looking Sun and Moon fic. I hope there are more of them. After all, they are all fics. I hope they can change some things and make the ending better. It's really good-looking. I think Sun and Moon are number one at the moment. I have my own opinions. Unlike other fans, I feel a little awkward watching it. Although it has been revived recently, I am still afraid that it will be discontinued again, which is somewhat unsettling... In short, Super Invincible is good-looking (although the front is a bit messy due to multiple narratives). The only discomfort is that I feel that the plot development will be biased...

Just give yourself a brief review.

Keep up the good work, the interaction between Lazy Sister and Ah Shui is also great.

Is it a female author? The writing is good, and I can manage switching timelines back and forth, but this subject matter may seem a bit difficult for people who have never watched Sun and Moon Make Mistakes. Finally, I don't really care if there is a female protagonist or not. Bonds and relationships have long gone beyond that. But, I beg you, please don't make a double act and have a male protagonist, okay?

It's a good book, but why doesn't the author update it? Can you come back and update?

There are no problems with the narrative logic, and the growth of the protagonist can be seen. There are no cheats or unrealistic things. At the same time, it is a simple world view of the sun and the moon without any extraneous things. All in all, this is a very good Sun and Moon fanfic.

Very good, but the article could be more detailed and the pace is a bit fast

So far, I have seen the best written and closest to the original Sun and Moon fanfic. The author will be back soon!

The protagonist seems a little crazy behind the scenes?

I really like Yishui and Gongsun Ling, have a good relationship

I may not have grasped it well at the beginning, and the rhythm was a little off, but I saw that the rhythm got better and better later on, and the combat power, timeline, etc. Were not broken, so it can be regarded as first-rate.

Why am I about to get stabbed after just a few chapters [crying]

It is worth reading among the Sun and Moon fanfics, it is very good.

Damn Hundan! Come and get together with the lazy sister!

I suddenly laughed when I saw the introduction. I had put it on my bookshelf before. I hadn't read it in the past few days and suddenly I came back and found that there was an extra sentence at the beginning [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I like to tell the truth and write better than the guy with the mirror next door. It's just a bit abusive, but it doesn't matter, it's just the characteristics of Sun and Moon. Whether I change my face in the future depends on whether I am he in the end. As for the plot bugs and the like caused by he, it doesn't matter, right? You are the author, don't lose your share. If that doesn't work, let's directly introduce the power of the magnetic field, so that the 900,000 Gongsun Lings can be immortal, and the protagonist's reincarnation does not have to deal with the law of cause and effect (

The writing style is okay. If you use the novel genre alone, many of the pictures are not very clear. I hope it will be popular enough to publish comics in the future. The technique is based on the style of Sun and Moon. It is very good. It is much better than others. The combat power is not particularly bad at the moment.

To tell you the most straightforward thing, it's super beautiful. Here's a tribute to our legendary punishment-resistant king, Lao Shui

It's very beautiful. The author has a complete outline and the plot is very logical.

The protagonist's sect's cultivation method can sacrifice all things, but can it also sacrifice the Mirage of All Industries, the Corpse Immortal of All Industries, or even the cause and effect itself?

The Sun and Moon fanfic is great to watch, and the greedy main character is awesome.

A very good book