Looking for HP Snape Fans (With Better Writing Skills)
I found that most of the highly rated ones also have bad character designs and relatively novice writing skills. There are very few good-looking ones. Looking for a Snape fan who writes well and is not a noob. Thank you very much, thank you
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It's very interesting. At first I thought it was because there was no CP. After all, the male protagonist is desperate to climb up and everything is his stepping stone. However, I can drink CP even if it's Si Jiao. I watched the interaction between him and Si Jiao and the corner of my mouth turned up. Hahahahaha. Both of them are now pretending to be sincere.
Wow, the character of the protagonist in this book is really great. He is a standard Slytherin, who controls accurately to achieve his goals, but frequently loses control when meeting Snape. Snape has a fatal attraction to the protagonist. The pull between the two is really full of tension. If you want to read HP, you must read this book.
This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have read so far! ! ! In the later stage, the author describes a lot of psychological activities, but it is not annoying, and the interaction between the two protagonists is also very loving [laughs] I really like this book! No one has OCC, but the changes in emotions and mentalities based on the original characters are very touching. The author is so awesome👍
The setting is very interesting, especially the by-product part hahaha ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*) haha the male protagonist has a faint sense of man-machine (☆▽☆) I like it
Wow, I finally saw the beginning of the love line in Chapter 150. Of course, the pure extreme pulling in the previous part is also very exciting, but the plot progress is relatively slow. I am only in the second grade now. You have to be patient when reading. I don't know if the last chance to absorb talents will be Dumbledore or Grindelwald. I look forward to [Please update][Please update]
Teacher, what you write is so good, it is really attractive. The characters of Edric and Severus are both very well drawn. Teacher, I am absolutely falling in love with you. The description of the emotions between them is delicate and hazy, but it still allows people to feel the tacit understanding between the two of them. Emotional changes are not abrupt and smooth. Moreover, the teacher-student discussion between Edric and Severus was portrayed very logically in the teacher's writing. The whole story is very good, except for the ending which is a bit short. I thought I would see the warm daily life of a family of three after Edric and Severus officially got together, or Edric's life after graduation, but I didn't expect it to end before the seventh grade graduation. I have a weak question, can the teacher write extras? Looking forward to the teacher's next work, the writing is really good. I have a question, why can't I recommend this book? Is it a problem with my own equipment?
Kaka, save the child, I really can't get stuck here. One chapter is never too many, and ten chapters are never too few. It would be better if you suddenly find that you have accidentally sent out the entire text. Of course, I know this is a bit exaggerated, but I really, really like your book! Baodengba Baodengba you are a really rare good book among HP fans @erbu
It's beautiful, the tension between the two of them is great, and little Kyle is an angel. It may be a bit much about the practice of black magic and removing curses, but I quite like it. The inner drama is also very interesting. [Like][Like][Like]
I can't imagine how the protagonist could be with Snape, it's so unique, hahaha
The male protagonist's last name is a bit strange
How happy that a big professor raises a little professor
It's very beautiful. I personally think it's okay. Good reviews. The protagonist is pretty awesome. I love watching this kind of movie✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎
Wow! This is so pretty ✨(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Discover the treasure
It's so beautiful that it makes me laugh [smile][smile][smile] Why do I feel like I haven't finished writing? I feel like there are a lot of things that have no ending.
Share the homophonic memes with your friends and have fun together~ Do you know where glib people can't work? Can't work at a gas station because the oil gun will slip~
Very interesting HP article, the side effect of the special system is actually giving birth to children. So interesting
So delicious, that's what Slytherin love is
The character design is not broken, the personality is distinct, not bad
It creates a very real character living in the magical world, another kind of Slytherin.
Describe the psychological structure and detail. Unique perspective
It's very good. The plot and emotions are well described and not abrupt at all. It's the only book I can follow.
It's very interesting. The main character's IQ is online throughout the text, and the psychological activities are well described. It's a good book.
Very good emotional lines 😋, the gradually intertwined emotional lines are very cool! Teacher please update soon.
The emotional line is natural and convincing without force-feeding you a mouthful of industrial saccharine. There is a bit of a problem with the writing, but it's okay. I just came here to have some candy, and I'm very satisfied with it.
The setting is quite novel, the writing is good, and the description of emotions is very vivid, but sometimes it feels that the description is too complicated, as if even breathing has a deep meaning.
It looks good, and the characters are very good. I want to know who the male protagonist is.