Starting from Tokyo Ghoul and Going Through Unlimited Comics

The writing is quite good, there are no surprises so far, and there are more updates. This kind of unlimited streaming reduces the desire for others to not read it at all, and the world view is expanded to write something of your own (refer to the fire method next door)

Awesome, worthy of being an author who has written four books

I support a wave of support, but some of the comments are reasonable. It lacks a bit of excitement. The shadow ability has such a powerful name, but it feels not very useful, and it feels a bit overwhelming. Jackie Chan World feels too rushed. Obviously, more masks and spells can be planned, but I am looking forward to the future Jackie Chan World. The bad guys also have bosses that the bad guys want to follow.

I personally like the work Samsara Paradise, so the style of this book is actually very similar to Samsara Paradise. Because it is a paradise, the protagonist cannot be invincible from the beginning, and will gradually grow up. There may be some areas that are not handled properly. Please feel free to comment. If you have good suggestions, please feel free to @LAOZU. Thank you for your support and likes.

It looks okay so far, so I'll give it four stars.

It's very good. The protagonist has a good character, is decisive in killing, and does things neatly. The supporting characters are also designed with great care. The protagonist is mature and his acting style is a bit like Su Xiao's. I am also an old bookworm. After reading this book, I feel that this book has made a good start. As long as the quality is maintained, it will be a very good book.

Very good, there are no obvious poisonous points, the protagonist kills decisively and has a bottom line. . It just lacks a bit of excitement. The author could consider recruiting one or two supporting characters to do errands and support. . . No matter how strong the protagonist is, there is no place for him to show off. Isn't this Jin Yi Ye Xing? [Laughing]

Looks ok so far

It's a good book, much better than the previous one, but the author doesn't have much traffic. However, I suggest that if the author really plans to take the road of writing a book, he should write this book well, because unlimited streaming is like this. Readers will save a copy and wait until the copy is finished to read it, and then continue to save.

It's a very novel angle, and it describes the real thing. It reminds me of a certain fire technique.

It's pretty, not bad

Average, no poisonous points

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

Looks pretty good so far

Like my favorite type

So far it looks good [shy]

Look good, come on, come on

Looks very good

Not bad, I can eat, eat, eat

The writing is okay, you can take a look

Very interesting, good luck to the author! [Sending Hearts]

It's okay, I need followers, I look a little lonely [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

Not bad [eat melon] Let me think about it, for the shadow system, I first thought of the Shadow King that I upgraded alone, and the ten shadow spells for spell return [eat melon]

What I've seen so far is almost all about fighting.

So far, what I have written is a very orthodox Mugen Paradise series novel (if I start writing about the original world in the middle), otherwise it is a comprehensive manga/fan fiction Mugen Paradise series.

So far it looks pretty good, nothing bad about it

The plot and logic seem pretty good so far.

The writing is pretty good so far, nothing bad about it.

The characterization is good and the plot is okay, but I feel like the author cuts the book if he can't finish it, and if he's too eager, he will disrupt his rhythm.

Overall, it's pretty good. Good luck to the author [please take a closer look]