A Power Couple of Dao Companions: The Alchemy Master Is Spoiled by the Sword God
双强道侣：炼丹大佬被剑神娇宠了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 243k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 12mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
107Chapters
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After reading about 20 chapters, I got a few impressions. First, the author doesn't know much about the world of immortality, such as the level of immortality. How can the hard work of a master swordsman only withstand the foundation-building stage? It is recommended that you first understand some relevant common sense and read more novels with similar themes before writing. Second, what makes me very puzzled and speechless is that someone questioned the protagonist's alchemy skills and deliberately caused trouble. The protagonists did not teach him a lesson. Instead, they drew the talisman again to prove their innocence. They gave the person a few verbal warnings and let the person off lightly. Whoever makes the claim is the one who must provide evidence. Those who question should first provide evidence instead of letting the person being questioned prove their innocence. For example, if I suspect you stole my money, do I need you to prove that you didn't steal it? 🤭 Third, after reading about ten or twenty chapters, I was deeply impressed by the fact that a few annoying supporting characters appeared from time to time in the middle. It was an obvious old routine, questioning the jealous protagonist and then being slapped in the face, and from time to time, there were assassinations and so on. . The supporting character does not have to be a villain, but can also have a sense of justice. If the plot is always the same, you will really get bored after watching it for a long time. The last question is, does the author write at the end of each chapter that it looks like an NPC or an AI creation? 🤔 What is the ending of each chapter? The two protagonists walk hand in hand, and their road to immortality has just begun... There are many endings like this repeated. There is a way of writing each chapter as a composition 🤦
Shuangqiang accompanies me all the way to upgrade and it is a cool story, but it doesn't suit my personal preference. I prefer stories with more emotional lines.