["Cedar"][Military][Girls][Operation Delta][Crossfire/Cf][Girl Group][Lily][Red Alert: Glory of the Republic][UN]
[Chapter 1~48 foreshadowing + Lily, 49~60 Destruction Sun, last chapter 61 to 75, end] [PS: To all other novel readers who want to write or read Cedar, as well as fellow authors, I hope you can learn from my lessons and take my will to a path that I have never imagined! Thank you for your company! If you can't stand it anymore, please turn to the last one, thank you!
"Comrade Captain! Are you awake? The Yasukuni Shrine is right there. It's time to set off! My leading unmanned combat unit, the Ji infantry and tanks, and the Army aviation unit have all arrived and are at your disposal at any time!"
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Please inherit my will to search for and spread the path of "Cedar"! This is our promise…
—— Kuromori Mine Karina
Reader comments
It's good, but because there is too little information about Cedar, the overall novel is a bit awkward for those who have played Cedar. But Davari, you are the first pioneer to reclaim this land. Please work hard to keep an eye on you. I personally recommend waiting until there is more information about Cedar before writing. After all, there is still too little information. Just relying on imagination may deviate from the game itself.
The overall feeling is okay, the details of the characters are average, but the general environment of Persimmon dddd, the overall pace is a bit fast, and the grasp of the grand narrative feels a bit biased. It can add more descriptions, specifically describe the battles, establish a three-dimensional image of some characters, and then use the knife and live it, let the battlefield be the battlefield, instead of talking about who died in the battle, paying tribute, and shouldering the will. The idea is correct, but the expression is not tense. All in all, the book is good and I hope the author will give it a boost. [Love][love][love]
It's good, but because there is too little information about Cedar, the overall novel is a bit awkward for those who have played Cedar. But Davari, you are the first pioneer to reclaim this land. Please work hard to keep an eye on you. I personally recommend waiting until there is more information about Cedar before writing. After all, there is still too little information. Just relying on imagination may deviate from the game itself.
The overall feeling is okay, the details of the characters are average, but the general environment of Persimmon dddd, the overall pace is a bit fast, and the grasp of the grand narrative feels a bit biased. It can add more descriptions, specifically describe the battles, establish a three-dimensional image of some characters, and then use the knife and live it, let the battlefield be the battlefield, instead of talking about who died in the battle, paying tribute, and shouldering the will. The idea is correct, but the expression is not tense. All in all, the book is good and I hope the author will give it a boost. [Love][love][love]
Very nice book, worth recommending
Come to fulfill the promise