Cedar: A Young Commander's Daily Life

It's good, but because there is too little information about Cedar, the overall novel is a bit awkward for those who have played Cedar. But Davari, you are the first pioneer to reclaim this land. Please work hard to keep an eye on you. I personally recommend waiting until there is more information about Cedar before writing. After all, there is still too little information. Just relying on imagination may deviate from the game itself.

The overall feeling is okay, the details of the characters are average, but the general environment of Persimmon dddd, the overall pace is a bit fast, and the grasp of the grand narrative feels a bit biased. It can add more descriptions, specifically describe the battles, establish a three-dimensional image of some characters, and then use the knife and live it, let the battlefield be the battlefield, instead of talking about who died in the battle, paying tribute, and shouldering the will. The idea is correct, but the expression is not tense. All in all, the book is good and I hope the author will give it a boost. ❤️❤️❤️

Very nice book, worth recommending

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