Pony**********

The author still has studies to complete So it can only be updated during the holidays every two weeks _(:з∠)_, please understand. Thank you (🙏•͈ᴗ•͈) Through the first-person inner monologue of Sombra Throne, the story gradually reveals the mental journey of how an idealist is alienated by reality and becomes a tyrant. From the original intention of "reshaping Little Mary with light", to the disillusionment after witnessing the decay, and finally embracing the darkness in despair that "gentleness cannot save Little Mary", this transformation process is full of the tragic inevitability of ancient Greece. What is particularly profound is that the protagonist suddenly wakes up on the edge of success and realizes that he has become the embodiment of the tyranny he once resisted - this moral consciousness makes the character transcend a simple villain position. The encounter with the Princess of Friendship at the end not only completes the closed loop of time and space, but also injects the possibility of redemption into this dark narrative with the realization that "light will eventually illuminate the deepest cracks." While retaining the shell of a fairy tale, the entire story explores profound propositions such as revolutionary ethics, the cost of violence, and the dilemma of idealism. It can be regarded as an excellent expansion of the territory of children's literature.

It's quite good to watch. The protagonist's life experience is relatively new and there are many emotional scenes.

I have only watched part of it so far, and I feel that the ideas and concepts are very novel and the story is very attractive. However, the storyline advances a bit too fast, and some plots stop abruptly in the middle of the development to connect the subsequent content. Secondly, the author's scenes are very well described with detailed descriptions such as actions. Each paragraph feels quite tense when released, but more than half of the ink is devoted to the scenes and actions. It feels more like an excellent article than a novel. I think the key to the novel is the creation of the three-dimensional image of the characters, the protagonist. The supporting characters have very few psychological activities, and the amount of dialogue between the characters is also a bit small, and the few sentences are said in more formal scenes, so it gives people a sense of alienation between the characters and the readers. I personally think that the lack of the character Suilong who complains from time to time has caused other characters to be a bit pretentious and not three-dimensional enough. Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. It is a good book and it would be better if the author could keep updating it while polishing his writing style.

It's quite good to watch. I hope it will be a warm and healing daily routine without being a depressing plot. It's very promising!

It's great to see the family

Top notch writing and narrative