That afternoon, Mother was still wiping the sweat from my brow beneath the peach tree. The sorrow in her eyes was the only mystery of my childhood.
Only later did I learn that the answer was a blood feud too terrible for me to bear.
I lost my home, I lost warmth, and I even lost the ability to cry. To find my mother, I set out on a road of no return. I thought that if I became strong enough, I could win everything back. But when I finally took the seat from which I could look down upon the Three Realms, I discovered that I was merely a pawn in an even greater game, with no control over my own fate.
My celestial eye can see through every illusion in the world, yet it cannot see the warmth in people’s hearts or fathom the game being played at the cost of all living beings.
Then I met that monkey. He had become the person I most wanted to be, but could never be again.
So I decided to live another way. This time, I would protect not some cold, rigid order, but the world that had once smiled at me in the peach grove.
Really nice to look at. Personally I quite like it. I just hope that I can continue to write well and not end it. Secondly, when writing memories, it is recommended that the title contain memories. In other words, there is a transition. It cannot be said that he was in heaven one second ago. The next moment is recalled. There has to be a transition. For example, "Yang Jian and Wukong couldn't bear to show their weakness. They pulled back their left arms like a punch. When they were about to hit the monkey, Yang Jian was stunned and saw his mother waving to Yang Jian in a trance." Then I recalled the chapter. I am not good at writing. Even a short transition is a transition. Otherwise, it will look very fast. Unable to connect. The second thing is that the memories should not be too long. If you still want to write a long article, you can write a word about memories in the title, add brackets after it, and then use a number to express which chapter of the memory chapter it is, like this
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on