If HP Works Hard, It Will Become a Witch's Plaything

It's so delicious, but I eat it uneasily and fearfully, fearing that it will start being abused. Chasing serials is a big gamble for every novelist. When will Voldemort completely overpower me, will I be able to eat it boldly? Please keep updating the author, it's really good! I also ask the author to adjust the other one so that I can continue writing it as planned😭😭😭😭, it's really good. Scam, the heroine of the text is dead, the ancient story about abusing women, it makes me so angry, it makes me so angry, avoid lightning, avoid lightning, avoid lightning, avoid lightning

Very sweet love, very fond of daily life. This is a book that makes Sri Lankan teachers feel happy after reading it. Although it is not finished yet, the author updates it every day, so it is good to catch up on it every day. [Love][love][love] The heroine in the second half is too love-minded, and the teacher is too scumbag, both of them are reduced to blood bags. I always liked it and kept following it, but now I am slightly disappointed. Abandoned. The second half of this article will really make you angry because of the emphasis on the heroine.

The beginning is good, the middle is good, but the ending is unbearable. It is recommended that you only read chapters 142/143, the graduation ceremony and prom, and up to chapter 145, and don't read the rest. I will assume that this book ends when the heroine and SS graduate, and that they will travel around the world. They have been hanging out for about 2 years. Old Fu is like the original, and so are Lily and Old Potter. SS returns to work at Hogwarts in a normal capacity. I can even accept that under the setting of this book, SS will still provide some protection to Harry, and then add an extra chapter... As for how to completely eliminate Lao Fu in the end, I think Lao Deng will always find a way [Like] I have to admit that the author does have a good way of writing extras, and the previous writing is really good, and the book is still finished, so I gave it 4 stars. Otherwise, I would have given this ending 2 stars. The following is a summary of the lightning protection plot and some personal gossip. If you don't mind, don't scroll down. [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] The ss followed Lao Fu insistently, and throughout the period of following him, the heroine was in pain, distressed, fearful of war, and worried about the ss. The predicted events are as in the original work. The heroine helped Lao Deng behind her back. In the end, on that day, old Potter was still dead. The heroine used ancient magic with protection and love as the root to die together with Lao Deng who used Avada in the form of a shield. Lily and Harry were left alive. The heroine died for Lily. There is no need to elaborate on the plot that follows. Finally, at the point where SS died, SS seemed to hear the heroine telling him to live, so he asked the trio to take out the medicine from his pocket and treat himself. At the end, the war ended, and the heroine came back with memories of when she was just 17 years old and had just graduated. It is said that all memories will be restored in the future, but the details were not written. Seriously, what does this mean to the heroine? I understand that it is difficult to write about the period when ss followed Lao Fu, but it is better to just show that he is, and then write it in a vigorous and touching way. What does that count now? Now that she is back with the best memories of that period, what does the heroine's previous pain count? Moreover, SS has not changed at all, and his timeline and important nodes have basically not changed at all. I understand that the SS who have experienced these are the SS we see later. But now the author has given ss happiness and enough light when he was in school. In the end, he still has to follow the route of the original work, he still has to kill Dumbledore, and he still has to be bitten by Nagini. Even because the heroine dies in the book, ss will probably be more painful than the original work. So? ? ? Finally, I also wrote an ending where the heroine returns with incomplete memory. Why bother? It's better to just be. After reading other people's comments, they make sense. The heroine is a good tool, and her beauty, intelligence, thoughtfulness, respect and other advantages are just a label. The 4 stars I gave before were still too much.

Super in line with the character! And it's so sweet. Why is it so sweet? It made me smile with big teeth in the middle of the night. It was a lightning escape. I was just giving it a five-star review, but when I saw the different reviews, I immediately wrote it to death for the heroine. Snape also lived a life worse than death. I don't know what the author wanted to write such an article about revenge against society.

This meal is so delicious. The portrayal of the young SS is not naive at all. I feel like I have seen a living student SS. She is gloomy, mean, sensitive, talented and has a high self-esteem. Her early transformation is so cute that her face is full of blood. The baby heroine is also a little snake with a strong talent for magic, gentleness, rationality and a little evil taste. She is born in a French aristocrat and yearns for freedom. At heart, she is a little eagle who pursues knowledge and truth. I want to see if SS will join the Death Eater camp and the relationship between her and the heroine.

How can there be such a sweet cp in the world? I'm not happy with the psychological committee. It feels like the heroine is just like an accessory, and Snape is the protagonist, right? It's also a bit confusing at the end. The heroine doesn't have any role at all. It's a high-pitched and low-key role. To be honest, I feel that the supporting role is deeper than the heroine. If you talk about the first impression, the heroine is just like an ordinary person. I know all his good friends better than the heroine. I feel that his good friends are more three-dimensional than the heroine. I also feel that Snape and the heroine don't have much censorship behind them, and it seems that the heroine is always being wronged! ! Maybe this is life, but am I reading a novel now? These three stars are for the heroine and the first half of the love story during school days. I hope the author can change it (I didn't expect that my well-received novel would collapse later, but I rarely give reviews)

It's simply too good to watch. The male and female protagonists are so compatible. They are really good at emotional changes and mutual pull, and they go both ways. The male protagonist is attracted first, and then the female protagonist is enlightened, making Sijiao completely unbearable. Moreover, the relationship progresses very smoothly and smoothly. There are no other people in the middle, and there are not too many supporting characters and deputy CPs to make a mess. The duo of the male and female protagonists is simply great. Just enjoy the story of the male and female protagonists quietly.

It's so nice to write, Mrs., Quoting the original text: The chocolates Severus gave Lexia on Valentine's Day. The first layer was very bitter, like Severus's original family, patiently melting his guarded and sharp heart. The second layer of sour and sweet daily life The last layer is a taste unique to them. I didn't express it very well, but in short, this article well describes Severus's changing heart. Their interaction made me feel like Lexia existed beside them. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Read this book for me. It's very delicate and beautiful. Come on, try to update a thousand chapters before finishing it Yes, it's so good that I can't bear to let go when the person next to me is crunched. It's so good that I can't let go even if I slap someone in the face. Hahahahahahaha

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so sweet Before, I remembered that the introduction said HE. I was originally fattening up, but then I saw that the heroine was gone in the title, and then there was no HE in the introduction. So why did this book change so much [awkward laugh]

It's so delicious when I go [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] It's so cool, my relationship develops so quickly, my aunt can't stop laughing. The really cute boy Snape, I can't do it anymore. The author [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] The more I write, the better.

Not bad, but too sharp. Although this was an inevitable ending caused by the background of the times and the desire for power deep in ss's heart, I really didn't see the heroine changing the original ending of ss (except that ss had happy memories with the heroine deep in his heart) The ending... I don't know how to describe it. I feel like the author forced a twist on a book that was clearly BE and told readers that it is HE [smile][smile]

How to say it? All I can say is that the author doesn't love the heroine in his novel, he loves someone else. It gives me the feeling that it is completely on Lily's side, and the so-called righteous side, but the heroine's early character image and the backward character actually have a big break, but I can force it to be interpreted as love, but the death is too fast, the death is meaningless, a character who died entirely for Lily makes me feel very sad, because he made up for Harry's miserable childhood, but at the same time the savior is still Harry. Because I initially thought that the author would create a new savior, such as their child, and then cause the heroine's death, but I didn't expect that he would die for Lily, and SS's transformation made me very unhappy. Did he join the righteous side or for Lily, so who did he love? If the author had not found a different way to have a dream, I feel that it is completely, not completely, that is, you can only see the heroine's dedication to her SS, but you can't say that you rarely see SS's dedication to the heroine, because maybe Slytherin's love is so unspeakable and Lily's collapse of the personal trainer, I still can't understand it, because SS is very good to her. Snape was good, but he didn't deserve Miss Sauron's love. (Because I think ss is not pure enough)

It's very interesting. The SS described by the author is really cute, and the heroine is keen on teasing SS. It's a bit evil but really interesting. If you don't get these interesting things about his character, you may think that he is a little cold, and you may not even feel love. However, it is written very cleverly, and the progress is very fast. I have written everything in the introduction, but Voldemort, I always feel that it will be a bit sadistic later on, and there is the heroine. I hope she can stick to her ideals and not change too much for love.

Emotional line: The portrayal is very delicate, which is the best among the Tomato HP fanfics I have read. The core of Snape has not been changed in this article. The emotional line is delicate, but not all smooth sailing. Their relationship has small twists and turns but no major misunderstandings. This makes this novel more delicious, like a small cake with 80% sugar (non-zero sugar version) Story line: The plot is not procrastinating and the story is coherent. I am a bit emotional. I was stabbed by a small knife near the end of the story (but this plot is so close to the characters given to the protagonists by the collaborators, which makes me think they will really make such a choice). I cried for a while [almost crying] in the middle of the night (the ending is good! Please read to the end)

The writing is very good, a very sweet article, mainly because the update frequency is very stable, three chapters a day. In short, the writing is very delicious, and it is not a loss to invest in it. (♡⌂♡) The author's writing was pretty good in the early stage, but fell apart in the later stage. Very simple open high and go low. Maybe they said something that was very consistent with the characteristics of the Sri Lankan religion. When they complained or something, some people would say that you don't seem to have any interesting articles. But I want to say, isn't this a female channel? Do you know what female channel means? If someone really likes Sri Lanka, of course he doesn't care what the heroine is like. You can read this book and understand that some authors don't want to be OOC, but this writing is really frustrating. It looked sweet in the early stage, but it turned into this in the later stage. Unspeakable heartache. In summary, if there are friends who want to see sweeter Sri Lankan fan fiction, you can take a look at the early stage. I still recommend the early part, it's very well written. [Eat melon] Maybe it's me who thinks that female videos should first be dominated by female protagonists. All in all, I think the heroine is having a hard time in this book. At least she wasn't happy. The originally proud flower, alas, what a pity. Although I know it, I definitely can't see it. But I still want to say, all book friends, please be cautious, be more cautious. Please read more book reviews when you read a book in the future. Many book friends have fallen for this book. Then I saw that the hot reviews were complimentary, and I knew exactly what was going on. Because I also followed the serialization at the beginning, and the writing was very sweet at the time. Later, someone asked me what it was written in the back. Is this also called sweet? It's really sweet when you're following the series, right? So you should be cautious and read more book reviews!!! Especially the long reviews!

It's very sweet, not too OOC. It's a very good article. I hope the author can make Snape more frank later, and stop having misunderstandings and cold wars. Just stay happy like this, and don't join the Death Eaters, otherwise it will be really difficult.

It's so good that I don't even know if someone is dead next to me. The heroine is so cute🥹 Our professor is so cute that we don't know what the world is, and the author is so good at writing🥹 Please update quickly, dear 🥹

That's right, I recommend just reading the third volume. In fact, just watch the plot of the school part. Because the plot line is reasonable and not OOC, the ending is actually reasonable. I read all the way to chapter 186, and then decisively gave up on the rest of the story (the ultimate break). Because I'm afraid of getting a big knife. Generally speaking, Teacher Lafite's bat sculpture of Sisi is extremely delicious, and it can be called a great work in this area. But it's a pity that I am a career-oriented female protagonist. . . It is with great regret that I must announce that Teacher Lafite... Out Because there is no special OOC, Sisi's subsequent pain is still painful, as if someone suddenly stuffed you a lottery ticket and you rushed to claim the prize only to find that the ticket was fake. . . All in all, if you are looking for a non-OOC novel and don't mind the heroine being moderately romantic, this book is still worth reading. Finally, thank you Teacher Lafite for your hard work. Bat 🦇 sculpture (only refers to the part containing bats in this article), I will taste it again and again 😋 (picky eater) Just found out. Teacher Lafite's second cp is James Potter. . . Then I probably know that the teacher didn't love Sisi to begin with, so the Sisi in his writing is such that people feel... Well... It's hard to describe in a word. But usually Si Si will come over to read CP Si Si's articles because he wants to see the protagonist's happiness. It's actually quite sad, after all, the little bats here are really cute.

The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and while being based on the original work, we can see another possibility. The portrayal is so vivid, logical, and does not collapse the character, so we can see the love and pull between the two. To be honest, because of this, under the background of that era, Sri Lanka's teachings are useless without swords, and I already have an ominous premonition [I'm about to cry]. But in fan fiction, everyone is doing it for love. I beg the author to give him a big he! Sisi can't suffer anymore! It's really difficult to write for the author who is bald [laughing evilly], because the writing is so good so far [sending my heart]

I've read about 50 chapters, and it's so sweet and fragrant that I can't stop at all. The heroine is kind but has a little bit of a bad character. The heroine's best friend also wrote a letter that gave the heroine a lot of good advice! But I feel like the male protagonist and the female protagonist have different ideas. I feel like the male protagonist wants to risk his soul and life in order to climb up. There is always a feeling of torture. It feels so uncomfortable to not be able to climb up or down! ! !

It's fast paced and doesn't drag at all. The aunt smiled throughout the whole process, and the emotional changes were portrayed very delicately and naturally. Si Jiao is also not OOC, awkward, venomous, not capable of love, and has rich characters. A high-quality HP article that you don't want to skip.

It's so well written [Admiration] It's so well written about Snape's awkwardness during his school days. I also love the heroine, the princess who likes to tease little bats [is full], I'm so excited! ! I finished reading it in one go, waiting for the update

I have read a lot of hp articles, and this is one of the ones I have been following. At that time, I hesitated because of the low rating, but after reading the first few chapters, I decided to continue reading. The relationship between the SS and the heroine is written very naturally and smoothly. The characterization of SS is also very successful. I never get tired of reading it. Three chapters a day is really too few. I need to update more [I learned]

It's super cool. I've been looking for parent-generation HP fanfics recently, but most of them are from the sub-generation.

All I can say is that you are in luck if you like to watch Young Teacher Si fall in love. Young SS is really cute. His relationship with the heroine Bao Bao is also sweet, and the characters are not very OOC. I didn't finish it at first, but now that I have finished it, I plan to finish the plot, but after reading the book review, I found that the ending is actually be... Did the author come to the newspaper office to give me back the sweet and cute little couple in the early stage?

Help 🆘It's so sweet to me, the little bat Sif is so invincible and cute ahhhhhhh, I want to be happy oooooooo

The first 50 or so chapters were pretty good, but I skimmed through the table of contents and reviews and decided not to read it. Around the 50th chapter, something didn't feel quite right. I saw Golden Irises and cut my losses in time. I don't pay much attention to the ending, so it's okay. For those who pay more attention to the plot of the entire book, I would avoid it. At least what I wrote above is okay, so that's why it's four stars.

The young Snape's pursuit of absolute power, love and dignity is very well portrayed. This mentality allowed him to temporarily ignore the problems in the process of pursuit, and did not understand Voldemort's own mistakes until the people around him faced bloodshed. In the environment of Hogwarts (the British wizarding world), Snape's character, his own environment, ideals and pursuits doomed Snape's tragic fate. The heroine is more sober, and she realizes everything Snape faces more quickly. At the same time, she is free and powerful. Her respect for life and love for Snape allow her to actually let Snape get rid of the guilt of leaking the prophecy, although Snape actually suffered the pain of losing the only person he loved. But Snape actually got rid of Dumbledore's control of his personality. Although he still obeyed Dumbledore's protection of Harry in the original book, it became for the purpose of destroying Voldemort and for the death of the heroine. I really like Harry in "Harry Potter". Lily escapes from death, which makes Harry's childhood a little happier, and Sirius can also be by Harry's side. But Snape didn't know whether it was Da Da's appreciation of the tragedy of his characters' fate or the irresistibility of the characters' fate at the time of writing. In short, the tragedy in the second half was too strong, even though Da Da resurrected the heroine in the end.

It's so cute. It's so cute! ! The little bat Snape at the beginning; the later study partner; the gradually falling in love with each other... The writing is super vivid! The interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is very cute, and the development is very natural. I like it so much🥺🥺🥰🥰🥰 I haven't seen such a cute article in a long time... I don't know how the follow-up development will be. I hope it won't be tortured [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

It's good to watch, but I saw it too early. I hope it won't be unfinished or interrupted. The heroine is neither time travel nor rebirth. In her eyes, Snape is just Snape, an awkward little bat who has nothing to do with the double agents of later generations. She only loves Snape because Snape is worth it.