
Hp: Severus? Mine!
hp:西弗勒斯?我的了!
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Omg! ! ! I Found a HP Article That Kills All!
Hogwarts has no savior, find it yourself! Dark Flow, a Hogwarts taming field, a wanted wandering Hogwarts
I Have Given up Hope on High-Quality HP. Please Slap Me in the Face with a Book.
Hp Sweet Article About Being Pampered by Snape
Hpthe Old Man Is Crazy! ! the Heroine and Sri Lanka Teach CP
Want to watch something similar to "[HP] Good morning, Mrs. Snape!" Book. It's the kind of person who doesn't come here just for the strategy, but is moved by the process of slowly getting along with each other. It's best to be Professor Snape from his childhood, after all, old men are the best when they are crazy! ! !
I Was so Angry That I Bluntly Said That HP Didn't Have a Book About Conferring Gods😋
I want to read a book like "Harry Potter: Slytherin".
Looking for HP Series Female Videos! ! !
It's best to have an original female protagonist, it doesn't matter who the male protagonist is ٩( 'ω' )و
Looking for High-Quality HP, the Kind Where the Protagonist's Personality Is Full of Charm
I want to read books similar to "Hogwarts: The Days I Was a Book King" (I don't know why I can't find it in the "Want to read books similar to + add books" mentioned above). And when I read unfinished books, I feel like *****. Madam, please come back.
I'm Going Crazy Without Any HP Parent-Generation Articles❗❗❗
I really want to read the story of the parent generation. Anyone with CP is good. Anyway, let me read it❗❗❗I want to read the story of the parent generation. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
New Variety Film and Television, the Heroine Quickly Travels to Popular Film and Television Dramas
Cp Religion, Female Rape Article, No Knife, No Bisexuality
Want to watch something similar to "HP: I really want to raise a Snape!" ! Book.
Looking for Hp's Original Heroine × Snape's Parents and Children
Please hp, original heroine CP Snape, no descendants! ! ! Give birth to baby bats. Original heroine! ! ! Not like Lily or Petunia. Slytherin
Please HP. the Heroine Is Very Popular with Snape.
Non-love line
Please HP Not Abuse Snape. I Have Been Obsessed with Him Recently, Cough...
I want to read a book similar to "HP: It's time for Bai Yueguang to change his role". Snape related fan fiction
Looking for HP Snape Fans (With Better Writing Skills)
I found that most of the highly rated ones also have bad character designs and relatively novice writing skills. There are very few good-looking ones. Looking for a Snape fan who writes well and is not a noob. Thank you very much, thank you
Woohoo, Is There Any HP Who Hates the Protagonist Group? Preferably Slytherin
I really can't stand HP fandom anymore. If you join Slytherin, you will be a Slytherin. Don't be so kind. It's really frustrating to watch. And I just want to read the kind of book where I hate the main character group. I really hate Ron.
Does HP Have a Parent Generation? Preferably from CP Snape, Others Are Also Fine.
I want to read a book like "HP: When I Became Lily's Cousin". I really can't accept teacher-student romance, so I want to ask if there are any relatives from the same generation
If You Want a HP Article, the CP Is from Snape😊
HP, the Heroine Is from the East, Charming and Very Strong
I would like to read a book similar to "Hp: Ravenclaw of the East".
Is There Any HP Article That Is Nice to Sif? ! ?
Want to watch something like "For the sake of Sri Lanka, he went crazy in the magic world!" Book. Please read a book that is good to Severus and has a male protagonist (it must be original). It doesn't have to be two male protagonists, but it must be good to Severus! ! ! ! If there are two male protagonists, I want Sif to be the one below
Please Ask Your Parents for Advice and Save the Child! I Really Can't Stand Bisi Jiao Xiao
I want to read a book like "HP: The White Devil Above the Rules". Don't forget that the heroine is a student of the next generation, children can't stand it! It can be 2 years old, or 2,000 years old, but don't be 20 years old! ! !
Looking for HP Novel CP Snape, Original Heroine Is Best, the Heroine Only Loves Snape
I would like to read a book similar to "HP: Dear Miss Snape".
I Want to Read Hp's Redemption Story About Severus Snape
I want to read a book similar to "HP: Penny Reborn". I can't find anything good, so I just asked for help. For example, my parents are from the same class as Snape, and I knew Snape before Lily. I have good romance or two male protagonists. It's time to look through your savings.

























































































I haven't finished it yet, but the front part is really good! Black Lily and the Jie Dao Four! The author's views are highly consistent with mine! The heroine's words against James and Sirius also fit my taste, so I enjoyed watching them! When the foursome bullied Mr. Si, the heroine arrived in time and bullied her back every time. It was really cool to watch. It wasn't until I saw the two of them breaking off their relationship with Lily that I calmed down. Penny also has her own wonderful life, which is great. These are developments that are in line with my expectations~
I think this article is very interesting. When I read other articles before, I have always been curious about why Lily never took action when Sif was bullied, and why Lily, a person like Pote, fell in love with him later. I really like Sif, so I always hope that he can live a happy life, thank you author. O(∩_∩)O
This book is very good, at least in my eyes. It is a punishment for Lily and the foursome, but not a serious punishment for the plot. It is not particularly serious and does not communicate. In a fundamental sense, it's not serious. Black Lily and the quartet separated very simply and decisively. It's a great pleasure to watch, and I'm looking forward to the emotional line in the future!
At first when I saw the name of the heroine and the setting of Eastern cultivation, I thought it was just another Mary Sue. After reading it, I realized that it was okay. The flow of the text and the plot were still very good, and the writing style was also good. At least it was not a novice. It is considered a masterpiece among Sri Lankan sweet texts. Recently, I only like to read sweet stories, which are not suitable for the elderly. The heroine is really a good baby. The concepts of friendship, love, and family in the text perfectly suit me, so I enjoyed reading it (I hate predators, but have no feelings for Lily). I don't know if Sri Lanka is considered OOC, but It's all about humanities and it's pro-era, so let's face it, grown-up women should watch some happy movies [Sending Hearts]. The movie is also incredibly good to watch, and I personally think it's better than the main story, hahahaha, because I just want to see Si She die with bad intentions, it's so interesting (actually, I want to see him come out, what a pity). The author is even more active in the comment area like that [thinking]. She is often seen in likes and replies, expressing her love for my wife [sending heartfelt wishes]
Nice! ! ! ! It's the first time I discovered Chongsi Jiaowen. It's great, the transitions are very good, and the breakup is so normal. I don't think it's Black Lily. She seems to be like this in the original book (I haven't actually read it, but I just rely on my understanding). Anyway, if it were my good friend who was in a life-and-death situation like this, I couldn't help but attack those who took action. The extra story is not over yet, the original movie is really good to watch. If Harry had seen the newly-cleaned place, he would have been very disappointed with his father and godfather. He had been looking forward to this place so much.
I really like it, the writing is also very good, the heroine and the hero are really sweet, and the author's character creation is very deep. I like the two characters of Penny and Peter so much. The situation of Penny at home is clearly written. She is ignored by the whole family and invisible bullying. She really wants and needs to be seen. It was just a simple opportunity that allowed her to walk out of her own not easy path and become a big star. Many people saw her and liked her. Peter's line is really surprising. In the previous articles I read, he was always a "betrayer", a bad guy who was ignored by "friends" and ignored by readers. Even though I knew that his position in the foursome was very embarrassing and he was the lowest among the four, I never thought about whether it would be easy for him. It was clear that he just didn't want to be bullied at the beginning. In the end, he changed beyond recognition. This time, he left the foursome early and had real friends. He was able to save others and redeem himself. Lupine also gave him a good ending. Although he basically didn't do anything when the foursome bullied the teacher, I just hate him. Now that he has a real friend, instead of a friend who treats him as a killing tool, the identity of a werewolf is no longer so rejected because of the wolfsbane potion, and the disgusting life-saving grace of the werewolf incident is reversed. This is really a relief.
The first choice is to accept the separation of childhood sweethearts. The author does a good job of dismantling the process. It is quite smooth and well-founded. Among them, the relationship between the heroine and Penny is not bad (they become best friends in the middle and later stages). Sijiao and Penny are semi-acquaintances. There is zero tolerance for school bullying and the heroine's family is very supportive of Sri Lanka. Those who don't like black deer dogs here can be protected from lightning. The Sri Lankan cultivator has not joined any illegal organization (regardless of which side). He has already become a married woman and cultivated a little bit of immortality before he even started dating. The overall plot is quite reasonable. Although it is not over yet, the plot has been completed and Tom is about to get married and honeymoon! Come and see~
It's a very good book. It's the one that resonates with me the most among all the HP books. The reason is that it doesn't forgive or redeem Sirius Black and James Potter. These two people are really hateful. Many sub-era fanfics write about the heroine redeeming Sirius and even tolerating Sirius. God, I get angry when I see this. Bullying is unforgivable and whitewashing will not be tolerated. What's more, what Sri Lanka has always wanted is unreserved trust and favoritism. He didn't get the favor from his mother when he was a child, he didn't get the favor from his friend Lily when he was a student, he didn't get complete trust when he took refuge with Voldemort, and he didn't get complete trust when he took refuge with Dumbledore. His life was so bitter and sad. This novel gives Severus a completely different path, allowing him to heal from childhood, which is satisfying.
Very sweet! ! ! The extra is also very cute! ! The whole process was sweet from beginning to end, highly recommended! ! Si and Lily broke up with each other in the first grade, and became only casual acquaintances after that. In the finale, everyone has a happy ending, a very beautiful life and world.
My favorite adaptation, bar none Let the professor have a different life! I really like it, I'm very touched, and I'm very happy! The title of the introduction is Black Lily and the Black Four. Although it is not black for the sake of being black, in my personal opinion, the causes and consequences are clearly explained, consistent with the characters' personalities, and it deeply explores the despicableness in their hearts. This is deserved retribution. The world becomes more beautiful under the instigation of the heroine's butterfly wings. I really like this kind of world! ! Love this adaptation!
The interaction between the heroine and SS is really cute, and it makes people feel warm and touching. How I wish there could be such a friend beside SS in the original work! In addition, the author's views on predators and le are highly consistent with mine. In short, I am lucky to read this article [love] [love] [love]
Five points! Five points of praise! ! ! Let me first express my dislike for the bullying group. My views are biased, but I don't have that much dislike for Harry (reckless justice aside) Who knows how cool it was for me to watch the part where the SS retaliates tooth for tooth and eye for eye! ! They think they are righteous and brave, but in fact they are bullying, stupid and hypocritical. Black and Potter should be allowed to experience what they have done to others! ! ! And the author's description of the Evans sisters is also very good, not slanderous, but very normal. Who knows how difficult it is for me to finally see that Lily Evans is not the aggregation of "White Moonlight" and "The Source of All Good Things"... Anyway, this book is very good to me. The author also provides a lot of extras. It looks very enjoyable [blowing kiss]
A particularly delicious book, and the author is also very active. Kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]
Warm writing. I really like the interaction between Xiaoxue and Xiao Xifu. My views on the quartet and Lily are really consistent with mine. Although it's not finished yet, it's great to keep up with updates every day. I hope the author can write the entire article. [Love][Love][Love][Top post][Top post][Top post]
This article is relatively old-fashioned in terms of the design of the emotional progression of time travel, immortality, and SSOC, but the expression of the concept that people born in Huainan are oranges and people born in Huaibei are oranges are really eye-catching. Lupine and Peter, who had been school bullies for generations, became real friends after breaking away from the deer and dog duo, and later they both grew up to be people truly worthy of the name Gryffindor. On the other side, the true cancer of the previous generations has not died, but they are just living in obscurity and being left behind by the familiar people in the past - for people who are unbridled at heart, brave and ruthless, and love glory and show off their personal heroes, this kind of want is probably worse than death.
There has never been a fan book where all the opinions are consistent with mine like the author's. It's really great, it's just a mouthful. There are many people who are He in another sense, such as Lupin, such as Peter Pettigrew, such as Petunia, and most importantly, Big Silver and Little Silver... Love the author!
Hmm... How should I put it? The author's writing won my heart. I really like the way the heroine and Sif get along. I have also read other authors' writings, but what they wrote seemed strange and not what I imagined.
Author, you are great. Among the many novels written by Severus that I have read, your writing is really beautiful. The delicate emotions expressed in words are really great. I like you very much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Especially the conflict between Severus and Lily's friendship and antagonism is handled very well. This highlight moment really couldn't be better [shy][shy][shy]
It's very beautiful, and the overall writing style gives me a very warm feeling. The heroine is an original character, with the setting of an oriental monk. She warms Sri Lanka from the time of marriage and allows Sri Lanka to grow up happily. The heroine has correct and firm views on three things, and the four members of the Black Tribulation Path (I don't even think we can call them evil, it's wrong for them to bully others), have changed the fate of many people through details and events, allowing most people to have a happy life. Now we have reached the extra chapter, which is also very warm. No matter which parallel world the Sri Lankans are in, they are all happy. Highly recommended to see it! Nice! Super pretty! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Suddenly I realized that I had forgotten to write a book review. Hey, it's so good-looking, it's great, it's a pro-era CP Severus, a sweet daily life in school, Severus is really living a good life, the heroine is cute, the style of painting is also very cute and warm, the boss is also very nice and hard-working, it would be better if he can be more diligent, let a lot of bombs hit me.
Delicious, very delicious. There's not a single bad thing about it. The upbringing version of Severus makes people feel more comfortable. The simple drawings drawn by the author are also very cute, especially the little Severus with the cloak, which is so cute. [Sending Hearts]
It's good to read, the author is also very active hahahahaha Xiaoxi and Xiaoxue are so cute, and Sif and Xiaoxue are a perfect match. Severus is very possessive because he needs complete preference in his childhood. Xiaoxue carries the memory of his previous life, and the previous trauma will be healed but will leave scars, so in fact, he also needs complete preference. I like the extras so much. I like watching movies. I want a movie watcher who can see the original world in the real world. Moreover, the author is a very good cook, and the rice is very fragrant.
What a logical article! Looks good and comfortable. Although I also like Snape, the protagonist lacks subjectivity, as if he exists purely to serve Snape.
The author's writing is really very good. Sifu is very happy in this book. There is no vigorous love, but there is a long-lasting family love. I really like this book written by the author.
Very very beautiful! I watched it from beginning to end and couldn't stop [I almost cried]. I'm really looking forward to watching the movie. I want everyone to see how happy Lin and Sifu are and the people and things they have changed.
It's really great. The whole text is very warm. The combination of East and West is wonderful and harmonious. It's great! ! ! ! ! ! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhending me-by-eh-by-eh-eh-byeh-byeh-byey-byey-from-from-care out out there out out out out out there out out there! ! ! [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]
The wife is so sweet, she will be sweet again in the future, I like it so much, it's a perfect little sweet article, Severus has a friend, family, and lover who will always accompany him, understand him, accompany him, support him, and protect him, it's so sweet. Delicious, love to eat, eat more, sweet to the teeth [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
This article "HP Snake King❤️Oriental Little Badger" is really a breath of fresh air in Snape fan fiction! The heroine Lin Luoxue comes from a family of Eastern cultivators. She brings her own buffs but does not steal the show. She dotes on Snape to the core throughout the whole process, which is refreshing and heart-warming to watch. The author dared to write about Black Lily and the Marauders quartet, and also wrote Penny's life in flesh and blood, which completely hit my sweet spot. In the early stage, it is easy to heal the daily life on campus, and in the later stage, the emotional line is delicate and heartbreaking. It is a treasure book that can be read over and over again.
Really really really ×N Very special ×N Beautiful ×N Please, update it quickly, I'm so [crying][crying][crying] What would I do without you [almost crying]! ! !
It feels okay now that the heroine and Severus get along very naturally, and a lot of things are dealt with more naturally. It is also obvious that she and Lily will not continue to get along. You can see that the context is not abrupt. For the foursome, they will fight back according to their behavior and not deliberately target them. It is still okay.