Carrying **********

Generally speaking, it's okay so far. There's no big problem. I've been reading novels for six or seven years, and it feels good to be able to finish them straight away. I read two novels of this type before reading this one. How can I put it? I can't stand it [face covering] So friends who are short on this book can read it. There are now more than sixty chapters, and there are no major bad points at the moment [Like] However, there are still some shortcomings. The first one is the language. In fact, it was good at the beginning, but later I saw that other tribes communicated very poorly. I know what the author meant and the protagonist also learned the language of the tribe, so I feel there is no need to emphasize [face covering], but many people are very concerned about this issue, and I think their vocabulary at that time should not be large. I feel that these aspects can be changed, and in today's society, there are hundreds of miles of different pronunciation, not to mention that time. The second thing is about tools. I read other reviews, which indicate that you can just make a wooden bow and arrow, but it takes time and effort to make a bamboo bow. This is indeed a bit good, and it can be modified later. The third one is paragraphing. Haven't you noticed that some paragraphs are too long? [Facepalm] I feel that if you read it on a mobile phone, it is too long if it exceeds three lines, so you can modify it in some aspects.

Five-star encouragement, although sometimes toxic, is considered good in Tomato's primitive tribal writings. Other tribe leaders are not stupid either, they can calculate and think. It's not like some stories where all tribes are enemies, there are wars, trade, and cooperation. [Think]

I think it's okay. I'm tired of cheating. The main character is pretty much in line with ordinary people.

It was wonderfully written and reminded me of three of Verne's novels. Captain Grant's Daughter, Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea and The Mysterious Island combine scientific knowledge and literary fantasy, which is very interesting.

This is the first time I have heard a novel that travels back to primitive society. This novel contains a lot of historical knowledge and popular science knowledge, as well as descriptions of the psychology, thoughts and emotions of primitive people. It is very interesting. It's a good novel.

It's a very good-looking original text, with a strong sense of substitution and smooth writing. It doesn't rely solely on tribal conflicts to develop the plot. It develops steadily without rapid and reasonable infrastructure and technological development. There is warmth and three views are correct. There are currently no poisonous points. Although the rating is too low, I hope it will be well written and not a eunuch.

Not bad, not bad, worthy of praise. The plot is okay. Hope to create better articles. This time it's a fishing guy, next time I can be a logistics truck driver and travel with the car and people. There is no thermal weapon but there are daily necessities. The truck is full of express daily necessities and simple medicines for the gangsters. Next time, there will be military cargo planes, tanks, armored vehicles, diesel, gasoline and engine oil in the planes, as well as food, clothing, housing, transportation, guns, ammunition and medical equipment. Is it for military use? It is reasonable to have these.

It's rare to see such normal original texts. There are only one or two Tomato books, and those are the starting points. "I am a Primitive Man" was published several years ago.

By flash flood I rushed, thank God if I didn't die.

This is the correct way to open the Stone Age

I have seen dozens of them so far, but I don't know how to evaluate them due to my limited education. In two words, the author is [awesome]! ! ! !

Well written and comfortable to read

I was just given a job and a meal, which is a big deal, hahahaha

Hahahahahahaha good good good good good good good

It was well written, and I kept listening to it without realizing it.

I think it's very good. The plot is well designed. I hope that in the future, the number of words will be reduced and it will be better.

The thinking and logic are clear, reading is like tasting fragrant tea, endless aftertaste, good article

The writing is true! Not so fantasy

Reasonable and logical. No procrastination or nonsense, it looks super comfortable.

Not bad, the logic is relatively clear, and it's quite realistic.

I hope the author will keep up the good work, it's a very good work!

Careful, different ideas, relatively new content. The more I read, the more interesting it becomes. Thank you to the author for writing such a good article.

I feel like it's well written

Very good, wonderful, good reviews

Work hard to stay alive

The life of primitive people is well written

Not bad, well written 👍

Not bad, good-looking, good-looking

Yes, well written. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Super beautiful, wonderful story