With Hundreds of Millions of Proficiency Points, Every God Lu Bu Is Under His Control

It's been a while since I've read a game article. This book is pretty good, and the beginning is really exciting. It's a pity that the author may be writing a book for the first time, so he can't handle many details well, and then the whole article is a blur. It's best to watch the tutorial and then polish your worldview again. Your setting is quite good. Although it is an old idea, it still looks good now. One is to polish the worldview. It is best to set up a plot in the first 10 chapters and lay out the entire worldview. Another thing is to enrich the details and avoid running down the accounts. For example, if you are talking to the characters in the Fengshen List, don't talk about Liu Bang and Zhang Liang in this incident, and everyone else will shut up. In that incident, Zhang Liang and Xiang Yu will talk, and everyone else will shut up. It feels like silence is turned on. Of course, it may be that I am not describing it well. Because I just want to say that the details have been handled well, but I may not have accurately described what I wanted to say.

I only want to read books, I love reading cool articles

Let me give you a 5-star review first.

Very good, very good, very good

Yu Ji Nai Ruo

I hope the author can continue to write well, don't finish the work, and strive for a million words