My Teacher Eri Kashiwagi

Let me state in advance that the first 40 chapters are basically depressing. The protagonist is trapped in life and is often misunderstood by others and has to apologize. The inner drama is rich but he has a tendency to feel inferior. There is a similar poisonous point, ()For example, I apologized to the service department three times, which was very flattering, and it was very uncomfortable to read cool articles.) Similar to the feeling of grassroots rise, the writing is still good Things are getting better and better from now on. After the novel was successfully published, life became better and better. It is a dull type of novel. Personal complaint (the author always says that the data is not good, but I think it is because the number of photos suppressed in the early stage is too many, almost 50, and most readers are suppressed before they want to promote) Maybe it's because I've been too busy recently and I'm tired of reading cool novels. This novel is also being updated.

According to the evaluation, it is edible. If you want to find a comprehensive comic to pass the time and can accept the flavor of Nikkei, you can give this a try Let's talk about the advantages first. The author is good at writing, and the emotional descriptions are relatively delicate. The middle part of the writing gives people a sense of youth, which reminds me of when I used to watch campus animations. However, let's talk about shortcomings and character creation. The protagonist is a very typical Asashi Japanese light novel-style male protagonist. He is gentle and capable, but he is very, very naughty. If this is original, it can be said to be the only way to grow up, but this is fan fiction. And the most important thing is that this book never gives a main direction, whether it is career, love, or the main line of the original work. This book doesn't talk about this. After reading more than 270 chapters, the timeline is only 3 months? My relationship was basically at a stable level, and my career was just an introduction. I thought I would be able to take off immediately after revealing my identity, but there was no follow-up. There is even reincarnation at the end, and the content of the upper-level narrative is disgusting. If you ask me, it is a plot foreshadowing. Man, this is a fanfic. Readers are either here to see love, but they are here to see fun, or pretending to be a slap in the face, and in the end you can't get into it [face covering] We are talking about the emotional line, the heroine Yinglili, but the emotional line is extremely awkward. To put it nicely, it means respecting the original characters, but to say it worse, it is awkward. Normal fans write about the key point. After the protagonist declares victory, even if the heroine is sick and takes a step back, the protagonist will hit the ball straight and go straight to the A. But this book, Asasi, respect it, will you die if you just go up to it... In conclusion, this book has about 50 to 150 chapters, which is good. It can reach the level of the rankings, but overall it will be criticized and discontinued. 🍅 Is a place where you can pass the time. Without changing your style, you still have to pursue your own growth theory and foreshadowing theory. In the end, few people will follow it. As of 9:30 am on February 20, it has been 10 hours since the last update. There are 41 people pressing the update button. It is very tragic, especially now that it is a holiday. This book has 700 reviews and a score of 7.6. There is a reason why the score is not high, especially under the 🍅 scoring mechanism. I gave it five points to comfort the author, who feels that he is somewhat depressed. But I still have to say, if this wasn't 🍅, I wouldn't be so Asasi

Yes, the author's descriptions of emotions are relatively delicate, and the emotional lines between the characters are quite light. It is a good fanfic, but when I saw that it was a single female protagonist, I still chose to abandon it because I personally prefer the harem, because when the author described the female characters in the previous chapters, he more or less described his love for the male protagonist, and I didn't like this regretful ending, so I abandoned it, but for readers who like single female protagonists, this book is still worth reading.

Very, very, very beautiful. The arrogant party wins and the pure love party wins! To put it simply, this book is like a tsundere, who refuses in the early stage but welcomes her in return, and reacts interestingly in the later stage, which directly leads to the end [note] [full]

The writing and emotional descriptions are good. But I read light novels to escape reality, not for you to stuff into my mind a bunch of relationships that are as bad as reality. Please write a lighthearted thank you for light novels. If the author could write a light novel in the style of Angel Next Door, the rating would be higher. Also, I personally think that An Yilun is also a pure child. Every time I think of Yinglili giving her first kiss to that guy in elementary school, it feels really uncomfortable. I suggest the author pay attention to it. Maybe I am too emotionally obsessed (laughs) In short, despite its shortcomings, the work is worth reading. It's just that reading "Relationships" really makes people feel depressed. Maybe it's my personal problem. It's still a three-star rating. I can't sympathize with this book. I personally feel that my chest feels tight when I look at the protagonist's daily life, and I feel overwhelmed by interpersonal relationships.

It's quite good-looking, with a sense of immersion, the plot is natural and smooth, and the characters are not too OOC. Some of them are quite charming, such as Jing Keai and Ying Lili. But some of the writing is exaggerated. For example, Yukino is always written in cold and icy terms. Even now, she is always cold on the outside, occasionally warm on the inside, but she is just a breathy insect [laughs]. Some of the depression in the previous part is also caused by the character of the protagonist. The author did not deliberately suppress it, so it's okay. Personally, I don't like the type of protagonist who is sensitive, has low self-esteem and lacks love, and becomes Xiao Chunan when he meets a girl. There is also an illusion behind it that she likes me, to suppress emotions and pull feelings away. Then I also like the part about the second grade, that is, in Xiao Lonely, I make the second grade remarks to intensify conflicts and create negative effects. Write less and write less. It is unnecessary. Also, Haji Feng has been suppressed for so long. The first emotional scene involves Ying Lili, which is not satisfying. I personally hope that Hui will jump in the queue as soon as possible, or something else. In the former, you also laid a foreshadowing of Taeyang or something, and the others are still just friendships.

This is the first time I have read a book seriously and devotedly. Whether it is the protagonist Haji Fong's mutual redemption among friends or the love story line between ordinary life and Yinglili, the redemption of two people who have broken each other is very easy to get into. And Hajifeng, please don't stop updating! ₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧̢ ₎₎

I didn't feel funny or relaxed. I only saw one protagonist because the system made everything very messy and messy. It was really depressing to watch. Maybe it's because I brought myself into the role of the protagonist. After looking at the back, Hajifeng is indeed getting better. I hope the author can continue writing in this state, and I also wish Hajifeng will get better and better.

Ah, I miss it so much. The more I read it, the more I feel. This is not a cookie-cutter harem novel, nor is it a boring mindless novel. I only see the sincerity and flesh-and-blood characters in it. It is very real. The protagonist is like the epitome of every lonely person. I see myself. It is a perfect redemption. They are all saving each other and they themselves may be saving me who is reading the book...

The author's sincerity is reflected in the writing, and the protagonist's inner questions resonate deeply with an ordinary young man like me. Thank you, author, for not just writing words... You have selflessly shared this understanding and feeling of "emotion" with us. This emotion is sincere and warm, fulfilling and unforgettable. I hope the author can get rid of the world in which he wrote and find peace in reality. Take care of yourself, everyone. May we all meet friends, make partners, laugh sincerely, and perform our "youth story"

Let me first talk about the points that I am more satisfied with (I have read about Chapter 160, so I am sorry. The following are my personal feelings and opinions. If they conflict with you, then you are right and speak rationally): In my opinion, this is already a very good fanfic. Having a single female protagonist is a great thing in a fanfic that can insist on writing a single female protagonist. The author sticks to his original intention and pays great attention to the emotional connection. He will not reduce the female protagonist to a vassal of the male protagonist just to cater to the readers. In this era of pursuing multiple female protagonists and sexual repression, it is great to be able to pursue more real emotions. The emotions of the supporting characters are also very delicate. The characterizations are more in line with the original work. There is no brainless licking of the male protagonist. The bond and friendship between the protagonist and the supporting characters are more reflected. The protagonist is a person with a delicate heart. He seems to pursue an ordinary life, but he also has a heart that is unwilling to be ordinary (just like many people in life, even if life is bad, don't they still yearn for beauty in their hearts?) The protagonist is more about living a better life. The bad thing is that some parts in the early stage looked a bit awkward. If you want to talk about how depressing it is, it doesn't seem to be depressing at all. In my opinion, it's just embarrassing at most. Also, I don't feel that there is a clear main line at the moment. Is it the male protagonist's redemption of his former self? Or is it the pursuit of the heroine? Or is it just ordinary daily life? Perhaps the current reality is like this. Life is already very impetuous and depressing. Most people read novels to relieve fatigue and release stress. They just pursue pleasure. There is nothing wrong with it. Just read novels from your heart and read what you like. There is no need to consume yourself internally. This book is more suitable for reading when you are calm. It is still good to read when you are bored with reading cool articles. Although there are some flaws in some places, it is still good overall. This book is basically the author's passion for writing, and he writes what he wants to write. Maybe the author also has his own pursuits, and he will not change them because of some readers' comments. He can only say that he sticks to what he pursues, and time will prove whether he is right or wrong.

It may be a bit depressing at the beginning, but it gets better at the end. The protagonist has grown up, from being alone at the beginning to having two or three friends in the later part. Judging from the development, there should be multiple female protagonists. The development of the plot is also remarkable and logical. There is no brainless element. It has been a long time since I encountered a book that I can read without losing my brain. The emotional description is very delicate, and occasionally the descriptions of other characters are used to highlight the changes in the protagonist's personality. The only drawback may be that he is a little bit literary? But it's harmless. All in all, this is a top-notch comic among Tomato comics, but it's not suitable for those who want to read cool stories and bulldozers.

It was a little depressing in the early stage, but after watching it, I really felt comfortable and not OOC. The bond between the male protagonist and the big teacher, the service department and others, and the interaction with Yinglili was really [please taste it carefully], and Yinglili may be really good at Yingli, and finally [please update]

Easy daily sweet articles, food and grass If I have to say it, in the early stage, the protagonist was suppressed, which made some people with fragile hearts feel uncomfortable. In the later stage, there can be no plot of Long Aotian, no harsh emotional drama, and no highly toxic plot. It can be regarded as a daily entertainment reading.

As far as I can see now, the protagonist is a person with low self-esteem who had a relatively miserable childhood, and his heart is slowly moved by his companions. This kind of routine is actually relatively old-fashioned, but I just like that kind of thing. What does a person carry? Speaking of being aggrieved in the early stage, it seems to me to be relatively normal, because I have seen more aggrieved than this, so I can bear it better? However, it is undeniable that this is a relatively good work, but how should I put it, the plot feels a bit bland, and the highlights are probably only the second and second sentences distributed by the system. Maybe I have read too many Shuangwen, and I always feel it is very dull. Then, the emotional description is more delicate, which makes me feel that the protagonist knows the protagonist. Every companion is very down-to-earth, which is really enviable, and the transformation of the protagonist is also relatively natural. Generally speaking, for now, in my eyes, this book is a rare good work, at least it really made me find gold in tomatoes. I also hope that the author can stick to his original intention, come on! Don't give up!

Author, you said that minors can't understand it, but I can understand it. The author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. I feel that it may not be finished without 1.5 Million words [face covering]. The quality of the book cannot be said. This book is also the only one I have read with a single female protagonist Ying Lili. Moreover, this book can be said to fully reflect the loneliness of the protagonist. The personalities of each character are also written very clearly. The characters basically have no OOC. Not to mention more, Lao Li finally won once, and... Pure love is invincible! ! !

Highly recommended. Well, I have read ten or twenty chapters now. What should I say? This novel is written very smoothly, and the character descriptions of some of the characters in the original plot are very good. I think the description of the protagonist's character, how should I put it, feels more like a normal person, and then travels to a situation in a comprehensive comic. Also, this system is not particularly deliberate.

The following is my personal update review: As for the heroine, I read the recent news released by the author and learned that the author actually writes and creates characters, turning them into living people. From this point of view, it is indeed a single female protagonist, because the world of our ordinary people is one-on-one. At the same time, considering the author's male protagonist, it is indeed a bit like a self-salvation of personality. And the writing style is as warm as the introduction tag. Especially the communication with female characters is just like how we interact with others in daily life, which is very good. In fact, I feel that the following story is a bit like the whole story is arranged with self-redemption as the main line. In fact, I am mainly a harem party (story conflicts and contradictions between characters are the climax of the ups and downs of a plot). But for me, the greatest joy of this book is that it is not finished. If it were finished, I would probably turn to the last page directly, but there is nothing here, like real stock trading. It is the uncertainty between people that makes me not have to think about the results, but know the ups and downs, and taste the various aspects of life. Both of them are also the greatest fun in our lives with an uncertain future. (Originally I wanted to use AI to summarize it, but it didn't make sense, so I decided to stick with the original text. The above is just a brief introduction. Please forgive me for any shortcomings. Please correct me for any mistakes.) Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and update quickly [crying]

It's a very good comprehensive manga. The descriptions of Harmono's characters are very delicate. The current emotional line of Eiri is also very good. Of course, some people may think that the plot is dragging, but I saw the shadow of my own life in it. Of course, it is not the shadow that many girls like, but the shadow of being cautious but at a loss when facing relationships. I just don't know how the author will deal with the two love lines between Hongxia and Kato Megumi. I hope there will be a single female protagonist and no ambiguity. After all, Wadaxi is pure love!

I have read Chapter 204 so far, and I feel that this novel is very suitable for my taste. It has the right amount of middle-school romance and warmth (sometimes very strong), the only victory of the golden retriever tsundere loli, and the character of the protagonist who dares to act and speak out. It fits me very well, and the author is all generating power for love, so there is a high probability that there will be no need to worry about updates. I saw more than 300 pictures and found that it was heading towards a fantasy plot. It was hard to break down. In a true fantasy plot, the protagonist is actually a person trapped in reincarnation!

The writing is very good, maybe I haven't read it enough, but I have never read a book like this one, where each character has a separate chapter to analyze it, and the characters are very vivid. The only thing required is some knowledge of the characters. The author researched the characters very deeply, and transformed those difficult-to-understand Japanese light novels into Chinese novels, which finally gave me a sense of "how their stories would develop in another way." I generally don't like to add self-created characters to the fixed-plot stories I've read, but I also want to see how my favorite characters will develop under the influence of other characters. From the beginning, I felt like I would be involved in the creation, but it actually reminded me of the days when I used to create with my friends. There are no days like that anymore, but I'm glad to see another kind of present here. From the author's book, I saw what I wanted to see, the passion for creation. So I want to say, I like your book, please let me support you, please continue writing.

If you first read Chunshuang's yy harem, I suggest you go out and turn left. The protagonist's personality is closer to the psychological and rich in activities, but he is introverted on the surface. Compared with some Japanese plots where he is forced to make a fool of himself, at most it makes him feel like a middle-aged man.

Surprising work, incredible. The plot at the beginning was so depressing, I felt quite uncomfortable watching it. I was very curious about the story behind it and read on. The characters in the story are very three-dimensional and don't feel unrealistic like a beautiful girl game. The charm of each character can be felt. The low score is most likely due to the influence of the early content. Personally, I feel that the later content is at a level of 9.5 Points.

It was depressing in the early stage and before the protagonist had no foundation, this system completely destroyed the protagonist's daily life. It started to take off after 50+ chapters, and then gradually got better. The character arcs were well described, and everyone's psychology was well grasped. What's rare is that Midoriya didn't write garbage, but found his way back, which is rare. It is a high-quality product with a high threshold in fan fiction, but it is understandable that the rating is not high. After all, it has nearly 50 chapters. However, for readers like me who have seen the later stages, I can give it 5 stars. PS. Eri-ri is drawn very cutely

The author's book is really good. People grow up step by step. The emotional scenes are very good, especially when they should be handsome, they are really handsome! It's a bit depressing at the front, but it feels quite normal once you take it in. Hajifeng is just an ordinary person [shy]

It's very beautiful, don't be affected by the bad reviews. Is writing cat the word for water?

It's good. In terms of processing, although the system allows the protagonist to die in society, it also draws in the relationship faster. It's just that the amount is small now. For now, don't ignore Shizukai [laughing evilly]. Since you have gone, then take it. In terms of relationships, it is also okay. Your Ayaka Totsuka should be given to Hibi Penguin, right? They are all feminine, Hui hasn't appeared yet, I'm looking forward to it The title of the book is a bit strange, I may change it or not, please update it quickly [Start]

It's rare to see such a book with such delicate emotions on Tomato. It's different from most comic books that are cool. The male protagonist of this book was very frustrated in the early stages. He had no friends and had to squeeze out his spare time to earn living expenses. The seemingly gentle male protagonist is actually very lonely. I was very touched after reading it. Chapter 40 is a turning point. After chapter 40, the male protagonist begins to have a bond. There are also people who can get into the heart of the male protagonist. Life also gets better because of the royalties. Even newcomers may not be able to persist, especially because the system seems to only mess with the male protagonist. If there is no system, the male protagonist may be able to get a good interpersonal relationship at the beginning. But later on, I found that the system is a big foreshadowing. Where I saw it, the function of the system was not explained. I guess it was used by the male protagonist before the reincarnation to patch up regrets. It seems like a middle-class speech, but it makes the male protagonist take the initiative to intertwine himself with others. After all, the original male protagonist is so lonely and it must not be easy to communicate with others, although it looks a bit weird. This book has a single heroine and she is my favorite Eiri. I can finally win for once, haha. I don't discredit Lunya. The male protagonist and Eiri also save each other. I really like it.

It's very real, and it's very interesting to read. I hope it has multiple endings. This is the novel I want to read. Although some of the plots in the middle are cliche, but I am also very tolerant of good books, so it still deserves five stars in my mind. Catch up with the army in one night. The author said that he seems to stop writing after finishing a book, alas, but I still want to ask, I finally found an author who is very suitable for my appetite, and I hope to write more.

This is the first comprehensive manga that I was fascinated by. The plot has both daily warmth and a plot that belongs to the protagonist himself. It is not a meaningless cool novel type male protagonist (who hates the harem) [laughing evilly]. This book has a good emotional line and allows me to see a different kind of great teacher. Although the author's style is indeed a bit literary (the pace is a little slow?), But I like it! But for the high school entrance examination, I can only leave for a while. Many books have higher ratings than this one, but they have not persisted. The author has persisted very well [sending my heart]! You must keep at it! Although the author did not create the free wind he imagined, the tough weeds are equally great. (In my opinion) The author must persevere and wait for me to return from the high school entrance examination. I gave you all the money I earned from Tomato. [Sinister smile]