A Knight in a Magical Girl World

Weird: Are you saying that after I defeated three extremely evil magical girls, there will be an even more evil full-form Kamen Rider?

It's a good work. The plot is above average so far. There are no clichés or unclear meanings. The dialogues and character descriptions are quite pleasant to watch. The three views are very correct. As for the issue of combat power that is often controversial in knight fandom, I think the author is quite ingenious. If the laws of physics are incomparable, the enemies are designed to be mechanical monsters to avoid. At the same time, the appearance of different knights is given rationality and space (different abilities are dealt with by knights with corresponding characteristics). I think this is quite good. It does not overly humiliate the reader's IQ and prevents the battle from being flat. I hope it can continue to be maintained. PS: Since the setting has the power of all knights, I hope the author will not mess with the hard-haired knife. When the power of the second level of King of Time is critical, you will be banned and scolded, and you will really suffer.

It's not bad, and it doesn't seem to be following the cool-text route at the moment (a lot of emphasis is placed on the magical world with mechanisms everywhere). The author does a good job of bringing in all the plots and settings that magical girls would have. It is very enjoyable to watch, but at the same time it is not completely sublime. The world can remain bright just because I believe that there are a few more monsters in the mechanism of light than in darkness. The male protagonist is a smoldering person (after all, he has just experienced a game in which 199 people died), and I am looking forward to the heart-wrenching blushing scene later on [take a closer look]

The overall plot is more like a one-episode series. Each episode has its own theme, and it is not focused on fighting. More words are focused on the interactions between people and various things in the magical girl world. Overall it's pretty good, it feels like watching a TV series. The characters are also pretty good, with the classic red, blue, and yellow colors of magical girls. There are also various weird organizations, as well as chaotic and benevolent ones like the Demon Slayer Society. The characters and performances written by the little girl are quite likable.

It's very beautiful, and I personally think the pacing is very good. Just try to have as few horror elements as possible. Who knows the part about the old art building in the early morning that gave me chills? (I'm too timid and can't help it) However, it's really well written

Well, first of all, I want to encourage the author. The writing is quite good. I read it with the intention of taking a look at the beginning, but I found that it was unexpectedly good. It can be regarded as a treasure novel. It is one of the best knight novels I have read. There is no such brainless invincibility. Then, secondly, I would like to make a suggestion to the author. He is the person who launched the knight war behind the scenes. I think the setting can actually be designed so that the boss behind the scenes steals the power of the knight universe and then places knights in various worlds. The power of knights, and then let them fight each other, and then you can use this to launch the world of knights, Shogo and Kadoyaji join forces to hunt down that person, and it can also correspond to the world with knights, Kadoyaji can also make a cameo. As for Shogo also joining, it can be understood as In order to protect the knight timeline, I will investigate the boss behind the scenes with Kado Yaji. Of course, this is just a suggestion. I hope the author can continue to work hard, his writing will get better and better, and he will be healthy and protect his body 😄😄😄

Yes, I personally think the two themes are well integrated, but the problem of combat power that many people criticize needs to be solved. Everyone knows the power of Kamen Rider, so you can't start with the knight. The simplest way is to add a setting: the more powerful the power of the knight, the greater the load on the protagonist's body, so it is not easy to use other forms of the knight. Or there is something wrong with the protagonist's body, or there is something wrong with the knight's power, and he is unable to use those extremely powerful powers. (As for combat power, if the author needs it, I can provide some of my personal solutions)

So far, I don't think there's anything too bad about it, and overall it looks pretty good. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is not too blunt. There may be some small jumps or abruptness in some places in the main plot, but it does not affect the viewing experience. The problem of combat pressure mentioned in other book reviews is indeed there. But if you regard it as a more comprehensive novel rather than just a novel that is about crushing and crushing, it will not affect the viewing experience; solve puzzles when it is time to solve them, push the main line when it is time to push the main line, and use the power of fighting in the final battle instead of pushing the whole European and American side. From this perspective, the problem of suppressing combat power is not very serious. Also, the author's chivalry in the future is well combined with the righteous heart of the traditional magical girl worldview (or in fact, the two are quite different to begin with) Give it to ram

The knight setting of this novel is different from some knight novels I have read before. In this novel, the Kamen Rider is written as an individual, not a tool, I believe. If the author keeps writing, he is likely to get high scores, so I hope the author can continue to update every day.

It's rare to see and must be tasted! What a treasure! The writing is smooth, the content is eye-catching, the pace is reasonable, and the characters are likeable. The use of the knight's power is also good, and it does not stop at purely building combat power. So far, it seems that the male protagonist has not tarnished the name of the knight. If you come in because of curiosity, please read this book