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Before reading this book, I was reminded of a book with the same idea written by Shu Ke next door. It was also the idea of ​​old Rudy reviving his life. That book has been completed. However, this one is obviously better written than that one. That one still followed the route of the original work too much, but the author of this one has written a new and different story, which is very good. As a fan of Jobless Reincarnation, I recommend you to read it. Even though there are still more or less plots that must be included in the jobless fanfic, the author has written and abbreviated them differently, so there is no need to worry about plot duplication. The pace of the story is very fast, and there is currently no moisture.

It's good to read, but at first glance it's a translation from an external computer. There are quite a few translation and Chinese grammatical context errors. It's a little difficult to read, but overall it's still a pretty good fanfic.

It's pretty good. Although it's a bit green in some places, but following the main storyline, the problem isn't really that big. Moreover, the logic throughout the article is relatively smooth and self-consistent, making it a relatively good fanfic.

Although there are many translation errors, it is indeed a pity that the dream has been reincarnated without a job.

I like the content very much. It feels very comfortable to watch. The novel has a very life-like perspective and can satisfy people's regret after reading the original work. The characters are all described very well in the original work. Thank you to the author1. Looking forward to updates.

It's really beautiful and there's no poison in the whole process. Why are there so few people? ! I can't accept it I can't accept it I can't accept it I can't accept it I can't accept it I can't accept it

I wish I had Sarah, and I love Rudy.

There is some suspicion of AI, but it's pretty good.

Can the author tell me the original name? I'll go and take a look [][][]

This book is very good. I like this book. I recommend it.

It's more of a refreshing novel. It can make up for the regrets of the original work, so it's refreshing.

It's so beautiful, it makes up for so many regrets [crying]

Haokan is considered an excellent work among Tomatoes.

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch The author doesn't seem to have a good grasp of the plot, and there are many problems. For example, after Rudy broke his arm after beating Beishen, according to the original work, old Rudy already knew the king-level healing technique and no longer needed to go to Milis Healing Magician for treatment. The second question about the name is, what the hell is it that the father of the two orc sisters was named Keith? There are also many places where the names look like machine translation. I seriously suspect that they are transferred by external fans [laughing]

Some of the names are wrong, but the writing is good. The author should work harder.