A generation of geniuses was trapped in a mental hospital due to schizophrenia, and finally died due to an assassination by hostile forces. But God gave him another path, a fallen magic empire, a damaged mechanical fortress, and a broken system. Let's see how the boss survives his second life.
Reader comments
My evaluation is based on the writing style, emotional drama, reasonableness of the plot, and personal preferences. If you disagree, please take it as a lesson and don't criticize if you don't like it.
1. The writing style is very stable and has no mistakes except for a few typos. If you like to read the series of development articles and integrated civilizations, I recommend you to give it a try.
2. It can be confirmed that there is almost no emotional drama in the early stage, because after the hero saves the beauty, there is no relationship at all. Except for political games, there is no chat or contact with the mermaid other than interests other than the interest. There is no need to worry about the House of Commons controlling the House of Lords.
3. In terms of the reasonableness of the plot, there are basically no problems, whether it is the handling of plug-ins or the relationship between summoned characters. There are no speeches by some supporting characters who are stupid in the early stage, and there are no early contacts with tool people, and there are some beauties and European emperors. Basically, there are basically no early problems in any development, and there are no routines. It can be said that you can really watch it.
4. Advantages and Disadvantages
The advantage is that there is no formulaic speech and there is nothing strange about it. There is no crazy plot in the whole plot. Even the hero saving the beauty is done for profit, and there are no crazy subordinates around the protagonist.
Disadvantages: A common problem with development stories is that there are very few fights in the early stage, and the description of the battle may have been written by the author who has not read books on war, or has not understood it in detail, so the process of the war may be more ordinary, without any passionate passion, but other than this, there are basically no problems.
No, it's over 100 chapters and I only have two book reviews. It's a bit scary😨
The author's writing style is very good online
It's well written, but the way you write about other races is too humanistic. It's unlikely that different races will have the same moral values. And human thinking.
It's very interesting, but the author, can you please stop writing shark people as shark meat? [Laughing awkwardly]
After Chapter 86, why did it suddenly become Chapter 99 in the middle?
My evaluation is based on the writing style, emotional drama, reasonableness of the plot, and personal preferences. If you disagree, please take it as a lesson and don't criticize if you don't like it. 1. The writing style is very stable and has no mistakes except for a few typos. If you like to read the series of development articles and integrated civilizations, I recommend you to give it a try. 2. It can be confirmed that there is almost no emotional drama in the early stage, because after the hero saves the beauty, there is no relationship at all. Except for political games, there is no chat or contact with the mermaid other than interests other than the interest. There is no need to worry about the House of Commons controlling the House of Lords. 3. In terms of the reasonableness of the plot, there are basically no problems, whether it is the handling of plug-ins or the relationship between summoned characters. There are no speeches by some supporting characters who are stupid in the early stage, and there are no early contacts with tool people, and there are some beauties and European emperors. Basically, there are basically no early problems in any development, and there are no routines. It can be said that you can really watch it. 4. Advantages and Disadvantages The advantage is that there is no formulaic speech and there is nothing strange about it. There is no crazy plot in the whole plot. Even the hero saving the beauty is done for profit, and there are no crazy subordinates around the protagonist. Disadvantages: A common problem with development stories is that there are very few fights in the early stage, and the description of the battle may have been written by the author who has not read books on war, or has not understood it in detail, so the process of the war may be more ordinary, without any passionate passion, but other than this, there are basically no problems.
No, it's over 100 chapters and I only have two book reviews. It's a bit scary😨
The author's writing style is very good online
It's well written, but the way you write about other races is too humanistic. It's unlikely that different races will have the same moral values. And human thinking.
It's very interesting, but the author, can you please stop writing shark people as shark meat? [Laughing awkwardly]
After Chapter 86, why did it suddenly become Chapter 99 in the middle?