
What Did I Do Wrong? I Just Want to Give Them a Home
我有什么错我只是想给她们一个家
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- Completed
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- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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711Chapters
6.9kReads
6.7Score
781Shelves
1.7kListens
200.3kReads · all time
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I added it to my bookshelf a long time ago, but I don't know why I didn't read a few chapters at the beginning. I picked up this book again yesterday, and I was ready to read it. What do you think of Rotten Tomatoes🍅? I've always believed that I can't judge the quality of a novel by looking at its ratings. After watching it all night last night, I found that it was surprisingly good. I am not that violent, and I don't have any original fetishes. In today's society, single-digit girls are already very self-loving, and the individual heroines' personalities are very well described. I am not only on Rotten Tomatoes, but also on Fei🦌, Qidian, 🐧 and other software. In general, this urban novel is a staple for me. Of course, everyone is an independent individual, and it is up to you to distinguish between good and bad. I hope the author will continue to work hard. My urban literary peers are better than about 80% of my peers. Of course it varies from person to person.
Personally, I think it's very interesting. I like the character Zhou Ying very much. I have been unrequitedly in love with the male protagonist for three years in high school. It's a very pure adolescent love. It's really rare and valuable. What's more, she is quite self-respecting and self-loving, but it feels very pitiful for a girl like this to be taken advantage of by others because of the male protagonist's lack of response, deceived into losing her virginity, and made it known to everyone! I hope to be able to come up with a time-traveling prop to prevent her from losing her virginity, but in this case, it feels like self-deception. Or get a memory-erasing tool to make other people forget the memory of her losing her virginity, but she and the hero should remember it, and use this memory to make her feel deep down that she is not worthy of the hero. But the hero should not hold grudges because of this memory, but pity her and love her more, so that she can make up her mind to become the sharpest blade in the hero's hand. She will no longer sharpen the knife against her harem members, but against other factors that are unfavorable to the hero, love her, cultivate her, and make up for her. She is so pitiful [cry][cry][cry] I really want to see her become a little follower of the male protagonist, an existence that protects the male protagonist and cares about him. (After all, being able to accompany the male protagonist for a long time in this way is equivalent to making up for the male protagonist's debt to her! And she can reduce the feeling of unworthiness through this behavior) After all, in my opinion, if the male protagonist looks back during the period when his system is awakening, he will not let this girl lose his virginity. After all, this is a cool article, but the detailed analysis of this plot always makes this character very pitiful. I hope to take her in! After all, the male protagonist's harem includes both new and old cars. This character is well developed, and another long review I saw also discussed her! Be kind to Zhou Ying! Thanks! The book is beautiful!
Zhou Ying is really such a magical being. I didn't like her very much at first, but then I couldn't stand it anymore because the male protagonist refused to accept her! Zhou Ying likes the male protagonist, but the male protagonist knows it and never responds or refuses! The first time I lost it was because I was drugged! In other words, author, please don't write so much about her, and you won't make me feel uncomfortable after reading it! Four stars, for those who love this book so much! Zhou Ying's change was not due to the male protagonist. At the beginning of the class reunion, Zhou Ying's mentality expressed that she wanted to get back together with the male protagonist, and she didn't know that the male protagonist was rich at that time! If it happens to anyone, it will break down and become a little distorted in mentality! This setting is a bit cruel, and the author's decision is even more cruel! If you don't mind, you can still read it. The author writes it very well, and the girls he recruits are also very delicate and many! I just can't accept the author's treatment of Zhou Ying!
You're welcome to help me make a mark! Heroine: Jiang Yi (Chapter 24/52) Su Xiaonuan (Chapter 62) Ding Qiqi (Chapter 52) Zhao Xuemei (Chapter 129) Xu Roujia (Chapter 190) Liu Manni (Chapter 211) Jiang Yi'an (Chapter 227) Xia Xiaoman (Chapter 229) Xie Qinghe (Chapter 233) Lin Shutong, Ye Weilan, Wu Yihan, Qin Lu, Su Yue (Chapter 234) Remaining: Lin Yanran, Zhao Yuxuan, Jiang Yu, Su Yan, Chen Shaoning, Bai Ling, Xie Ningshuang, Tang Wanqing, Liu Mengyao, Lu Qingwu
The main line of the story is developed very reasonably, and the author's ideas are very clear. The protagonist was a soldier in his previous life. He is low-key, but not aggrieved. He does not become arrogant just because he obtained the system, or pretend to be stupid and slap him in the face. It is very enjoyable to watch.
I think it's a bit more enjoyable to write, and it's easy to get girls quickly. Although there are still poisonous points, although the prices are raised, and although there are a lot of nonsense, it is just fun. The only thing I said before was that my aunt was so good, so I made a wish and it was gone. I didn't spend a penny of that money🌸! ! !
The descriptions of life are particularly detailed. The protagonist always maintains his own sanity and likes to watch the process of acquiring girls without blindly throwing money at them. This kind of emotional game also has some plot plots, which is so exciting to watch!
The appearance rating system is written in a more realistic way. There is no one with a score of 90 or above at the beginning. There are still more people with a score of 80 or above at the beginning. This can also be seen that some top beauties with a score of 90 or above will appear later. There are a lot of 90 points at the beginning. What about the rest?
Although the protagonist is carefree, he is not offensive. He doesn't cheat, but he seems so reasonable when he is with the heroine. The heroine is also portrayed as someone who has brains, and won't pay tens of thousands of dollars for a bag. Overall, it looks very comfortable.
The plot during the summer vacation is relatively flat, but the character descriptions are very detailed, including the dialogues. Each heroine is impressive, and there will not be too many heroines to remember later. The plot after school starts is so awesome, hahaha, it's really enjoyable to watch. I wish the author would update it more quickly.