
What's Wrong with Me? I Just Want to Give Them a Home.
我有什么错我只是想给她们一个家
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
8.7kReads
6.7Score
973Shelves
711Chapters
2.1kListens
190.5kReads · all time










I added it to my bookshelf a long time ago, but I don't know why I didn't read a few chapters at the beginning. I picked up this book again yesterday, and I was ready to read it. What do you think of Rotten Tomatoes🍅? I've always believed that I can't judge the quality of a novel by looking at its ratings. After watching it all night last night, I found that it was surprisingly good. I am not that violent, and I don't have any original fetishes. In today's society, single-digit girls are already very self-loving, and the individual heroines' personalities are very well described. I am not only on Rotten Tomatoes, but also on Fei🦌, Qidian, 🐧 and other software. In general, this urban novel is a staple for me. Of course, everyone is an independent individual, and it is up to you to distinguish between good and bad. I hope the author will continue to work hard. My urban literary peers are better than about 80% of my peers. Of course it varies from person to person.
You're welcome to help me make a mark! Heroine: Jiang Yi (Chapter 24/52) Su Xiaonuan (Chapter 62) Ding Qiqi (Chapter 52) Zhao Xuemei (Chapter 129) Xu Roujia (Chapter 190) Liu Manni (Chapter 211) Jiang Yi'an (Chapter 227) Xia Xiaoman (Chapter 229) Xie Qinghe (Chapter 233) Lin Shutong, Ye Weilan, Wu Yihan, Qin Lu, Su Yue (Chapter 234) Remaining: Lin Yanran, Zhao Yuxuan, Jiang Yu, Su Yan, Chen Shaoning, Bai Ling, Xie Ningshuang, Tang Wanqing, Liu Mengyao, Lu Qingwu
Personally, I think it's very interesting. I like the character Zhou Ying very much. I have been unrequitedly in love with the male protagonist for three years in high school. It's a very pure adolescent love. It's really rare and valuable. What's more, she is quite self-respecting and self-loving, but it feels very pitiful for a girl like this to be taken advantage of by others because of the male protagonist's lack of response, deceived into losing her virginity, and made it known to everyone! I hope to be able to come up with a time-traveling prop to prevent her from losing her virginity, but in this case, it feels like self-deception. Or get a memory-erasing tool to make other people forget the memory of her losing her virginity, but she and the hero should remember it, and use this memory to make her feel deep down that she is not worthy of the hero. But the hero should not hold grudges because of this memory, but pity her and love her more, so that she can make up her mind to become the sharpest blade in the hero's hand. She will no longer sharpen the knife against her harem members, but against other factors that are unfavorable to the hero, love her, cultivate her, and make up for her. She is so pitiful [cry][cry][cry] I really want to see her become a little follower of the male protagonist, an existence that protects the male protagonist and cares about him. (After all, being able to accompany the male protagonist for a long time in this way is equivalent to making up for the male protagonist's debt to her! And she can reduce the feeling of unworthiness through this behavior) After all, in my opinion, if the male protagonist looks back during the period when his system is awakening, he will not let this girl lose his virginity. After all, this is a cool article, but the detailed analysis of this plot always makes this character very pitiful. I hope to take her in! After all, the male protagonist's harem includes both new and old cars. This character is well developed, and another long review I saw also discussed her! Be kind to Zhou Ying! Thanks! The book is beautiful!
Zhou Ying is really such a magical being. I didn't like her very much at first, but then I couldn't stand it anymore because the male protagonist refused to accept her! Zhou Ying likes the male protagonist, but the male protagonist knows it and never responds or refuses! The first time I lost it was because I was drugged! In other words, author, please don't write so much about her, and you won't make me feel uncomfortable after reading it! Four stars, for those who love this book so much! Zhou Ying's change was not due to the male protagonist. At the beginning of the class reunion, Zhou Ying's mentality expressed that she wanted to get back together with the male protagonist, and she didn't know that the male protagonist was rich at that time! If it happens to anyone, it will break down and become a little distorted in mentality! This setting is a bit cruel, and the author's decision is even more cruel! If you don't mind, you can still read it. The author writes it very well, and the girls he recruits are also very delicate and many! I just can't accept the author's treatment of Zhou Ying!
The main line of the story is developed very reasonably, and the author's ideas are very clear. The protagonist was a soldier in his previous life. He is low-key, but not aggrieved. He does not become arrogant just because he obtained the system, or pretend to be stupid and slap him in the face. It is very enjoyable to watch.
The descriptions of life are particularly detailed. The protagonist always maintains his own sanity and likes to watch the process of acquiring girls without blindly throwing money at them. This kind of emotional game also has some plot plots, which is so exciting to watch!
I think it's a bit more enjoyable to write, and it's easy to get girls quickly. Although there are still poisonous points, although the prices are raised, and although there are a lot of nonsense, it is just fun. The only thing I said before was that my aunt was so good, so I made a wish and it was gone. I didn't spend a penny of that money🌸! ! !
The plot during the summer vacation is relatively flat, but the character descriptions are very detailed, including the dialogues. Each heroine is impressive, and there will not be too many heroines to remember later. The plot after school starts is so awesome, hahaha, it's really enjoyable to watch. I wish the author would update it more quickly.
The appearance rating system is written in a more realistic way. There is no one with a score of 90 or above at the beginning. There are still more people with a score of 80 or above at the beginning. This can also be seen that some top beauties with a score of 90 or above will appear later. There are a lot of 90 points at the beginning. What about the rest?
Although the protagonist is carefree, he is not offensive. He doesn't cheat, but he seems so reasonable when he is with the heroine. The heroine is also portrayed as someone who has brains, and won't pay tens of thousands of dollars for a bag. Overall, it looks very comfortable.
The beautiful picture does not look like a stallion. There is no key point or a few words omitted here. It can be seen that the author writes very carefully and describes the real scene as much as possible.
Not bad, not bad. I have read more than 100 chapters so far. The content description is quite popular and I can read it. The rest is very good, but it doesn't seem to be very popular. I hope the author can work hard. I will add a sentence at the end (Supermarket Li Sisi [smirk] [smirk])
So far, this novel is my favorite among the many great novels. For me personally, I have always been very picky. I like Shenhao novels very much, but it is difficult for me to read most Shenhao novels, mainly because the protagonist's character is unbearable, or the logic is confusing! This novel has a complex setting of logical thinking, and the characters are plump and lovable! The tomato rating should be above 9!
There are no overwhelming live broadcast rewards, and there are no cliché clips like class reunions, family gatherings, and bar dances where you are ignored, ridiculed, humiliated, and then slapped in the face. Although it is divorced from reality, it is still in line with the logic of reality.
It is very well written. It is a Shenhao novel that focuses on emotions. The emotional lines of several main female characters are really well written. It's a pity that there were too many female characters, and it was obvious that they couldn't be written in the later stage. Many female characters who appeared were obviously to be eaten, but they were immediately found out later. Moreover, there were many female characters with characteristics and a lot of writing and ink, but there was no follow-up emotional line, so the ending was skipped directly. It is really a pity. However, although there are many regrets, overall it is still very good to read, and I will support the author's new book!
This novel is good, I can at least keep it up till the end, it's not toxic, the emotional scenes of the individual heroines are well written, and the driving speed is just right [shy] The only thing that bothers me is how to manage my time [laughing]
To be fair, it does look pretty good so far! There are too many rotten fish and shrimps in tomatoes, but this one looks pretty good so far! ! You are all right in refuting me! ! ! 🤔🤔🤔🤔
It's okay to pass the time, of course there are some poisonous points, but it's not a big problem and there's not much pretentiousness or slap in the face, so it's still worth watching.
It's okay, there's a little poison, but it's not a big problem Good news for female video star Hao Wen: the emotional drama is good. Bad news: The relationship scenes are good.
A very good book with a gripping storyline
Very recommended, the description is very detailed, I hope it can be completed [laugh][laugh][laugh]
The book is very good. The only bad thing is that Gu Ying liked the male protagonist but was seduced.
I think according to Zhou Ying's high school character, this person should be a reserve member of the harem, but later the character collapsed and was deceived, which is a pity.
You can watch it
Well written, keep up the good work
Damn it, you can fool anyone
I like it so much, I want to introduce it to my good sisters
The author can give 5 stars for this update speed. It will not be the same as other novels. You will be stuck here and you will be stuck there.
It's so exciting and beautiful that I can't stop watching it.
This novel really amazed me with its clear logic, distinctive characters, and exciting plot.