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The idea is good, I hope it is worthy of your label of no heroine, instead of starting a harem in the name of no heroine (PS: Mainly because I have seen a lot of stories about no heroine, but they ended up having ambiguities with various magical girls. If not, think what I said in front of me is bullshit) Speaking of which, there are already magical girls, why not add some Kamen Riders [laughing]

(19) Orange +3.5, 45.5, (Orange 9.275) Sense of immersion: 4, fresh and strange feeling Follow-up: 4, stable quality Writing style: 3, can be read, not annoying Idea: 5, perfect. Although I haven't watched Magical Girl, it feels very reasonable. Plug-ins: 3. There are plug-ins, but they always feel like they belong to someone else. Background: 4, reasonable, urban + superpower, with a sense of graphics Rhythm: 4, smooth Plot: 3, yes Characters: 3, there is interaction, I only feel the transformation, it is very strange Logic: 3, reasonable Extra: Orange Three 0.5×5, Orange Four 1.0×4, Orange Five 2.0×1 Personal feelings: I can only say that I don't hate it, it's a bit fresh, and it's the first double-orange book in the 19th edition [like it]. Calculation: 20×0.75+8×2.75=37+8.5=45.5 45.5-35=10.5=(+3.5); 37-35=2; 9.0+(3.5+2)/20=9.275 Only personal subjective evaluation

Official attitude, good reviews The bond between magical girls, good reviews Behind the scenes of the protagonist, good reviews The protagonist's ability growth is clear and methodical, and does not rely entirely on plug-ins. Praise Character Logic Online, good reviews Looking forward to: The increase in the number of members of the "Magical Girl" organization may not only be limited to "girls", but it would also be good for boys to join if they meet the conditions. The organizational influence becomes larger and is not limited to one city. Nuomi's new form, besides the bird form, other forms can be added. More points. Complain: The birth of Magical Girls is a bit late. It is not emphasized at the beginning, but it was born when the protagonist's ability grows and the crisis breaks out. In fact, it is not bad, but I almost thought I clicked on the wrong fantasy novel. I looked at the table of contents and discovered that it only debuted around chapter 10 (can't remember exactly). Too little, not enough to see.

I think it's very interesting. Superpowers are very common in the city, but the setting of magical girls fighting against evil forces is almost unique in male videos. The unique development and application of superpowers are unique and eye-catching. The classic setting of being an ordinary student on a daily basis but privately acting like a righteous hero and confronting evil forces lurking in the shadows has been tried and tested many times. It's so enjoyable and enjoyable to read, but there are some minor issues that can be ignored. The author clearly knows that the ability to make a wish can improve combat power in many ways, but now he only focuses on the contract module with others. I feel that I can develop my own combat methods, but it is definitely a novel with great potential. I feel that it can be worth more than 9 points. (It's worth mentioning that the protagonist really can't transform into a magical boy? I want to see it.

Does Mahou make liquor? It's quite interesting. Relying on prayers, the power of belief and emotion blooms, at least it's not Madoka anymore. The protagonist is currently weak in combat, but he can absorb the understanding of magical girls. Needless to say about the future, not to mention that the highlight of this book is actually a magical girl. I hope Mahou Soju has a happy ending.

Not bad. The world view has not been fully developed yet and it feels a bit small. I look forward to the follow-up. Actually, looking at the cover, I thought it was a Madoka-type magical girl at first, but it turned out not to be the case, which is a pity. Then I thought of the finale of the world crisis, when the protagonist sacrifices all the Star Network and the energy of magical girls to summon the Ring of Enlightenment. The world crisis is resolved, there will be no more magical girls in the future, and the world returns to its original ordinary state. Accept Lily, a magical girl novel. The protagonist is recommended to stay behind the scenes (very few people know about it). At most, the ending will reveal a bit of romance, and then find someone to get married and it will be over. The above are all just the imagination of a certain reader. Just laugh, the author will write according to his own outline, so stick with it.

It's pretty good, but the details are a bit lacking. For example, there's no description of everyone's emotions changing from strangers to familiar ones, which makes Su's will to protect Lin appear a bit abrupt. Judging from the plot of the secret realm, the author may feel a bit like a single-core processor. He wrote about the situation on Su's side but the protagonist failed to handle it well. But everything else is fine. I feel like the details are getting better starting from about thirty chapters. The outline feels a little undeveloped in the beginning, but it gets better later on.

From the front, it looks like the alliance is very powerful, because even the rules can be detected, but from the back... If there were no protagonist, this alliance would have been destroyed long ago, (the protagonist's ability is very low) can actually protect the alliance [laughing]

The creativity is very good, the writing is also good, and the plot is not awkward at all. Everything comes naturally, very much like a magical girl. In addition, entering the main line is in Chapter 21, which may be relatively slow in the early stage. It made me see the kind of friendship between magical girls, and there may also be love. I just feel like I'm looking at Madoka [laughs evilly]

It's okay, but it lacks the daily delicacy of a magical girl, from protecting small daily routines to protecting familiar cities and everyone. On the contrary, it is revealed everywhere... Knights, armored warriors and other special photography categories, burning their own sense of mission and justice I just feel like the girl is not girly enough for the time being. Let me check again.

Sign a contract with me and become a magical girl! Chapter 21 The magical girl appears for the first time! Although, magical girls are really fun. The protagonist is a transformer. Since the release of magical girls, the protagonist's role will become less. Behind the scenes. But. Don't call the police if something goes wrong. Take care of it yourself. Reporting cults anonymously has basically not changed much except adding more security personnel. I feel like the official look and feel is not very good. In fact, I don't have much direct contact with cults, but with a kind heart, I destroy the layout of those cults everywhere. In short, she is Sailor Moon who saves the world. Then there was a plot about selling medicine, which obviously killed so many people, but I didn't seem to see the fate of this villain company later on. It was only said that people didn't buy the medicine because it was not effective. Oh, boss, you put poison in the medicine, why don't you throw a punch? Don't you want to clear up a wave? There are many big and small poisonous points, and AI should be involved in the creation, but I still want to see the story about Sailor Moon's transformation device behind the scenes. The core story is still okay, and this is the only one that is okay. I don't know how the protagonist will change the world in the future, so I still look forward to it.

Awesome, but the official strength is a bit weak. There are not many strong people on the surface, and there is no one from nearby cities to support it. I feel like only the captain and vice-captain are strong, but the others are not so good. The protagonist's system is great, waiting for the update.

Niu B [eat melon], the writing is really Niu B, really good

Ever since Madoka, I haven't seen this kind of mascot that doesn't turn into QB for a long time [face covering]

The setting is great, but the plot in the early stages is a little too fast. Before turning into blue, there were only a few sentences mentioning the relationship between Su Yuemiao and Lin Xiaoxia. It felt weird that it was too fast. However, it's generally to my liking. I am more optimistic about the subsequent plot. But I'm just curious whether the protagonist, the vest, will show up later and in what state

Not bad, many places are very detailed and not downgraded. Even the villains also have intelligence. The handling of some details is considered good among similar plots. For example, why didn't the villain just kill him while the protagonist group was developing? This book is not written in such a way that the villain Calabash Boy saves Grandpa and gives him experience. It's not like the villain is arrogant and thinks that no matter how developed the protagonist is, he can't beat him. Or is it the villain who makes the most correct choice based on the intelligence he has obtained when there is information gap? It's a pity that the protagonist has a golden finger.

Not bad, I'll give you a five-star review [blowing kiss]

It's quite interesting. It feels like watching a magical girl anime.

@Thisfang After all, the male protagonist is the person behind the scenes, the male protagonist, so he can't be too weak [face covering]

A book worthy of five stars. Great 👍🏻 (my review is like a human-machine bushi)

Let's sign a contract and become a magical girl/boy! Hahahahahaha

They are all magical girls. Here comes a passing Kamen Rider

Why are there only magical girls and no armor combination? I hope we can form a super sentai in the future.

I can only say that it's obviously pretty good to watch now, and I hope it won't be trashy later. The subject matter is good, but the world view is a little too big. I hope the author can explain the specific reasons later.

What's good is that the main character has no style at all, and doesn't have the feeling of being behind the scenes. Every time the main character opens his mouth, it always feels like the behind-the-scenes filters are falling all over the place.

It's a very well-written novel. So far, it doesn't have any bad points, and there's nothing wrong with the various plot designs... Overall, it's pretty good. Hope there will be more. [Like][Like] Author, write quickly. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. Please update more quickly. It's not enough. It's rare to see someone with interesting writing.

I have been waiting for the protagonist to become a magical girl, but the protagonist is the one announcing the curtain. The protagonist is the harmless Kyubey [smile]

Magical girl behind the scenes I want to see Tiga, the light of hope, how could Tiga not appear?

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Very well written, cheers