A Weird Illustration at the Beginning, I Became an Alien God in the Wasteland

I originally clicked in casually to read it, but who would have thought that it kept attracting me to read it. It is a wasteland novel of good quality among foreign persimmons. The main line is clear, the story descriptions of the supporting characters are vivid and not verbose, and the early completion of the world view is quite high, but there are not many updates. The author may continue to work hard [Blow kiss]

Let's talk about the conclusion first, fine grass jelly Tomato is currently the best article about killing monsters and turning them into monsters. Although it is a classic old routine of picking up missing monsters and snowballing to become stronger, it focuses on describing the world view, human touch, monster form and performance characteristics, and shows an ordinary person's road to becoming stronger in the early stage of a distorted apocalypse. The plot is reasonable and compact. I think the story in the wild is well written (I can't say it's very good). A person suddenly becomes stronger and doesn't know much about the control of power and the judgment of danger. The danger in the wild tells the true terror and suppresses the protagonist's inflated heart. I feel that it was well written. The follow-up retelling of the worldview is the top priority, and the foreshadowing of the plot (because of the relationship between Father Wang and the official relationship) must be handled well. By the way, I especially like the division of weirdness and the application in special occasions, just like watching the young hackers when I was a child.

Advantages, the overall plot is good, the villain is not brainless, there is no female protagonist in the latest chapter, there is no ambiguity, and there are relatively few female figures and appearances. Disadvantages, there is a suspicion of repeating the word "water" in some places, and the protagonist's transformation clothes can be extended, but what about the bombs and binoculars that the protagonist carries? Also, the two strong men who appear in the article are both women. I think the first time the razor was a woman, and the official one can be assigned a man. The next appearance will be assigned a woman, which will not be so responsive. Also, when fighting the scalpel, it would be better to press him down and change it to an evenly matched fight. In fact, there is another bug. Some containment conditions require eating a certain part to kill the monster. Can I not eat it first? When the spirit is exhausted during the battle, eat and then replenish the state. There is no introduction to whether there is a time limit or distance limit after the containment is triggered. There is an E-level escape in the middle. The reason for the weird containment failure is I ran away. It felt like the distance was limited. There were still 100 chapters where the protagonist thought about catching some weak and weird creatures to contain and replenish the blue bars at critical moments. I thought of those that needed to be eaten and destroyed certain parts to save for critical moments. When I encountered novels that suited my taste, I read them more carefully. Later updates contained ambiguous and vulgar descriptions, which tripped me up.

[Congratulations] It's good to watch, but it's missing the highlights. It's not good enough. Why don't you write more before posting it? Also, the main character group's early writing was too heartwarming, and I'm a little scared.

A very nice wasteland novel. The background explanation is reasonable, step-by-step, and self-explanatory. There is no secondary setting for the dark and the dark. The protagonist's growth is traceable, and the interpersonal relationships and character settings are clear and unremarkable. There is currently no heroine, and there are only a few group portraits, but it may be reasonably discontinued in the future due to strength issues. There is a clear link between level and strength. The protagonist can fight across levels without any huge cheats. Occasionally minor conflicts in the setting can be reasonably explained by subsequent patches. I read the latest chapter in one breath, but I can only keep it on the bookshelf for a long time. I don't know how long it will last. It is a good book with the potential of one million words.

It's really good-looking, the language isn't too poisonous, it's concise but too sparse. I would like to make a suggestion. This kind of book is easy to tear apart if it has a female protagonist. I recommend it without a female protagonist. I keep up with updates every day. I won't support this book to death. Come on, author. There is no heroine, everyone has their own characteristics, recommended! ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

Good book, love to read, read more. The author listens to advice, is not human, and can reply to messages. The setting is good, a bit similar to the style of Ghost Jiao in the Abandoned City next door, but this one is weird + apocalyptic. The author's setting is also very rigorous, and he will review and edit the text. Some people say that the author uses A1, but in fact he only uses A1 to polish the rhetoric. The plot can be It can be seen that it is thought out from the heart, not A1. I personally think that using A1 to polish is a normal operation and does not need to be grasped all the time. Some people use isolation seven points, and masters also use it, so it is nothing. The only shortcoming of this book is that the author is a bit short and weak, and it is not enough to read. I found that some people wrote negative reviews in the comments. Is someone red-eyed?

9.5 Points or above. Environmental description, character creation, background connection, and motivation are all considered top-notch. It is not easy to create many characters in a limited space, and it is even more difficult to write well. Highly recommended! Personal mark, if you think it's not good, please leave a negative review and don't push me [laughs]

It is a beautiful and high-quality book. I feel that it is not the kind of book that is written just as soon as it hits the head. The author still put a lot of thought into it and the setting is very rigorous. Although the protagonist has a big golden finger, he does not rely on his imagination and cleverness to write a book that is enjoyable. It is a pleasant story that follows the plot, more like a QD style book.

Nice. The writing is concise and the plot is smooth. The seventh team's dinner party at the beginning is a warm scene that is very well described. It clearly describes the character traits of many supporting characters such as Lao Wang's sharp-tongued talk, Chen's silence and concern, Aunt Liu's kindness, etc., And directly establishes these characters. Later, the plot of the invasion of the Butcher Gang has many parties joining forces. The protagonist's alliance of traitors and infiltrators has pushed the plot atmosphere to a climax. The setting is also relatively novel and interesting. Looking forward to subsequent updates.

Looks good! ! Wuhu! So pretty! The protagonist is great. After reading it for more than 200 years, there is almost no ambiguity. It is the first time to read this kind of world background. It feels quite novel, and each chapter has a lot of words. However, I still feel that reading more than 200 chapters is not enough. 😋 It is much longer than the 2k chapters I followed in the previous chapters. Big boost for the author, it is not bad for reading without thinking!

Not bad, fighting is fun! , There is no heroine, no ambiguity, the combat power is not broken, a variety of cards are integrated, and the combat power is F E D belongs to the level of cannon fodder and elite monsters. Level C and up includes level C, which is the boss. Even if the official comes, the plot is quite enjoyable. After the end of area c and heading to the northeast, it starts to get a bit boring. There are about 30 chapters in the middle that are very boring. After arriving in the big city in the northeast, it is much better and not boring anymore. The plot is not depressing and full of joy and warmth. It is the author, an old priest, who actually stabbed the aunt😡, and Lao Wang is halfway into the earth. Later, a new protagonist was split, which was a bit disgusting. The new protagonist's position was not clear, and he seemed to be on the opposite side of the protagonist. As well as the first two volumes, the first volume was very good, and the second volume can only be said to be a blast.

It's quite good-looking, and whether it's the characters' personalities or various growths, I think it's all very good-looking. It's a bit passionate, and with this kind of background, there's also a hint of sincerity, which is really warm. Their team begged the author to stop the knife... I haven't seen such an interesting book in a long time. It's really good. Although it's a little overwhelming, it's not bad.

I think it's pretty good. I've been listening to books and haven't seen any vulgar plots so far. It's not toxic to me. I can understand some of the decisions and choices made by the male protagonist. It feels good. Uh... Um... So childish and middle-aged, and "Give me a break" have appeared too many times, and it has a sense of old school literature, very rushed, what is it about using your own strength to save people and calling me sister?

The subject matter is good and the plot is quite interesting. You can follow it. The author said that this is the first time he has written it. There is currently 120 chapters and there is nothing wrong with it. I haven't posted a book review for a long time and I almost forgot about this thing. After all, it is not easy. It is rare to encounter a good book. Please support the author.

It's super nice. If you like the settings, come and take a look. It's a great pleasure. It is not as good as the platinum writers in terms of details, but it is definitely top-notch at the second level, and this novel has a knife. I believe many people will like novels that are more tragic. Doomsday, weird, and imaginative. The most important thing is that the monster setting is comparable to the Lord of Mystery. I have never seen a novel that has hundreds of words for a monster setting. Of course, I didn't read much about the settings, but with this attitude, I was very energetic. The most important thing is that the climax has repeated twists and turns, and the holes filled in can basically be echoed. It's not easy to find fine bran in tomatoes.

Oh my gosh, it's so exciting. The further you read, the better it gets. It's such a good batch. It's really not easy to find novels of this quality on Tomato. It's normal to be a little slow at the beginning when upgrading. The protagonist is not brainless, and it's fun. It's just that the update is too slow. The batch that I just saw Baige Shuang suddenly disappeared. Damn it! ! ! The author will update soon! ! ! ! ! After the end of the first volume, it is also the second volume that I have been waiting for for a long time. The start is as expected by rscp, that is, Gu Wusu has no memory of the original owner, but later I saw that the memory came back little by little, which is still acceptable. It is a kind of foreshadowing, but the battle of wits may not be suitable for prison writing. After the rewrite, the IQ of the characters has gone up, but it is still recommended to quickly integrate Gu Wusu into the protagonist. The folklore of Kanto Daxian is very detailed. It's true, it turns out that the Novice Village is here instead of Wangchuan City, hahahahaha. There is no battle point in the front, so it will be dull and the pace is a little slow. Later, in the c-level rules and monsters, the pace of the factory picks up, and the familiar feeling is back. This kind of wasteland battle is still fun. When the new dungeon factory is released later, I hope to control it a little bit. After all, you don't have ten heads in the game. [Read carefully] Looking forward to the Shengjing part and see the battle between the bosses. In fact, the tone of Lao Gu's work is the same before and after. Apart from the fast and slow pace, it is not a high-end and low-end. Recently, Lao Gu also successfully transformed into an angel and flew with wings in the sky. When the album was upgraded, I had a premonition that this scene would happen. I hope Leziren Gu Wushu can go back as soon as possible. I still prefer him like a small cannonball. [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

The design is quite interesting. There is no random hair knife, but some people are not happy because of this. But I want to say, if only hair knife can be called deep, then other types of books in this world have become shallow. The protagonist himself is already open, so where can I sit and look at familiar people? What is the difference between this and an incompetent husband? Of course, some people say that using AI to polish this point is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. Not all articles that do not use AI polishing are necessarily good articles. It is recommended to read a few chapters first. If they come together, they will go away. Personally, I feel that this book can be regarded as food and grass in Tomato. The main content is large and full, and there are no frequent poisonous spots (except for the fact that it is poisonous if it is not used) ), the design is quite interesting, but there is still a problem with the latest chapter. The obtained cards can be issued separately in a list. Not only is the reading experience not very good when it is issued as a chapter, the plot content is too watery, but the text numerical mechanism is too dry to read, but I still encourage the author with five stars, come on

This novel is quite good, with the theme of devouring transformation. I don't think the plot has any bad points, and there are no good meal replacements for this theme on Tomato. It's just that the update is a bit slow. The author must work hard! When I saw this second volume, I felt a bit out of touch with the wasteland setting. I personally felt that it was the apocalyptic version of the Northeastern Great Immortal. Alas, I was a little disappointed. The author said that he had written a double book, which caused confusion and a bit of writing. It was indeed very strange to read.

The setting is novel, and I like the story of the first volume. The tone of the second volume is too different from the previous one. Although I am from Northeast China, I can't stand it at all. The later volume seems to drive away the previous audience. Furthermore, I really hate DS writing. I like the setting, but as I read it, I felt a strong sense of DS... I won't talk about it until later.

Very good very good. There are no long scene descriptions and ellipses and dashes that are common to novices. It is already much better than others. But some places are described in detail, which gives people a feeling that the pace is very slow. I feel that most people in Tomato still like to read fast books, and it might be better if the pace is faster (don't worry about my personal opinions). [Laugh]

It's pretty good. I like this style, but I don't really like the clone. I feel that it's an independent individual with its own consciousness and comes from itself. What I mainly want to see is the fusion of the protagonist's materials. Now I'm focusing on the plot. There are too few useful materials for the fusion. Most of them are. I just want to mention that the material needs to be more integrated, with more templates with different functions and characteristics. Also, the first volume and the second volume are very different, but it is still okay. In that case, there must be different places and different ways of resistance and life. All in all, it is very well written.

I've read Chapter 170, and everything about the character plot is pretty good. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist has always been in the comfort zone. After taking in the Queen of Fortune, I didn't encounter any emergencies. Even if I have unlimited blue cards, I don't often go out to hunt weird things. I prefer the part of the plot where I go alone into the wilderness, experience a little high energy, run away hastily when encountering some troubles, and meet some reliable talented teammates (both men and women). I feel that the talent of teammates is now a bit different from that of the protagonist. I hope to add more of these plots in the future.

The first volume is really well written, there is nothing poisonous, and there is no plot about random knife-wielding people. But the beginning of the second volume makes people uncomfortable to read, and it makes me confused at first, but I can hold back and continue reading for a while. The main discomfort is that the protagonist has turned into a monster from his normal state, and that a sub-personality has been stripped out. The former can be transformed back into human form later, and the latter makes me wonder why a sub-personality full of negative emotions can be so rational and calm, and I don't know how the author will deal with the relationship between the protagonist and the sub-personality. In the end, Bai Xiaofei and Hei Xiaofei merged in Corpse Brother, but the sub-personalities here are all the negative emotions of the protagonist, and the fusion feels impossible. I'll take another look.

I really recommend this book 1. This book can definitely be called a masterpiece in the category of weird wastelands. It is really well written. From the characters' emotions to the description of battles, from ignorance to perseverance, the drawings are all very well done. 2. Before this book, you can see the growth of the protagonist, becoming stronger bit by bit. It is not an invincible and refreshing article, but it has some refreshing points that can make people see it fresh. 3. The acquisition and fusion of cards can arouse readers' expectations. After all, who doesn't like to fuse and become stronger? The chapter in Wangchuan City is particularly well written, but when it comes to Hanyuan, the change span of the protagonist is a bit big. Maybe the readers can't stand the change of the protagonist. I can't stand it. Overall, this novel is really well written and worth reading. Judging from the number of updates, I feel that there are a few people. There must be people who have not read this novel. The number of people who have read this novel will definitely reach more than the current number. If this novel continues to be written, comics and animations will definitely be published.

It's a very good book and nothing particularly uncomfortable for me. It's very good and the protagonist is very affectionate. To the protagonist, the people in the team are family members and they don't need a reason to protect their family. I didn't see the nanny in the book review at all. I only saw the talkative Mr. Wang, the taciturn Chen Hao who never asked about the protagonist's secrets. Cooperating with the protagonist will not hurt the protagonist. The monkey aunt is a lively girl who loves children. As long as there are no problems later, it is definitely a good book worth reading.

A very good weird novel, Wasteland Flow, which constantly integrates weirdness and becomes stronger. Most of the weirdness mentioned is novel, with a large world view and perfect settings, such as RW, CE, etc., And it is no longer the traditional weird literature that only uses ABC to demarcate the levels (the AB in the article is for the convenience of readers' understanding, and the other is for the simple understanding of ordinary people in the work). The character creation is very good, and at the same time, you can really think from the perspective of the characters in the novel. I can't understand what some people say about being ambiguous. Just because Jia La is a woman is it ambiguous? ! The women are all single and good-looking, but the men are not good-looking. It's ridiculous. I don't think there's anything ambiguous about it anyway. As for AI, I think it allows the author to better focus on the description of the plot, and at the same time ensure that the scene description can keep up, so it is supported. For example, in the case of Lost City, the main reason is that there is almost no description of the plot, which makes it a bit boring. Finally, I hope that the author can sort out the outline and stick to his own ideas. It's okay if he can't add equivalent fantasy. He can just show it to us as an Easter egg when it's finished. ＾0＾~ From reading the book on National Day to reading this book now, it's a gold rush in history. @Inspiration Brain Big Bang I hope the author can update three chapters a day, come on!

As of now, there are 228 chapters. There are no big logical flaws. The writing is smooth and the ideas are fairly clear. There are some small ingenuity. Some places read a bit weird and may be suspected of AI polishing. However, it is quite rare in Tomato. At least it can get up to 9 points. I don't know if the author is just starting a small account or is writing a novel for the first time and is more serious. How to explain the turning point after the current war clearly depends on the writing quality. Whether it can make a transition from previous to next, and how to write in the future is still unknown.

I've read a little bit, but there is one kind of writing that is very weird. I mainly read the previous ones. All of them are the kind of places where some descriptions are very weird. They always use the "no, but" kind of description. It is not very relaxed, but crazy and dangerous. There are many places that have this feeling. It does intensify the sense of danger, but then it feels like there is a very weird feeling. It's hard to describe. It just feels too repetitive. This is the highlight of my reading. But what I like more is that it has more imaginative ideas, which is pretty good. And the description of this wasteland novel is also very good. You can clearly understand what you are doing, and it feels like playing a mini-game. It looks a bit uncomfortable. It should be AI or borrowed modifications. There are too many sentence patterns. The turning point is not something, but something. Come on, the author, polish it. It's really uncomfortable to see similar ones every two or three chapters.

1. The full text of this book has a main line of containing strange evolution and multiple branch lines that are closely connected. The structure is compact and the content is novel. It is interesting to read and eye-catching. The foreshadowing is more or less mentioned in the article, rounding out the setting. Every hole dug will be buried. 2. I personally feel that there are no flaws in this book. I hope that the side effects of the previous containment can still have more of their own place in the text, as an interesting setting or a little restriction. Personally, I am also somewhat selfish. I admit that I don't really want this good book to be too few to satisfy my endless spiritual longing. 3. The author is also a good person, he corrects his mistakes when he knows them, and he can understand the principle of grasping the big and letting go of the small. This is not about which of the two books the author has published is worse. It refers to the author's choice between quality and quantity, money and art, material and spiritual, small self and everyone, self-interest and dedication. He is a noble person, a pure person, a moral person, a person who is free from vulgar taste, and a person who is beneficial to the people. Praise the author for his selfless dedication! 4. It's better than nothing, it means different things to different people. The readers in the comment areas of the full text of this book are friendly and active in the discussion. There are no malicious words, sentences, paragraphs, etc. Generally speaking, there are no spoilers, no interference, and it is even beneficial to the understanding and opinion of the article.