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Emmm, I think I'm my mother-in-law's heartthrob. It's awkward and fun at times. The redeye literature in the writing is actually quite good in the article. The author writes about women's videos but he uses words like effeminate. Don't bring in the ugly faces of some male characters, otherwise they will wither. The heroine's force in the opening chapter is worthy of many people's complaints, but it can be seen that the author still put his heart into it, and there is nothing else.

I only read the first chapter, and I didn't give it a low score. I didn't know if I could comment, so I commented first. It's inappropriate to delete it! My impression of the heroine in the first chapter is that she is a very unreliable, childish and self-centered person who is even speechless and funny. Putting aside the fact that she is angry with her grandfather and does not want to inherit the family, it shows that the heroine is a maverick and self-centered person. But I wanted to scare my boss by wearing a hood for no reason. I changed my clothes and scared the cleaning lady, but she was sprayed to death with insecticidal spray. The hood was still difficult to take off... I am speechless no matter how I think about this plot, it is a very ridiculous heroine and the way to die... Maybe the author wanted to write the heroine's time-travel plot in a light and funny way, but after reading it, I just felt that the heroine was responsible for her own evil, loved to joke regardless of boundaries and circumstances, did things without plans and did not consider the consequences, and was very childish and ridiculous. Even because of this, I began to doubt whether the copywriter was a scam, because it was difficult for me to imagine how such a heroine could be a great heroine in another world? The above thoughts after reading the first chapter of Chun Chun, maybe I said it too harshly, maybe I said it wrong, maybe I said it too early, and it is inappropriate to delete it.

It's nice to read, and the writing is fluent. It doesn't feel like a running account or a noob. The heroine is very decisive and very resourceful. The logic is reasonable and natural, which makes people feel comfortable to watch. There is also a little humor. I can see that the logic is not flawed now. In some situations, the explanations given by the heroine are also very reasonable and convincing (after persuading Moir to let him go). It is not far-fetched and feels comfortable to watch. The most important thing is that the heroine has not been a very obvious tool person phenomenon so far. My temper is still a freshman novel with more than ten chapters, but the rhythm and writing are very good. I hope that I won't go astray in the future. I also hope that the heroine will not be a virgin and not become a tool of the protagonist group. She will be more decisive in killing. She is the most important and decisive. (I was persecuted by the previous book. The heroine became a tool person to save the protagonist group and raised them like giant babies. I didn't dare to let them do anything. They were all seriously injured and tied up as bait. I was really convinced [smile])

I really like Darwin! But some of the male protagonists are unclean and a little bit diaphragmatic😭 They are really good-looking! ! ! Highly recommended

It's very exciting to follow more than 60 chapters. The heroine has a plot and a high strength value. She has a flexible mind and will always calculate the pros and cons to ensure her own safety when encountering problems. She will not make a loss-making business. Saving people is not a matter of overflowing with a mother's heart. It is either done casually or can be exchanged for benefits, sober and emotional. This kind of character who has no love brain and only focuses on self-protection and career is really more and more enjoyable. The author has a lot more points! ! !

I went and looked at the table of contents. This book has not been updated for so long. Now the last update was actually 12 days ago. Will it stop updating again? It looks pretty good after watching a little bit. When will this end?

Like the heroine. It's obvious that I like Brother Nu. Hey, I want Brother Nu's pussy and other unclean single arrows.

Looking forward to it ~ super nice [salute]

The description of the atmosphere is really good, but it's a little lacking.

Personally, I feel that the writing is smooth and the characters are full of characters. It is quite interesting. The author should work hard to update quickly. Who can read just that every day? The foreigner next door thought that I lacked this traffic...

Looking forward to further development

Please bring more meat, thank you boss

It's good to watch, but the most important thing is the writing. The heroine is super strong, beautiful and sassy. I finally found another walking dead novel with good writing [Sending my heart]

Aisha Glenn saw that I couldn't control my mouth. Come on, sister [laughs]

Very nice. The character descriptions are very three-dimensional.

It's very beautiful. The heroine's character is so charming and her force value is high. It's really good.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha 😃It's really good-looking, I want to eat meat

I haven't seen something so interesting in a long time! Highly recommended, support the author, the writing is really good! Been waiting for updates! It's really good-looking and I really like this kind of sassy heroine! Support the author! Come on, come on, come on👊👊👊

Super super pretty ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥

I like the strong character of the heroine

Really super pretty

The heroine is very handsome and the story is interesting The author will come back soon [almost crying]

Believe me, it's really, really good-looking

The writing is very good, and Glenn is really sweet. The heroine's first love is definitely with him.

Although there are a lot of exaggerated and OOC plots, it's just fun but it's corny

Help open points. I only watched a few episodes of The Walking Dead because it was so good, but I also found it interesting.

The best Walking Dead fanfic I've seen so far.

Come on, keep paying attention

The heroine is really great! !

Hee hee hee hee I'm a native dog and I love watching