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The Protagonist of Hogwarts Has a Very Strong Background. When He Was Sorted into Schools, He Was Shocked When He Read His Last Name.
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Looking for High-Quality HP (But If You Don't Reach the Level of the Book I Posted, You Will Be Exempted)
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Male Channel, Hogwarts Fan (Don't Ask Me Why It's Not Harry)
Put the fanfic in there for me. It enriches me directly. No, let everyone enrich me.
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To Be Honest, HP Has No Masterpieces! Most of Them Have Been Read! 😭
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I Was so Angry That I Bluntly Said That HP Didn't Have a Book About Conferring Gods😋
I want to read a book like "Harry Potter: Slytherin".
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Wizard! Wizard! Wizard! Pure Wizarding Literature
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[Hp] Little Badger, Little Badger! Why Do They All Think Badger Yard Is Mediocre and Incompetent?
It really seems like a cute and warm Badger Yin Zai Zai! Since when have badgers and badgers been called losers by everyone? ? Hufflepuff, who is obviously warm and peaceful, can also shine, so why does he still engage in house discrimination?
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The protagonist is too open-minded. He immediately learned the spells from the first to fifth grade plus his own spells at the beginning of the first grade, so he mastered the spells at a glance... His sister is also invincible. She can do whatever she wants without even saying spells. She just follows her words and directly becomes the reincarnation of Merlin [face covering] [face covering]
Ultimate invincible beauty. It fills in a lot of holes in the original work and perfectly fits my personal views. Why is Snape so bad? The others didn't show much drama. It was very enjoyable to watch. I felt so uncomfortable when I was stuck on the organ door. The author's soul is back, updatedo
It's touching. It's one of the few HP fan works in Tomato that respects the original work. At least I haven't seen any problems in the details yet. The outlook is normal, the characters are in line with the original work, and there are no conspiracy theories. Other HP fans, especially the new books, leave aside the setting. Many of them have errors in the logic and even the spells of the spells. If you are a fan of the original novel, you will feel very comfortable reading this book. The setting is also more interesting, the genius starts with a slightly cool text, and the temperament is also better handled, without the smell of diaosi. Well, I don't respect the original work that much anymore. Some small details about Grindelwald, Hermione, and Snape don't quite match the descriptions in the original work. It seems that there is no outline, and it becomes more and more scattered as it is written, and there is no main line (? Some magic spells have problems in principle, which cannot be solved by geniuses. Especially when it comes to souls, how can you dare to use it directly on people without experiments, even if you catch a few white mice and try it. Anyway, the beginning The look and feel is okay, but in the end I feel like the author doesn't know what to write. It's separated from the original main line but has not planned a new main line. The more I read it, the more it looks like a running account. I hope it won't be too supervising. If I can finish it in the end, I can probably give it 4 stars. After 2 follow-up reviews, 3 stars is still high.
The writing, characterization, and plot description all fit the Harry Potter story. There are no unnecessary conspiracy theories or messy things. The character design is basically okay. It is very talented but at least it has not exceeded the world view. It is really comfortable to watch. The main character's sister is too much. . .
Reasonable cheating, the physical body is comparable to the system. However, the look and feel is still very good, and the protagonist is a normal person. Hope it won't be boring later. What I don't feel good about is the emotional line of the trip to France, which is a bit sloppy.
Seeing the author's respect for the original work, the protagonist feels very comfortable. So far, this is a Harry Potter fan novel that I feel is perfect, and I hope more people can read it.
Be encouraged. He's a genius, but he just brushed it off. Although another genius hp novel uses the setting of Hogwarts Legacy, all the theories are written very clearly, and there is no setting for simply learning the curse. This book is a bit toxic. It seems that "I don't really yearn for the magical world" at the moment. Maybe it's because I'm good at it.
Well, Long Aotian's version of Harry Potter? In short, private facilities account for a large part. The plot is also interesting, but there are too few updates. Lucky crab, my sister is the third generation Dark Lord, the finale.
At present, this book is worthy of the five stars I gave it. The protagonist is extremely talented and the main plot is unbreakable. Although it may not be friendly to some orange fans, from an objective point of view, this book does not have many problems at present. There are a few minor problems but really not many. It is not a nanny for the Hogwarts trio, but it does not completely isolate the trio. Being friends ≠ being a nanny. This book has not deviated so far, but the author is a bit short.
In my mind, this foreign persimmon can even be said to be one of the top three best HP books on the Internet. The author has a wild mind and has his own understanding of the original work and the movie. I like it very much, thank the author
Overall, it's good, but compared to other fan fiction (excluding those brainless novels), the protagonist of this book is a bit too smart. There is logic, but not much. In the early stage, it feels like an invincible novel, but after careful consideration, it is not impossible. Also, the emotional scene with Furong is a bit abstract, but I believe it will be much better later on, and these are the two poisonous points. On the whole, the logic is smooth, the description is quite original, and the settings basically adopt the original settings. It is very rigorous and interesting. Yes, the early and middle stages are quite enjoyable and classy. Well, this combat power has been maintained relatively well.
Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking, but I'm really a bit afraid to accept the male protagonist's talent. Although Harry Potter is my inspiration, it's not as good as someone else's ten years of hard work. It's not as good as your flash of inspiration.
Not much to say, it's really beautiful. It doesn't have the minor flaws mentioned in other comments, at least I don't think so. I hope it can be finished perfectly.
These five stars do not represent moisture, but represent that this HP fan novel deserves such evaluation. It is a very good novel and I hope it will be updated continuously. Five stars is the limit of platform evaluation. I hope it is not the limit of this novel. Come on, the author, you can maximize the literary talent of your excellent novels [Like] [Like]
Seeing this, I must tell the truth. Please avoid reading the comments when reading the article, otherwise it will affect your judgment of this work [laughing awkwardly]. The above is my experience of reading the article, and of course it is not absolute (there are indeed bad articles that I can't stand, I won't deny it). But this article is really wonderful. The author wrote his own Harry Potter article. The protagonist Raven I think he is very similar to an anime character I once liked, Kurosaki Ichigo from Bleach. Yes, the protagonist is actually very similar to Ichigo. Except that Ichigo may not be as creative as him [face covering], the others are very similar. They all just want to live a stable life. If not If someone insists on touching the most important person to him, he will basically not go crazy. In fact, anyone who watches Death should know that Ichigo does not reject power. Although he says that he likes to live an ordinary life, in many cases only power can allow him to live a stable life. This is a very ironic point. This is why I think Raven is similar.
The writing is quite clear, and the various characters are reasonably portrayed. It has appropriately strengthened Voldemort, increased the role of Hufflepuff, weakened Slytherin, and also provided explanations for some of the characterizations of Dumbledore and Snape in place of the original work. The author has a good imagination, and the Curtain Spell and the Communication Spell with All Living Beings are very interesting. The emotional line is also good, without too much length or deviation from the character. It's just that there are too many descriptions of the protagonist's family, especially the Muggle who is the school director. Grindelwald's surname is not prominent enough, and some of the original plots are not reasonable enough.
It's a bit sweet, but the main character's sister is horribly talented.
Hajimi, North and South Mung Beans, Asigaha, Yan Crying Milk Dragon
Not bad! Will the protagonist develop light and sacred magic? ! Come on, author! I hope it won't stop updating midway!
Good looking, love watching, one of the few Harper fans who don't lick Snape
Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
The male protagonist has a very high IQ [laughs]
Beautiful, no need to say more
Do I think it's okay? ( ̄ω ̄;)Why only 6.8 Points?
Socket: Numerical inflation, feed me peanuts
It would be nice to strengthen the protagonist a little more, for example, give him the ability to follow his words.
It's great, I'm listening to it for the second time, the author, will Ron and Hermione get together?
To be precise, I want to score three points and five points, but there is no half point in the tomato. Everything I wrote before is wrong. I can't stand it since I truly mastered the magic spell of talent. The reality gems are here.
It's really, really well written! ! ! ! O(≧∇≦)O
It's pretty good. As the heroine, Furong is no longer the rookie of the same age. It won't be broken, right? Don't. I still want to gain some weight before watching.