Villain************

Let's make some comments. I've been reading fantasy novels since I was in elementary school and I've been a fan of them since I was a senior. The writing is good, and the plot design shows the author's care. Although there are some minor issues, the author still patiently and carefully revised every item (like this!) The author probably wanted to design the protagonist to be a completely cold-blooded villain, but I personally feel that it is still too cold-blooded. It feels even more cold-blooded than the Destiny villain Gu Changge (reflected in his treatment of the people around him) I suggest that the author be a little gentler and be cold-blooded and cruel to other people. This is good, but I still hope to be kind to the people around me (the one in the Big Love League is still too humble. I hope that the protagonist will be kinder to the heroines around him in the future. Driven by profit from the beginning, and then slowly develop feelings) (Die Jia: I am just expressing my personal opinions and suggestions, please don't take it too seriously)

Sure enough, he is still an evil villain and it's fun to watch. Master Gu's methods reach the sky, and the girl of destiny takes everything back home [admiration].

The writing style is quite like that of the third young master of the Tang family

I feel it's okay, even if I'm cruel to my own people, I think it should be better.