Historian of the Ninja World: the Opening of Man Paradise

It's probably a harem story, as long as the female has contact with the protagonist, big or small. It's quite ambiguous, and although the emotions are a bit inexplicable, the description is quite good, and I, a thunder harem, can also read it. It's quite mind-blowing and quite interesting.

The Biandian one is more funny, but it depicts a promising Naruto. Most fans either only write about the strength of the protagonist and do not change the tragic world; or they use the ancient harem style to barely change the tragedy, but in the final analysis it is still a tragedy. The only thing I know so far is that this author has been setting up a good guy who doesn't ask for anything in return and isn't obsessed with beauty to save the world from the beginning. Very positive energy. As for the big-portion gags like "the miserable mandarin duck", it's more like dissatisfaction with Kishimoto's original unreasonable setting. Although the article involves JOJO, it is not a direct copy of the setting. It is also good that borrowing with a sense of boundaries is a qualified work.

It's abstract enough, and the imagination is comparable to that of Dream Realizer of All Realms. I like it very much.

Food is currently non-toxic, but if you are a novice author, I suggest you write less emotional lines. After all, there are many fans who have good emotional lines written by Naruto. Only by highlighting the characteristics of your book can you attract more people to read it. Of course, my personal suggestion is to be confident in your writing and give it a try. Anyway, it's a foreign persimmon [Like]

There is no system, but the protagonist's abilities are incredible. Every time he unlocks a new ability, it will make people curious. Then the key point is that the author can ensure that there are enough laughs and make things lively, and at the same time, he can also use his understanding of the original setting to make the characters in the original work have many different and interesting chemical reactions [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Very abstract, very funny, and Hikari Uchiha is so cute [admiration], and Hikaru Takuai [laughing evilly], although Hikaru is always persecuted, and is all kinds of annoying by Konoha Noshi and the big bond, it is very enjoyable to watch. The unofficial history in this book can only be said to be invincible. It is more logical and abstract than the original work. It is updated quickly and is awesome! [Laughing evilly][like]

I have seen that there are too few latest ones, but for now it is worthy of five stars. I have been using Tomato for so many years, and this is the seventh five-star book. So far, it has enough ideas, clear enough work, and a lot of foreshadowing. I'll come back and correct it if I see any points deducted later, I hope it won't happen. I saw chapter 227, which was the latest at that time, and I saved it until today. Now I have seen the latest chapter. Chapter 227 is a bit too scary. It seems that all the men except the protagonist have turned into copper. Although it is still funny, the physical discomfort is also very serious [awkward laugh]

I am very happy to give full marks. This novel has complex elements, but it is meant to be funny. There are some places that are very erotic. You heard me right, they are erotic. The novel is still very good, brothers [laughing evilly] @ ladderkeeper

Good book reviews are very helpful to the author. This book is not fast-tracked and does not require score protection. This book is very imaginative, contains a lot of interesting ideas, and is quite interesting for book lovers. It is worth reading.

So cool... So cool! I like the plot, the characters, the character interactions, and the emotions. This is simply the most enjoyable book I have ever read! ! ! I read the latest chapter within two days. I just hate that the author doesn't update too much. But I have some suggestions In other chapters of the protagonist, some characters have no role at all. For example, Xiaonan has a role only in the latest chapters. And Temari hasn't had much of a role recently. I personally like it. There are also feelings. Possessiveness is shown, but there is no such thing as closer intimacy. If Temari's tsundere's lap pillow and hugging Uchiha Hikaru count, Obviously, they all showed more or less possessiveness towards the protagonist, but they just didn't have that kind of more intimate... Behavior. I give you a kiss on the cheek or something like that. I feel so good when this little sweetness blends into the plot. I won't say anything and just start "doing" or whatever. I'll just kiss the snake directly. Hopefully as many as possible! ! ! Intimate interactions with female characters, such as more hugs or physical contact, writing about Hanabi, who is still a child, and touching her head. Then write about the shyness of the other party, and kiss on the cheek (without Hanabi, I am not a lolita fan, I personally prefer the girly type), etc. If I kiss directly, it feels like the progress is too fast.

Awesome. This is a book that a human could write! A brand new version that is absolutely incomprehensible to AI! [Cover face]

Such a rich plot is actually free, great! Very good! I have to eat again. After reading this book, I opened up a new world view. There is such a fat book, and there is also a book called White Snake. Go read it quickly and don't be blinded by his ratings. After you taste it, you will find that the world is so beautiful

Shuangwen, no chakra but absorbing natural energy to awaken the conceptual ability (jojo). It's very abstract and funny, and it's also very strategic. It's serious about reforming the ninja world and preparing for the war against Otsutsuki. The abstract imagination is also quite big. Some memes are reused so much that I get tired of them. There are several female ninjas (Teimi Terumi, Kurotsuchi, etc.) Who are somewhat ambiguous, and the one with clear arrows is Xiaoguang.

A very interesting Naruto novel, full of laughter, similar to the strategy development type, in which a person who comes back from the future controls the development of things and affects the fate of many people. I hope there won't be any plot where the protagonist becomes so strong that he defeats everything or is on par with others. I hope even more that the protagonist will fight as a counselor and use the people around him to control everything. There shouldn't be any future people coming back. The protagonist should either be unique or forget about it.

The content is quite humorous and interesting, and it has rarely been updated so far. The content is probably from the Boruto period, traveling back to the Naruto period, starting from the Akatsuki organization's troubles, and now it has been updated to kill the alien Momo Otsutsuki and Boruto who traveled back in time.

Shenjin [palms face], but I laugh very happily. I have been a bookworm for eight years. There are few fan fictions that can make my eyes light up (black). The imagination is not big, but the abstract content is combined very well, but the number of words is still a bit short [laughing]

Wonderful! Let's see how it develops in the future. I always feel that Ming Zuo will be together, and Bai Mo will unify the ninja world and take in many beautiful wives [laughing evilly] [like]

The setting of the protagonist traveling through time twice is really eye-catching, and the plot is also very normal. At least I didn't see any too big poisonous points. Every plot is very interesting and full of imagination. But there are only more than eighty chapters at present, and many exciting points have not been revealed yet. We will check it out when it is updated later. If it can maintain this level, this fanfic is indeed worth reading.

The plot is the most interesting and fascinating of all the Naruto novels I have read. At first, the cover was too ordinary and I didn't even think about clicking it. I found it to be okay. The only problem is that there are too many characters, which makes some characters marginalized. Sometimes the protagonist has no sense of existence, but overall it's pretty good.

It was so much fun, and some of the plots made me laugh so hard that my stomach hurt. As for the emotional line, I feel that there is not much description in this aspect at the moment, and it does not affect the viewing. In short, it is a good novel, which is very attractive for me to read.

It was quite fun, very funny, but the plot progressed very slowly at the end, and I was going crazy. I felt like my brain was not normal when I was reading it, and it felt weird when I read other books. In the end, I ran back and continued reading, and I was assimilated by the strange thinking mode.

This book contains the following contents / Renshou / Furui / Gangjiao / Nanliang / Nantong / Aluminum Copper, and those who like to read the unofficial history of Konoha can enjoy it.

In a sense, I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long time. It's better to be happy alone than to be happy (that's the word because I was influenced by the novel). To be happy alone is not as good as to be happy together. Come and read it and feel the joy.

You are this author [like], you really have no creative bottleneck at all. I admire you so much. You are the only one I admire after reading novels for so long. You have brought out the charm of writing to the fullest, but your works are too few. I hope there will be more new anime and fan works in the future, and Pirates can also try it.

Yes, it's very good. It's a Naruto fanfic that can be put together with Dave Lushu Ming. It's very crazy, it doesn't follow the main plot, and it has a novel storyline. I didn't have any trouble listening to the latest chapter. I can give it five stars and I will make a follow-up review after it is finished [Thoughts]

I have nothing to say about this book. I have a lot of imagination. Especially when the object of the reincarnation of grains flew towards Obito's eyes, I knew that this book would be a great success. I give it five stars, bro [face covering] [smile]

It's not bad. The plot is very compact and not sloppy at all. I guess it won't be too long.

It's beautiful, very funny, and the plot is top-notch. Although the protagonist plans to resurrect Kaguya, there is no way to prevent her from betraying him, but it is still a little poisonous to plan to do so. It is expected that Boruto's combat power will be weakened in favor of Shippuden, but it is okay to watch it as a private design. In short, it is highly recommended.

How can I put it, the main plot and character descriptions are quite good, and it is considered top-notch among Naruto fanfics, but there is one thing in it that contains a lot of, um, a bit vulgar jokes. There are some who are quite upright, and maybe they are girls or something, and they make fun of women a little too often. I don't mean to start a fight, it's just that I personally think these look a bit uncomfortable, but if you ignore these battles of wits, everything is pretty good to watch. If you can laugh at all these things as fun, this book will definitely be a good read. That's probably it.

I think the core of this book is not about the protagonist showing off his invincibility, but the various historical structures that make people's eyes dark. Recently, the taste has become a bit dull. I suggest the author to add more plots like the limited monthly reading [crazy] [crazy] "You are no longer a slutty demon fox, you are Konoha Uzumaki Menma, my wife, the Nine Lamas!" 👆 "Let's go, Jiu Lama!"👉