Bengtie's Character Is Being Developed

It's super good-looking, the characters are very relevant, a lot of Bentie's little knowledge is correct, and it doesn't overwhelm the combat power. It looks really cool, and the writing style is also very good. Those who like to read Bentie linkage articles must not miss it (but those who like howling why not a star should not get involved [punch out]). It can be seen that the author must have put his heart into writing the article. Come on, madam, I will always support you! ! [Love]

I think this fan fiction is delicious. First of all, it is worth mentioning that the character design is very well established. It can be said that it stands out from the rest in this place where the crowd of people are dancing. It is particularly valuable to be able to establish the character while maintaining the identity of the characters in the original world without taking them as who they are in the original world. Anyone who has read history knows that many fan creators are belittling the image of the original characters to establish the authority of a certain character, and there are many ways of treating the original characters as anything they are. This kind of history is something that even historians of fiction would dig up and complain about it! But there is nothing in this novel that I feel is very authoritative. I think many people will like this kind of creative technique, but the ratings are a bit sluggish. Of course, there are some small shortcomings, that is, the writing style is not rich enough, but this is normal. This is a golden house that can only be built with countless writing skills and experience. The author still has a lot of room for improvement.

I've been following this book for a long time, and I've always wanted to read the Bengtie comprehensive comic series. It's a pity that most of them are fooled. And it's rare to be from the Pioneer Archmaster. Each unit has a main character. Quite interesting. Not OOC. I just feel mixed emotions about the copy of Conan recently. I was very happy to see it. I also prefer Conan. I read a lot of Conan fanfics. But the recent Conan linkage incident is very. . . Still linking up at such a sensitive time. It's hard to break. . .

Very nice! At present, Qingque's evaluation of Xiaoqiong is not OOC at all. This is how Xiao Qiong is loved by everyone, and I am super looking forward to Xiao Qiong's subsequent appearances! The description of Aojaku is also great, and the interactions with Dazai and the others are also very touching. All CB members are really sweet.

The writing style is higher than the rating of the book. It is very good. The literary field does feel a bit watered down and the plot is a bit delayed. The author listened to the advice and started to improve it later. Curse Back to the World is very well written👍🏻. Good book, recommended! (＾ω＾)👍🏻 I read two books on the same day and wrote them down. The first one should have been rated for the other one [face covering]. The writing and characterization of this book are very good. Normally, five-star characters appear more often, but the author wrote Green Bird Hook who is very charming (of course the character itself is also great). I was originally targeting Fumino and Juhui, but then I finished reading the Conan part because of Hook. Hook is really a lively and cute but not bearish and great kid ✧ෆ◞◟˃̶̤⌄˂̶̤⋆biubiu

The author's writing style is as stable as ever, and the plot is well connected. But take a precaution in advance. In the article, Xi Lian is called Alicia's name and it is acceptable. It is a very good fanfic.

Looks good! The characters are not OOC at all, and each character is well portrayed. Looking forward to the plot of other worlds, especially the return of Lelouch and Ye Qing. It's beautiful, I'm looking forward to it [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Yes, there are no big problems so far, and we look forward to the follow-up (there are many worlds that we are very interested in, such as the world of Xiaobai and Aqiong. This is a combo that we are passionate about!)

It's good-looking, and the rare characters are basically not so OOC. The author also has a very practical understanding of the characters. The comprehensive comics and Bengtie Universe are also very reasonable (and the unit drama starts with four-star characters instead of blindly promoting popular characters, which is a good review). The plot is more of a daily style, with a steady flow. If there is any regret, it is not very good at leaving hooks. It can be improved and written better. However, I feel that there are relatively few people rating it, so I'll give it a try first.

There are no loopholes in the plot, and the pace is relatively gentle. It does not overwhelm the combat power, but it does not have the kind of speed-running plot that is pushed all the way. The characters are closer to a state of being confident. The current plots of the three characters are very reasonable and can be understood even if you have not read the original work. What I personally feel is the most powerful is the integration of world views, which perfectly explains the connection between the Bengtie universe and the world of the original work. (The Conan part is really amazing... It can actually explain Mingke's various bugs and the more he writes, the more he writes, and it is also connected to the Yu Gongan case) The current scene between Fate and Bai E is also very exciting. The trio of saviors travel together in Xueyuan City... It's beautiful (peaceful) and if you like the protagonist and Xiao Bai Xiaolian, don't miss it!

So pretty! ! ! ! So pretty! ! ! ! I will recommend all my friends to read this book. What did the author add to the text... I enjoyed reading it. The writing is very close to the characters. The loose but powerful feeling of Super Fish King Qingque is so well written. The childishness of Lord Hook and the great strength of his small body were also written very well. The fight scene with Kogoro, who was reliable at the critical moment, was very enjoyable for me. Bai E's writing is even more intense. He seems to have let go of the pain of the past with his sunny and cheerful appearance, but in his heart he still can't forget the eternal reincarnation and the pain and regret of hurting everyone countless times. He is even more like ptsd to the pioneers. You are our hope, partner 😭 😭😭I was devastated when I lost the Trail Blazers. Xi Lian is even more cute. The interaction between Mi Mi and the Trail Blazers is humorous and playful, and he is also strong and reassuring. When I think of having a big trump card, my heart becomes lighter. If we don't sing, we have already changed the world with one cry, which is refreshing and beautiful. It's just that after reading it for a long time, I feel it's a bit boring. Currently, the author has opened a new volume and updated it on Huo Huo and Ju Hui, and my enthusiasm has been aroused again. Now I feel depressed if I can't see the author's updates😭😭😭😭

Oh my God, I finally saw an article about Qing Que. I really like it. And there is nothing very OOC in the article so far. The teacher is great. I hope there will be a chance for Qing Que to appear again [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

At first glance, it is authentic, and it is judged to be a masterpiece worth seeing. First of all, the author has carefully reviewed the setting of Bengtie and the drama, which is very worthy of recognition; secondly, the restoration of the characters is very comfortable to watch; thirdly, the story is of a shortcomings making up style, and the role distribution is reasonable; finally, the dimensionality reduction attack of Fateway is not overpowering. Even because I have watched too many fans, I am not used to seeing Mr. Que being so strong. All in all, it's to my liking. Come on, author.

I don't know why so few people have watched it. It's really wonderful. The author grasps it very well, the logic is smooth, the characters are well grasped, and the writing style and writing skills are also top-notch. It's a very delicious work [Adored]

The story line of the first Qingque developed relatively slowly, and it may not be in line with the fast-food style of the general environment. However, it can be felt that the author is becoming more and more skilled as he writes. Bai E's FSF is also well grasped, and there is basically no big deviation from the original work.

It's really good to read. I want to watch the author write for a lifetime. This book will never be finished. It's so enjoyable to read without stressing the fighting power. Please, the author must keep reading. This is my lifelong request!

I think this is the best one of the same type. It's not messy, just bland, but overall it's okay.

Five stars are dedicated to Dark Hook-sama and Miko (because I haven't watched the other series and I don't have any enthusiasm to follow new ones now). I have only watched Detective Conan Doraemon Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba in Japan. Quietly woo woo: It would be nice if the Mingke chapter was longer woo woo woo

The details are correct, and the words and deeds are in line with the character. It looks good.

Anyway, I've finished reading the first copy. It's very good. I like it very much. Although it hasn't come out yet, I like it quite a lot and it's very reasonable. The author doesn't want me to lower the rating. I'm very strict (not that strict, as long as there is no cuckold fetish or any messy things like the collapse of the three worlds).

The faults are not hidden, this article is considered to be the best in this genre, and a personal highlight is that the author was influenced by the readers and did not follow his own plan and wrote what the readers wanted to read, because what I wanted to read was what the author wanted to express. Although, I still like it, because I feel that the author is very attentive, and he is also good at writing, and his writing style is also relatively good. He is still an amateur author, so he should be encouraged, because I like serious authors. I can see that the author has checked a lot of information, and is not the kind of perfunctory and clinging to stereotypes. People, so 1+1 minus, I have watched 124 so far, and I haven't had time to watch Three yet, because I have already watched it for a day, and I can really tell that I am in a hurry to engrave the world line. I still hope that the author can completely write the story in his mind. In short, the four stars encourage the author to continue to work hard!

If the first Bungou Stray Dogs World was just beautifully written, then the second Conan World is enough for me to praise. The most powerful thing about this book is the harmonious integration of the original worldview and Bengtie. It's a pity that there is still room for writing about Conan's world view but it was cut off. However, it would be a bit long if it were not cut off. I have not read the original work of Bungou Stray Dogs, but I feel that the ending of this copy is a bit hasty (?) All in all, the content I've written so far looks good and I highly recommend it.

It's very interesting. Come on, the author. I'm looking forward to the sambo and the black bullets. It's really exciting to see the happy uncle rescuing the little girl.

I came to see Xiancao not long ago, but the characters are not broken, and the plot itself is reasonable enough. This is enough. It is hard to imagine that such a high-quality product is only available now. Not much to say, the author deserves five stars.

Delicious [Blowing Kiss] rating shouldn't be so low The author's personal setting comfortably blends the world view of Bengtie with the original story. None of the characters are OOC, and it is obvious that the writing style is improving. Moreover, there is not much connection between each volume, which also allows skipping a volume without affecting the reading (fate's world view is so complicated...) The little raccoon is super cute [shy] The author who has read the text basically writes pretty good things [laughing]

It is actually a very good article, but it requires patience to read it slowly. I have to say that I don't understand many worlds very deeply, and I can't do Double Chef Ecstasy, but the author's writing style makes me feel the charm of the story itself that corresponds to the world.

It looks good. The details are picked out very well. The details that I didn't care about slowly emerged. The character design is well grasped. No matter it is the plot, characters or main characters in the unit, there is no OOC place. Madam is so cool. I asked you if there is a demon slaying scene [blowing kiss]

It's so nice [Sending my heart] None of the characters are OOC at the moment, so please do your best! [Like][Like] Come on, it looks great! ! [Like] The plot is reasonable and the characters are very consistent with the original work! ! ! [Adoration] (It turns out that listening to a book does not count as time [what])

The subject matter is pretty good, and Trailblazer has good reviews for the male protagonist. I haven't watched Fumino before, so I'm a bit confused about the others, but I can still give good reviews. Finally, I want to say that I want to watch Kamen Rider World.

The connection between Star Dome Train and each world is pretty good, but each world is basically better than the first one, and the ending is weird, mainly due to magic changes and the like, but it is generally okay, at least there are no regrets, ⌯ᵔᗜᵔ⌯ಣ